the dog in the night

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the dog in the night

Postby tooru » Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:47 am

        an entry for a short story comp c:

        plot: someone has kidnapped the princess
        pov: the guard dog
        wc: limitless


            "There were once two sisters
            who were not afriad of the dark
            because the dark was full of the other's voice
            across the room,
            because even when the night was thick
            and starless
            they walked home together from the river
            seeing who could last the longest
            without turning on her flashlight,
            not afraid
            because sometimes in the pitch of night
            they'd lie on their backs
            in the middle of the path
            and look up until the stars came back
            and when they did,
            they'd reach their arms up to touch them
            and did."
                - jandy nelson


        xxOne bed in the room was occupied, the other lay barren and empty. The princess lay sleeping in the taken bed, breath being inhaled and exhaled slowly, chest rising and falling with each of these simple actions. The dog lay at the foot of her magnificent bed alert and aware, cautious of everything that dared make a sound. The other bed belonged to the princess's sister. Her sister had been missing for years, and it seemed inevitable that she would never be found, at least not alive, but the princess refused to have the bed taken away as she kept clinging onto shreds of desperate hope. Unfortunately, the straws she was grasping at would never yield any results. The dog had been placed in the room after this unfortunate incident, picked by the princess herself out of a handful of others. She was a female, a fine German Shepard, and her coat consisted of long and course black fur. Her eyes were the colour of recently ripened hazelnuts. She knew her job was to protect the princess to the best of her ability - no, even better than the best of her abilities.

        Her large ears twitched in recognition of a sound, head turning towards the window, acknowledging it. Eyes fixes solely on that window, her heart filled with dread as there was a click, and then the sight of the window sliding open with silent ease. Paws moved quickly, and she was standing, fur bristling, teeth bared at the intruder, warning him without words. He only ignored her warnings, and advanced farther into the room, approaching the bed, laying hands on the princess, pulling her from her down sheets roughly. Growls erupted from her throat, a sharp bark as the princess was yanked from her bed and slumber. Although the princess began to struggle, it was to no avail - the man had a tight grip on her nightclothing.

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