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Postby voittoisa » Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:10 am

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"Mama, guess what!" exclaimed a young Law, only known as Anya at the time. Her tail flicked side to side and her ears twitched. Her eyes sparkled at what she was going to tell her mother, Queen Elise.

Anya had witnessed yet another public trial, held by none other than her father, King Elijah. Every so often there would be a trial, trying to prove one guilty of a crime. Her father always assumed someone was guilty and never tried to prove innocence. Currently, the recent trial was trying to prove that a common peasant had stolen food from the royal family.

She remembered all the details. Anya had sat on the stage, her eyes watching the crowd of people. Some were spitting words at the poor boy, only about Anya's age. Others were giving him compassionate looks, but none would say anything; no one wanted to slight the king. Anya listened to her father question the boy, spouting out false information. But of course, who could do anything? He was the king after all.

Next to her, Anna had a look of disgust on her face, the complete opposite of Anya. Anna found her father's cruel trial sickening. Anya didn't understand her sister's view point. Yes, it seemed a little unfair, and she would personally have let the boy go free. But it was their father! He was suppose to be a model of what they were suppose to be! What they should strive to be!

Anna didn't understand, Anya thought. Anya thought her father was a nice king, a little unjust at time, but overall good. And that's why she wanted to be like him..Well, not exactly. She wanted to bring peace to the land by punishing criminals and the like, just like Elijah. Anya would just do it a little differently.

Regardless, she found that watching him would help her in the future if she were to be like her father. She watched the way his eyes bore into the boy and how his stance was tall. He didn't stutter or hesitate at all. Anya sat up straight in her chair, just like how her father stood with his back straight as well. She felt someone staring at her, and her father had glanced, giving a small nod of approval.

Anya beamed and payed even more attention. When the trial finished, the boy had been sentenced to life in prison over a loaf of bread. Everyone was dismissed.

And here they were, Anya's knees on the ground and her torso sprawled across her mother. "Papa finished the trial! The boy was guilty apparently," she said, her voice held slight doubt, but smiled regardless.

Her mother frowned and pet her hair. She took her daughter's face into her hands and she spoke gently. "You love your father don't you?"

Anya nodded the best she could with her face being squished softly.

"I know you want to be like him, and that's fine. But promise me something, please Anya. Don't be so harsh! Not everyone deserves the same treatment your father gives."

Anya frowned. Was her mother saying she didn't agree on her father's decision? She nodded softly, her eyes no longer gazing into her mother's, but instead were directed towards the side.

She stood up and held her arms behind her back and bowed at her mother before leaving the room. Anya loved her papa. She was going to follow in his footsteps, one way or another.
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Postby voittoisa » Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:13 am

"Is this dress fine, Princess Anna?"

"It's lovely, thank you," Anna said to the maid, her hands ran across her dress as the maid finished tying a large bow at the back of the dress. The maid clasped her hands together and cooed,"My my, don't you look lovely!"

Indeed Anna did look lovely. The dress she wore was full of lace and bows, the colors matching perfectly and staying true to the colors of their kingdom. "Now for the finishing touch," the maid said, placing her crown onto the top of her short hair.

Anna smiled softly. She looked exactly like her mother, from her eyes all the way down to her tail. She crossed her arms in front of her and turned towards the maid. "Is mother in the throne room?" Anna asked, her voice gentle as always.

The maid hesitated for a moment and bowed. "I believe so, however I am not sure. I could go check if you would like?" Obviously she was trying to not anger Anna. Luckily for her, Anna wasn't the type to get upset over small things like such.

Anna waved her hand dismissively and smiled. "It's quite alright, I can look myself. I set you free to do the rest of your duties." The maid nodded and left, leaving Anna by herself by the mirror. Anna spun around slowly, taking in the whole dress. She looked just like a queen. Anna slipped on her heels, gave herself a once-over once more and left the room. She walked down the corridor and passed her sister Anya's room.

Anya was talking to their father, though Anna wasn't sure about what. She didn't care, honestly. Her father was more of a brute than a king, or so she thought at least. Her mother, however, was perfect for the role of queen. Kind and honest her mother was, and Anna was exactly the same.

As Anna turned the corner, she nearly ran into a maid carrying a plate of tea. The maid immediately ducked her head down and started spouting apologizes. Anna frowned. She didn't want to be feared. She placed her hand on the maid's head and spoke,"It's quite alright, it was an accident after all. Don't worry about it." The maid lifted her head and a look of relief spread across it.

Anna liked that feeling. The feeling of giving happiness to others and giving the feeling of security and safeness. That's what she wanted for the kingdom, and so she vowed that when she became queen, she would fix her father's laws and make the royal family one to be loved, not feared.

After the maid had composed herself and continued walking down the hallway, Anna did as well. She entered the throne room where her mother sat. She was messing with the sleeve of her dress when she looked up to see her daughter walk in. Her mother gasped and stopped playing with her sleeve. "My my, don't you look pretty, Anna! Just like a queen."

