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Fire's Tolter Writtings

Postby fawn- » Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:38 am

I will be using this thread for my Tolter writtings, please don't post but feel free to read c;
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Pool Day Tolter Story for Tokens

Postby fawn- » Sun Jun 26, 2016 11:39 am

Pool Day Tolter

Aquamarine's First Swim


As early as when Aquamarine was born, she was drawn to the water. She learned to swim early in life and was quite good at it.

* "Momma, I wanna go play in the water with the other foals!" Aquamarine joyfully told her mother.
Aqua was a late filly; all the other pregnant mares had had their foals weeks before Aqua's mother did so she was the youngest of the spring babies.
"Aqua, how many times have I told you, you are too small, you would be swept away in the river," said Maji, through bites of grass.
Aquamarine watched the other colts and fillies, only a few weeks older than her, already splashing around in the shallows having fun without her. Aqua thought to herself, "Soon, I will go right into the lake and swim before everyone!"

A few days later, the foals were by the lake again, and Aquamarine was still grazing with her mother in the pasture nearby. Today was the day. Aqua watched her mom, waiting for Maji to be turned the other way, grazing as far away as possible from the lake. As Maji turned, Aqua inched towards the lake, then clumsily cantered down to the edge, where the other foals were playing.
"Heya Aqua! Why are you down here?" asked the oldest colt, CJ.
"I'm here to swim!' Aqua cheerfully responded.
"You are too small to swim Aqua, you can't even canter!" laughed a filly to the left of CJ.
Aqua looked towards her mom, still grazing, then turned to the river. It didn't look too deep, and the water wasn't moving fast. Aqua turned to the foals, all standing still, watching Aqua with her hooves in the water. "I will show them," thought Aqua, and she took a small jump towards the water, which was now up to her knees.
"You can do it Aqua!" cheered the youngest filly of the group, only older than Aqua, and the only one who regularly talked to her.
By this time, Maji had noticed Aqua seemed rather far away and looked up to see her filly belly deep in the river. Maji galloped to the edge, and whinnied to her foal.
"Aquamarine, you get out of there now!" Aqua looked back at her mare.
"Momma, I can do it, I promise I won’t get hurt."
Maji had always had a fear of water, ever since she got swept away from her mom as a young foal and she didn't want the same thing to happen to her filly. Aqua walked a little deeper and she felt the ground slope beneath her and before she knew it, she was swimming. The foals gasped. Aqua swam around in a few circles, and finally swam back to the edge after what seemed like forever to Maji. Aqua shook her mane and felt proud as she saw the amazed looks on the other foals' faces.
"Wow Aqua, that was cool!" CJ exclaimed, as the other foals began to start playing again, closer to the water.
Aqua smiled a proud smile towards CJ and walked over to her mom, who looked disappointed. Aqua’s smile faded and she looked up at her mom.
"I'm sorry momma, I wanted to show you and the other foals that I could do it, even though I'm smaller."
Maji looked at Aquamarine and smiled.
"I know honey, I only held you back because I was afraid you would be swept away from me and I would regret everyday that I let you swim."
"I know momma, I'm really sorry."
"I want you to know you don't have to prove yourself to me or the other foals. You are my little Aquamarine and always will be."
Maji nuzzled Aqua and they walked back up to the barn. From then on, Maji let Aqua swim more often, and let go of her fear from the past. She helped Aqua grow into a strong and confident mare and encouraged her to try new things every day. *

The End :)

Word Count from * to *: 640
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Lifeguard

Postby fawn- » Tue Jun 28, 2016 7:25 am

Lifeguard Tolter

Pel's Party

It was a nice summer day with a bright blue sky and a cooling breeze. Today, Pel had his day off from lifeguard duty, and he wanted to do something fun to pass the time. Soccer? No....Do I even have a soccer ball? I think that's that the orange ball. Shopping? No.....I don't need new sunglasses or a whistle.... I do enough reading on my days in the guard chair.. Pel thought to himself and finally he had a great idea. A beach party!

Pel raced back to his beach home to get all the things he needed. He hitched his big cart to his lifeguard atv and began filling it with all kinds of items. Frisbees and a soccer ball (he thought it was a basketball) went flying it to the cart. Pel grabbed beach towels and water guns and his music player. He grabbed a few of his favorite CDs and threw those into his back seat. A few umbrellas and loves of snacks filled in the spaces left on the cart. Pel looked at his load and smiled. Today was going to be the best party day ever.

Pel started up the atv and drove down the boardwalk. He had a loud speaker and was going to invite enverybody to join the fun. "Pel's splendiferous beach Party! Come to the North Seaman's beach in an hour's time! The more the merrier!" Pel said this through his speaker all the way down the board walk and he could see the excitement spread down the beach. Pel got the the North beach and started unloading his things. He placed the umbrellas, opened the coolers full of drinks and spread the waterguns and other toys around the area. He started up his music and couldn't wait for the party to start.


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