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Law and order

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 6:16 am

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hello, i'm proskandi and i will be
trying for both of these lovely dolls!
please ignore my horrible art and
mediocre writing, I know it isn't the
best, but I hope it is enough to
impress you! All art may go to the
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personality of Law

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:53 am

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Law is a very brash, loud, proud, and law-abiding doll. She is the exact embodiment of the law. Because of that, she is quite strict, very aggressive, and is very good at getting information out of people. Law is also unfair at times and has many flaws, just like the law. law is very ambitious and believes that innocent until proven guilty, though in some cases she has a feeling of guilty until proven innocent, which is where her unfairness buts in. Law is very blunt and will straight up tell you where you're going when you're being judged. She is a big risk-taker and has little to no fears, only scared of her sister's rage.

Law is the older of the two twins, by a mere hour. Because of this, she is very confident and likes to tease the younger about this, often using it against her as a way to do things instead of Order. Law likes to take charge and be IN charge! She is more of the leader type while her sister is a firm independent, preferring to be nether a leader nor a follower. Law is bossy and often tries to boss her sister and other dolls around, with success in some and failure in others.

Law strives off of respect, feeling good about herself whenever someone shows her clear respect. Because of this, she tries to be as kind as possible and tries to give off a friendly vibe. Law basically tries to earn respect, and she often gets it. Law sometimes finds herself going out of her way to get on everyone's good graces, tries to be the shoulder that anyone can come to cry on, and tries to be an all around good person; however, her duties will always come first, and if someone she liked were to come between them, she will cut ties.
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personality of Order

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:53 am

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Now Order, she is one opposite of Law. She, like Law, is strict, but in a different sense. She is very orderly and likes to keep the peace. She is usually silent and lets Law do all the talking. While Law's voice is rather loud and confident, hers is soft and gentle. She uses it to calm others and is very kind, not to gain anything, but that's just how she is. However, because of her soft and gentle nature, no one expects that when she yells or raises her voice, it's very screechy and ominous. It sounds like something of a monster. She usually yells to keep another in check, making her a feared doll. Despite being feared, she is not mean and has never really done anything to slight anyone other than use her voice to keep them in line.

Order is very knowledgeable about many things, especially other dolls. You may not ever even talk to her, not even once, and you can bet she knows you. She is the more logical of the twins, and being the younger, she is shorter. Order finds herself sometimes not being taken seriously, and because of this she can be very stern and voices her opinions very loudly. If she finds something you're doing to be wrong or dumb, she will tell you.

Order is blind in one eye, it is true. Her face was cracked. She is afraid of the crack growing bigger by her good eye blinking and moving about, so she keeps it closed. Because of this, she cannot see. Order is very clingy, afraid of tripping and cracking her face more, and so whoever she is with, regardless of their relationship status, she will hold onto them as she walks. Whenever she does have to walk alone, she uses her pen, where the stem of the pen can grow longer and she can use as a cane. The tip of the pen, however, is still sharp and leaves ink dots on the ground as she walks.
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use of their pens

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:54 am

the twins use their pens in different ways.

Law uses her pen to cut things. The tip of her pen is very sharp, sharper than Order's. She uses it to cut out paper, and then folds the paper into origami figures. The figures each represent something and she leaves them outside of other doll's rooms. It is up to the doll she leaves them to to interpret them. Law uses this also to see how they react. Guilty? Honored? Sad? Whatever it was, she reports to Order and Order writes it into the big book. Sometimes she writes little messages inside the paper for if the receiver opens them. They're often vague and similar to fortune cookie's messages.



Order uses her pen as a cane. As previously mentioned, the stem can grow long enough to use as a walking cane. It is also used as a weapon if needed for self defense. When the pen isn't long like a cane, she uses it to write down information of other dolls in a big book of information. The information are things such as general personality, crimes and relationships with others.
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how order cracked her face

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:55 am

Order's face has been cracked as long as she could remember. She was edited by a dollmaker, forming with her shadow and being found alongside her sister. The dollmaker took them in and decided to edit their features and design them some clothes. The dollmaker had finished Law and started on Order, where the dollmaker's younger sibling had asked to help! Obviously the younger was no professional, but the kind-hearted maker decided to let them try. All was well under the watch of the professional, but it wasn't enough. The younger sibling had accidentally created a crack by setting her down too hard, and the crack only got larger when they tried to fix it. Not only was her face cracked, but her horn cracked all the way up.

The dollmaker could fix tons of things; faces, clothes, and even missing limbs, but they could not fix any cracks. Instead they wove flowers over their cracked eye, created her dress, filed her bad horn down, and left it at that. Order has been blind in that eye ever since.


