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Lost In Space

Postby raisins. » Wed Jul 20, 2016 6:08 pm

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A small dragon named Cristina wakes up in the middle of nowhere. She rubs her head to feel a bump. "Where am I?"
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A dog runs up to her, hyper on sugar. "Hello!" Christina looks up to see the dog. "Who are you?" The dog pauses for a moment. "My name is Audrey! Who are you?" Cristina sighed. "I am Cristina. Where are we?" Audrey laughed at Cristina like she was insane. "We are in candy space! Duh!" Cristina's eyes became wide. "How can we even breathe then?" Audrey looked at her with a puzzled face. "It's magical here!" Audrey scooped a whole paw full of candy. "Can you take me home?" Audrey looked at her with a sinister face. "There is no way out of here, once you are here, you are stuck forever." A tear ran down Cristina's face. "But my family will be worried sick..." Audrey wiped the tear off Cristina's face with her dress. "Don't cry! Its actually not that bad." Cristina's eye brows lowered like Audrey was suspicious. "If you say so." Audrey's eyes became small and her face became red. "What did I do?!" Cristina sighed. "Is there anybody else here other then us?" Audrey became calm again. "Yeah! Do you want me to lead you to the space king?" Cristina smiled. "Sure!" Audrey patted Cristina on the shoulder. "Follow me then!" Cristina ran with Audrey. "Okay!"

To Be Continued...
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Lost In Space l Part 2

Postby raisins. » Thu Jul 21, 2016 6:18 am

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Cristina was running with Audrey, her hair blowing in the wind. "We are almost there!" Audrey screamed at Cristina.

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"Hello young ones." The Space King yelled at them. Audrey squealed. "Hello! Space King!" Cristina smiled. "I am Cristina, and this is Audrey." The Space King's eyes became small. "I know Audrey already." Audrey was laughing. "Oh.." Cristina's face became red. "Anywaaaays, can you show us the way to the village?" Audrey tilted her head, waiting for a reply. The Space King nodded his head and pointed to the right. "Over there." Cristina and Audrey smiled, showing their teeth. "Thank you!" Cristina squealed. "Your welcome." The Space King said calmly. "Well, we better go now!" Audrey whispered to Cristina. "Oookay!" Cristina chuckled. They speeded off as fast as they could to find the villagers.

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Lost In Space l Part 3

Postby raisins. » Thu Jul 21, 2016 8:07 am

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Cristina was panting. "I'm tired, can we stop for a moment?" Audrey laughed. "Here, just have a peice of candy and it will give you lots of energy!" Audrey handed Cristina a peppermint candy. "Okay, I guess." Cristina popped the candy in her mouth and swallowed it. After a few seconds, the sugar kicked in and she was running as fast as Audrey. "Told ya, silly!" Cristina pointed ahead of them. "There is the village!" Cristina yelled at Audrey. "We are finally here!" Audrey squealed in excitement.
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A rat greeted them at the village. "Hello earthling, and hello Audrey." Audrey smiled. "Hello Wilson! This is my new friend, Cristina." The rat looked up at Cristina. "Hello, Cristina." Cristina smiled at looked down at him. "Hello Wilson! Thank you for greeting me." Wilson grinned. "You are welcome." Audrey broke into their nice conversation. "Can we just meet the other aliens now?!" Cristina and Wilson sighed. "Well I guess since you are being very inpatient about it." Wilson said. Cristina and Audrey walked with Wilson through the village to meet the other aliens that either live in huts, apartments, condos or houses in there.

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Lost In Space l Part 4

Postby raisins. » Thu Jul 21, 2016 12:14 pm

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They were walking through the most beautiful village you could ever see when all of a sudden a buliding flies over and plants self on the ground ahead of them. Cristina shrieked. "What is that place?" Wilson looked at the mysterious yet colorful bulding. "Oh that? That is just the Flurffle adoption center." Audrey became interested. "Can we check it out?" Wilson nodded his head. "Sure. Let's go." Cristina grinned in excitement. They walked over to the other side of the street. Audrey opened the door and a little bell rang.
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The dog smiled. "Hello Wilson! Who are these two?" Wilson sat down in a cushiony chair. "This is Audrey and Cristina." The dog cleared her throat. "Hello you girls! I am Mocha. Owner of the Flurffle adoption center." Cristina and Audrey smiled. "Hello Mocha! What were you doing earlier?" Mocha laughed. "I was going to other planets collecting homeless Flurffles to bring here! Would you girls like one?" Audrey jumped up and down. "Of course!!" Mocha placed all of the cages on the front counter. "Which ones would you like?" Cristina pointed to one of them. "The purple one please?" Audrey pointed to another one. "Can I have this ADORABLE orange one?" Mocha put the other cages back under the counter. "Each one is 20 space coins, so this will be 40 space coins total!" Audrey digged into her pocket and slid 40 space coins on the counter. "Thank you! Have a nice day!" Mocha smiled and put the coins into the cash register. "Bye!" Cristina screamed as they headed out the door.

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