Poetry and short stories :) Feel free to post your stuff

[Exia]

Wow, that...that's deep. Makes me want to cry, I can /feel/ the emotion coming off of these words... It's a hauntingly beautiful piece of literature, you should definitely publish it.

[Mz. Hyde]

Thanks :)
I can see a few spelling mistakes that I need to fix, but otherwise I would love it to be published..
But I can't see that happening lol

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I can feel your heart beat through the darkness
As I hold it in my hand
The others need not know how fragile your life is
Need not learn the terror
The responsibility
Of holding two lives in the spindly palm at my own, withered fingertips

And if I jump
So do you

But they need not know, my love
Because the day I leave you
Is the day that the world crumbles
To tiny, shattered shards

Pieces of you, of me
of all the little people
Their lives
Their memories

I will love you until
The end
My end

For my fingers grow weaker with each passing day
Like the harsh, weatered autumn leaves
And the day that they contain
Our secrets no more

I'm not going to be yet ready
To give up on you.

[Exia]

<3 I love your writing. And why can't you publish it? I'm certain that if you /do/ send it to a publishing company they will no doubt publish it for you.

[Mz. Hyde]

:)
I'm not sure about that..
And besides, I'm pretty sure it would cost me at least some money, which I really don't have..

[Exia]

Hmm, well. I hope one day you get the chance to publish it It's very good.

[Mz. Hyde]

Thanks;)
I'll post more soon, I have a nosy little sister trying to read my work lol

[Яɛvɛиɢɛ.]

Some days I feel like a leaf
Falling slowly from a tree
Never knowing where I'll land
Or how rough the journey down shall be
The only thing I do know
Is that no matter what the wind blows my way
I will never give up
Because once I reach the ground
All things are possible....
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Lol.....that poem failed a bit, but oh well....

[Gothic_Wolf]

That's an intresting way to put a poem I like it

[A Day To Forget]

..Listen to me..

Please don't die,
For it will only make me cry.
I know that you will always be there,
But to you it isn't very fair.
Sometimes I just don't care.
But then I wish someone was there......
To listen to me cry.

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I dont think it's very good...
I was just feeling sad so I wrote a thing.
I don't think it even qualifies for a poem.

[happy-thump]

Dead Alive, your amazing. You should really try and get that published.
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Let me play to you.
Let me try to tell you.
Nothing and everything.

Let me replay it.
Over and over.
Let me listen.

Let me be free.
Let me set them free.
Let them be free.

Cause thats my living.
Giving and showing.
This is my life.

Let them see.
What I need.
What I want.

Let them be.
Just like me.
Let them fly.

Let me fly.
They need me
more than you do.

Cause this is my life.
This is my calling.
Showing them the way.

Let me go.
Stop the selfishness.
Let us go.

I don't need you anymore.