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extra information of law

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:56 am

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** Law and Order are originally from Norway. They are Norwegian and were transported to multiple areas before finally making their way to the Dollhouse. Because of this, they speak Norwegian and have heavy accents

** Law's shadow's name is Right!

** Law is left-handed and because of this, she often has ink smudged all over her hand from when she drags her hand across her writing.

** she is near-sighted and cannot see far away

** leaves notes all around her room and places she goes often as reminders for things she usually forgets about

** sometimes talks into her shoulder as if she has a walkie-talkie or whatever it is that police have to talk

** actually got walkie-talkies for her and Order to use, but Order refuses to partake in such a silly banter...they're literally right next to each other, why do you need walkie-talkies, Law??? Why???

** Law and Order also have more "normal names", but everyone just calls them Law and Order

** Law's normal name is Anya [Ahn-yah] Vik

** tugs on her sleeves when she is nervous

** "THE LAW DOES NOT CARE WHETHER YOU'RE A BOY OR A GIRL!" Law is attracted to both genders, bisexual
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extra information of order

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:56 am

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** Order's normal name is Anna [like Ah-Nah, the Frozen pronunciation] Vik

** Order's shadow's name is Wrong!

** she is very graceful and walks very quietly

** is kind of a clean freak, hates all the sticky notes that Law leaves around

** also a germaphobe, only allows affection from Law and her significant other

** heteromantic asexual

** finds things such as echo-location to be interesting. don't tell anyone, but she tried to use it once and she just ended up screeching in her room. her shadow was very disappointed

** likes long sleeves and big sweaters. she loves winter and fall and cold weather

** loves horror movies, especially the Shining (wink wink. if you get this ily)

** she keeps her nails painted, always painted and never plain

** the two are actually royalty, hence the crown on Law's horns and the jewel on Order's. it's kept a secret, not wanting to be treated differently, but if you ever wonder why they're so polite (despite Law's boisterous personalitiy), that's why.
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relationships

Postby voittoisa » Sat Jul 23, 2016 9:56 am

----- [ Dietfriend Grobenschiff and Marley Grobenschiff

Law and Order love the other two twins! It's nice being able to relate to another set of twins and whenever Law and Order are going to go out and do something, Marley and Dietfried are the first dolls to pop in their heads on who to invite. Sometimes there are small feuds about which set of twins are better, but in the end they decide that they're both equally amazing and grouped together they're the coolest group of dolls in the Dollhouse. (though really, Law and Order consider themselves to be the better twins whilst Marley and Dietfried think the same).



----- [ Castiel

Order and Castiel are friends. Law and Castiel are not. Order and Castiel will often at times just sit together in silence, Order practicing her writing while Castiel talks to the ghosts he attracts. Just the sheer presence of each other is enough. It's a friendly silence, a comforting one, and Order finds herself calling Castiel over just keep her company while Law is off doing something with Luke. Considering the both are blind, they both rely on their shadows when it's just the two of them. Order and Castiel's shadows are very close because of this, both being able to relate to their dolls condition.


----- [ Dan

How could Law and Order NOT be friends with Dan the partying man? While Law and Order aren't the type to go out partying every night, they occasionally get invited to go partying with Dan, to which they usually accept. The next morning usually leads with them taking a whole day to rest as the night before apparently got a little too extreme for them! Law would always leave a little origami bunny in front of Dan's door to his room in the dollhouse to represent his shadow. Think of it as an appreciation gift.


----- [ Luke Adams

Law and Luke are closer to each other than Order and Luke. In all honesty, Order finds Luke kind of annoying and whenever he comes over (which is frequent), she goes out with Chris or the other twins, Marley and Dietfried. Law and Luke are similar to two peas in a pod, both very excitable and very confident. Luke is like a police dog, helping Law with her antics.


----- [ Nasake

Nasake, Law, and Order do not have a good relationship. Think of them as enemies. Nasake is an antagonist, and Law and Order like to see themselves as the protagonist. Because of this, Law and Order often go out of their way to try and pin Nasake on things in one form or the other. It just has to be Nasake. He's not a good person! Or at least, that's Law and Order's reasoning as to why Nasake was the one who left the fridge door open in the kitchen.



----- [ Chris

WHOOO BOOY! You're in for a treat with THIS relationship. Chris and Order are very close friends, Chris considering Order to be one of a younger sister and is very protective. That sounds nice, yes, but you know who else is exactly like that? Law. Law and Chris always butt heads and argue over who is the better "older sibling". They once even had a mini olympic over who's better. It ended in a tie and ever since they've tried to one-up each other. Order has tried to stop them, but it's never worked. At this point, Order just lets it happen and watches with a lost look on her face as the two go at it.


