Chapter 7 finally released!
Sorry about the wait!
Sorry about the wait!
Dragons of Zaphar [Discussion Thread]
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Re: Dragons of Zaphar [Discussion Thread]
by S0ul Eater » Thu Feb 09, 2017 4:12 pm
chapter 8 has been released!
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Re: Dragons of Zaphar [Discussion Thread]
by S0ul Eater » Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:32 pm
Ah! Chapter 9 has finally been released! Sorry for the wait!
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Re: Dragons of Zaphar [Discussion Thread]
by Ranger of the North » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:41 pm
Oh dear! The gang's certainly in a spot of trouble now!
A few tips? I noticed you sometimes switch tenses, and new 'patches' of speech need to be indented c: The rules for new paragraphs are: new speaker, new topic, new place, new time. c;
But good job! I look forward to more c:
A few tips? I noticed you sometimes switch tenses, and new 'patches' of speech need to be indented c: The rules for new paragraphs are: new speaker, new topic, new place, new time. c;
But good job! I look forward to more c:
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