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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Intense Disaster » Sat Mar 19, 2011 8:29 am

@iVanillaMango: Thanks! I take pride in my poetry.

Stars glimmer in the night sky
The moon shinning down upon us
We lay hand in hand
Skin touching skin
Something else glimmers beside us
It's sharp, yet dull
Beautiful, yet deadly
A blade shines with blood.
Stars glimmer in the night sky
The moon shinning down upon us
We lay heart to heart
But, our hearts no longer beat
For they would not allow us what we wanted
All we wanted was to be together
You Are The Result Of 4 Billion Years Of Evolutionary Success.
Act Like It.

I didn't change, you just never knew me.

Whenever I find the key to success, someone changes the lock.

My family is temperamental. Half temper and half mental.

I'm not a toy, you can't just drop me when you get bored.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby iVanilla » Sat Mar 19, 2011 8:39 am

Lets be poem buddies! lol XD))

In the dusty room
lays a dusty guitar.
In the dusty guitar
lays a dead man.
What's new is old.
So the new man
becomes old.
The old dont stop
'till they drop.
He is a fighter,
sleeping in a dusty guitar
in a dusty room
hanging in the threads,
of a dusty mind.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Fork » Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:52 pm

Cant you seee?

Can’t you tell
Can’t you see
This living hell
made by me

Cant you part
you lifeless ghoul
You broke my heart
you broke my soul

Cant you see
Its to much
This hell by me
and so and such

I’m sorry friend
I’m sorry kid
I’m not here to offend
I closed to lid

The life I live
the pain I feel
I won’t give
I’m a wheel

A wheel of pain
a wheel of shame
I’m called lame
I have no fame

I’m not who you think I am
I’m not here to give in
Is this your plan
You cut off my fin

I’m a shark sinking
to the ocean bottom
clinking
as my my chains go by

Cant you see
Cant you tell
This is me
in my living hell

Depths of my life:

Look at me.
Look through my soul.
You find something interesting.
You might find a ghoul.

Look through my eyes.
Look through my heart.
Look to the depths.
We have to part.

This is my life.
My love.
The way god made me.
I just need a knife.

I cut my skin.
I watch the blood.
I smile as my pain goes away.
I watch the flood.

I kinda feel bad.
I kinda feel sad.
I kinda want to be angry.
or even mad.

Look through my soul.
Look through my heart.
I’m sorry my friend.
We have to part.

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Postby Intense Disaster » Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:28 pm

(@iVanilaMango: Sure XD @iSparki: That's awesome!)

My black curls fall down past my shoulders
Spiraling downward, almost getting darker as they go
Much like my life
My green eyes shine with danger
Warning you, but enticing you
Much like my words
My pale skin warns of death
Challenging even the Reaper
But, yet you still come
My red lips promise pleasure
Full and plump
But, they are dipped in poision
I'm the Devil's spawn
An angel of darkness
I'm your worst nightmare
And, your most treasured dream
I'm everything you want
But, nothing that you need
Beware of me
But, never fear me
For I am only what your mind wants me to be
I'm fake, but your mind makes me so real
You Are The Result Of 4 Billion Years Of Evolutionary Success.
Act Like It.

I didn't change, you just never knew me.

Whenever I find the key to success, someone changes the lock.

My family is temperamental. Half temper and half mental.

I'm not a toy, you can't just drop me when you get bored.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Fork » Sun Mar 20, 2011 2:33 am

Thank you Maximum Ride!
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby iVanilla » Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:15 am

@ Maximum Ride-- I was just kidding. Im not as good as you guys.

The puppy dances,
Just like the bear.
Throw the dart,
dont miss the mark.
The target dances,
all around the frustrated master.
You've missed your mark,
the bear wont dance
the puppy either.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby .:Transferring:. » Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:53 am

((Wow guys, nice work! I still have no inspiration, but I'll try!))


Spring
Is Here
Flowers blooming
Saplings growing
Wind hurtling though the tree tops.
Dashes and dances
And Sprinkles of rain
Pitter patter
Upon the roof.
A Rainbow, shining through the clouds
Smell of Rain
Still hanging in the air.
First robin of spring,
Hopping along the field
In hopes of catching food.
A girl
Staring out the window
Just hoping, waiting, wishing
For the time
Her lovely Spring, takes her away
Away, away, into the world
Of daisies, lilies, robins and rain.
Where sun shines bright
Every day
Where taunting and teasing
Is washed away
In this world of Spring
This life of Spring.
Now, she takes her coat and boots
Stepping outside
In trance-like fashion
She spreads her hands, her arms, her legs
She spreads her wings, and flies away
Nothing,
But a memory.
This, is the world of Spring.
Surfer Chica
Out of the water, I am nothing.

Surfing is for life.

It's like the mafia, once you're in,
you're in.

It's all about where your mind's at.

When I surf, I tend to think the
world ain't such a bad place after all.
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Re: Random poetry and short stories :D please post your stuf

Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:05 pm

wow u guys r so good...
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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Postby Mz. Hyde » Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:13 pm

thats a good poem bella :D
r u sure that u didnt have inspiration?:D

watch everyone
bowing their heads
full of sorrow and sadness
they are the lucky ones
they cannot see
who is there watching them
silently
filling the world with their tears
the ones
that they thought
were lost forever
the ones
that they are mourning
with heads bowed down
and full of sorrow
they dont know how lucky they are
that they are not
the ones being mourned
a bodiless soul
forever
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?


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Postby .:Transferring:. » Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:15 pm

Nice poem! Huh...maybe I did have some inspiration. It's spring break for me, and I also just read Shiver. BEST BOOK EVER! Hehe! :)
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Out of the water, I am nothing.

Surfing is for life.

It's like the mafia, once you're in,
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It's all about where your mind's at.

When I surf, I tend to think the
world ain't such a bad place after all.
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