Anna sat next to her mother, in her father's seat. Although she was worried about being caught by her father, she knew that he wouldn't come in without a reason. "That was my goal, yes. I'm going to be just like you."

Elise patted Anna's head and smiled. "You will rule graciously, will you not? With you and Anya ruling the kingdom, I know for sure you will make it a better place."

Anna beamed, her eyes sparkled slightly.

Suddenly, her father and Anya burst through the door. Anna sat up quickly and clasped her hands behind her back. Elise stood up, obviously startled and started speaking,"What is with the sudden entrance?"

Elijah huffed. "Grandfather has made his decision."

Elise gasped softly and frowned, glancing at a confused Anna and an equally confused Anya. Anna looked at both her father and her mother. Her mother looked disheartened while her father looked stern. "What do you mean? What did grandfather decide?"

Elise was about to speak, but Elijah cut her off,"You two are not going to be the next in line for the throne. You instead are next in line for judge duty."

And suddenly in that moment, Anna knew that her dreams had been shattered.
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Postby voittoisa » Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:53 pm

Law and Order and basically like police officers...except not really. It's similar though! Law and Order are in charge of what happens after someone were to..kick the bucket! They decide whether or not if you go to one place or the other, a good place and a bad place. They're very strict about their "job" and always study deeply and tediously about a person's background before deciding.

"Oh look at this, this person has stolen before. How tragic. But wait, they've also volunteered multiple times to shelters and soup kitchens. Put the goods and bads on a scale, Order, and see which weights to be heavier!" That's how they decide, normally. They take the goods and bads a person had done throughout their life and put it on a scale, of which they call "The Scale of Justice". If good weights heavier than bad, they have passed and are safe! If the bads weight heavier than the goods, well that's not exactly the best thing that can happen.

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Law and Order didn't pick their job. They didn't get to decide that this was what they were going to do. The job was passed down from generation to generation of the royal family. Law and Order were the next heirs. At first, Law was the only one excited about, being interested in justice ever since she was little. The interest stems from her father, who ruled with an iron fist, punishing those who deserved it and keeping strictly to the law of the land. Order, however, wasn't. Order didn't want to. She instead would have preferred to follow her mother's footsteps; to be queen. Order would have loved to rule the kingdom with her sister at her side. Obviously there were other plans for them. Order nearly refused to do it until her mother asked her to, and wanting to please her mother, Order took the job. She soon came to feel just as passionate about it as Law after the first few rounds.
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Postby voittoisa » Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:53 pm

Why Law and Order? wrote:When I saw these twins, my first thoughts were words that go together. Such as Right and Wrong, Left and Right, the such. I actually ended up going on Wikipedia and trying to find nice sayings that were as such. I had, as soon as I saw the twins, knew from the start that they were going to be creepy. I had thought of judgement day and everything with the like. I soon found Law and Order and thought it seemed perfect! It soon went from creepy to a more rounded story, and while the two may still seem creepy, it really strayed from the original idea.



Why do I want them wrote:I had an immediate connection with the twins as soon as I saw them. It doesn't help either that I invested so much time into relationships and found myself getting more and more attached the more I developed them. I like drawing, but usually I get bored halfway through, but not when I was drawing these two. I did multiple pieces at a time and didn't even feel tired. I felt I could have drawn and drawn and drawn! I have so many ideas and stories I want to write about these two!


Law's feelings on Order's disability wrote:When Order first became blind, she distanced herself from Order. Law didn't mean it in a harsh way, she was just afraid of saying something insensitive about her disability. It also annoyed her quite a bit how Order would often grasp at her to walk, and thus pushing Law even more to distance herself. When Order started to lock herself in her room and not come out, Law realized her mistake. However, she was too proud to do anything and decided to wait it out. When she found Order in the kitchen walking around freely, Law was quite shocked! When Order explained what Wrong did for her, she felt immediately upset. Law should have been the one to help her. She should have been there for her. Law apologized profusely and Order accepted the apology. Now, Law doesn't even realize Order is blind! Order walks so well with her cane (though she sometimes still grasps at her), Law doesn't even think about it!


Order's feelings on her disability wrote:Order's feelings on her new disability are indifferent. She misses being able to see, and when it first happened, she had gone into a depressive state. She felt useless and like she couldn't do anything on her own. Law didn't really help, considering she distanced herself from Order, afraid of offending her. Order fell into a depressive state and didn't go anywhere ever; she really couldn't without help. It was then her shadow, Wrong, who had come up with a way to help Order. Her shadow had turned itself into a cane, and presented itself to Order. Order appreciated the effort and decided to give it a go, and to her surprise, she felt a lot better being able to move around and about. Now, Order's feelings on it neutral. She isn't upset about it anymore and actually finds herself accepting it more and more each day.
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Postby voittoisa » Wed Jul 27, 2016 6:15 am

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