----- [ Rebecca

Law and Order are very fond of Rebecca, with their similar interests. Considering Law and Order love the, well, the law, the three clicked instantly. Whenever Rebecca came up with a "crime", Law and Order would come running to help Rebecca figure out the suspects. While Law and Order aren't as extreme as Rebecca, they do enjoy joining her from time to time. With Rebecca sometimes randomly coming out of no where and dragging them off to crimes and asking their opinions, Law and Order often leave the door to their room in the Dollhouse open for anyone.
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Law and Order's relationship

Postby voittoisa » Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:09 am

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law and Order are really close. Like, really really close. Ever since they were created, the two felt an immediate bond and vowed to stay together. Law is very protective, taking on the ""older"" sibling role very well. She likes to fuss over Order sometimes, despite Order telling Law she's fine and doesn't need to be swaddled like a three year old. If you're friends with Law, you're friends with Order and vise versa; they are a package deal, sorry bud! The two are nearly conjoined at the hip without the actual conjoining!

The two have a very special bond. Whenever one twin is upset, almost like magic the other knows. They don't understand how it happens, but it does. So whenever Law feels sad and wants to cry, even if they're rooms apart, Order would know immediately and come and comfort her. It wasn't like the other felt sad when the other was, they just always feel their stomach drop and they know what the cause is.

Surprisingly, Law and Order do not share a room. Mostly due to privacy reasons and whenever one wants to be alone. This often leads to Law come crawling to Order's room, asking to "spend the night". Don't tell anyone, but Law secretly is a huge scardy cat and uses a cute nightlight at night. Whenever they have a "sleepover", they usually sit on Order's bed in their pajamas and talk. Law will turn on music and force Order to dance, which she will join in, the two having fun until Law had calmed down from her scare.

Like most siblings, Law and Order do have quarrels every once in a while. They're usually caused by work or simple disagreements like what to have for dinner or who to hang out with. Whenever this happens, it's usually Order who apologizes, as she's the one to realize that why they're fighting is stupid. Order is able to admit that's she's wrong while Law is too proud to do so. In the end, the two will hug it out and go out to do something to make it all better.

They're so sweet.
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story #1

Postby voittoisa » Sun Jul 24, 2016 10:10 am

pop!

silence.

pop pop!

the sound of bubble wrapping being popped kept sounding around the box as Order tried to push the wrapping off of her. Law and Order were being shipped...again. This time the handler thoughtfully put bubblewrap around Order so her face would not crack anymore. Now currently the box had stopped moved for quite some time and the two dolls just sat there, waiting for it to be opened.

"I wonder where we are this time," crowed Law, her hands pressed against the dark brown of the cardboard box with a grin on her face. "I hope that some old detective ordered us to keep in his office! Or or maybe some little girl who's on her way to being an agent. Wouldn't that be so neat, Order?"

The other didn't reply, and only the sound of a pop was heard. Order made a soft grunting noise and she finally poked through the wrapping and proceeded to drag herself out of it. She dusted off her dress and clamped her hands behind her back, her mouth a small smile. "That would be something, wouldn't it be?" answered Order in a soft voice.

Law walked over to the empty bubble wrap and messed around with it until it was in a position where Law could sit on it. She plopped down, hearing one or two pops and sighed, leaning her head against the wall of the box. "That would be something. I'm just glad we're together, Anna."

Order's head perked up in the direction of Law's voice. She never used her real name unless she was really happy or content. Her small smile turned into a wide one and she lifted her shadow into the air and then shook it down, making the stem grow long. Order used the now cane shadow to maneuver her way over to Law, the bottom of her shadow popping all the bubbles that it hit with it's sharp end. "We will always be together, Anya."

Suddenly, the two heard voices from outside the box.

"What do you think's inside the box, Marley?" asked a rather loud and excited sounding voice. Another replied with a less enthusiastic and more monotone voice,"Well, why don't we open it and find out, then?"

Light flooded the box as it was opened, a hole the perfect size for a doll was ripped into the wall. The doll named Marley scanned the box and nearly missed Law and Order before her eyes widened. "Luke, there are more dolls in here."

Luke instantly lit up, his ears it in the air and before Marley could tell him to get them a room, he ran into the box and jumped on the two. "Hi there! My name's Luke, and welcome to the Dollhouse! It may be a lot to take in at first, but I promise you it's great here! We have tons of things to do and many other dolls like you, and you, and me, and Marley! And I-" he was cut off by Order placing her hand over his mouth.

"The Dollhouse? More dolls like us? Are you being serious?" Order asked as Luke shook his head vigorously up and down.

Law glanced at Order, and while Order cannot truly see, she glanced at Law with a knowing smile.

"This is going to be our home."
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