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Undertale- Free Falling (Fanfiction)

Postby sunflowertrash » Sun May 15, 2016 9:24 pm

I'll start with the characters of this tale-

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Briana Maria Tejada

"Justin.. Mia.. Frisk.. I won't fail you just yet... N-never!"

She is a BRAVE soul who has two sisters and one brother. This tomboy fell into the underground trying to save her sister, Frisk. They both fell, leaving their siblings yelling their names into the darkness, trying to find them after a fight. She is an 11-year-old girl who protects her siblings. Her twin is Justin. Briana loves to draw, read, sing and write as well. She can play the drums and guitar and often is found listening and singing along to her favorite songs in a loop. Briana is usually found wearing a checkered shirt, sweater or t-shirt, and jeans or leggings, along with some short orange/yellow boots or sneakers. She also wears hats and bandannas a lot.


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Justin Daniel Tejada

"Don't worry, Mia. As long as they're DETERMINED, they'll be fine."

A young boy with JUSTICE who waits for his two sisters again at the beginning of the story. He is 11-years-old and always protects his siblings from everything, like his sister Briana who is his twin. When Frisk and Briana fell in, he knew they would be fine. As long as they stayed, DETERMINED. He is usually found on his laptop playing games with friends. He likes to play the piano and the bass guitar, he was the lead guitarist in a band before falling into the Underground. He hums songs that foreshadow dark parts of the story and hums whenever he's stressed or nervous. Justin usually wears T-Shirts with jeans or shorts and sneakers. Later on takes a big fall.


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Mia Flower Tejada

"D-do.. Do you think they'll b-be fine?"

A young 8-year-old with INTEGRITY. She loves to dance and sing, like her siblings. She plays the guitar and the violin. She doesn't like to be away from her siblings for too long or else she starts crying. Though, she always believes in her siblings, no matter what. She can be found wearing Briana's checkered shirts on top of her own t-shirts with some leggings and sneakers or boots. Later on takes a big fall.


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Lucky Hope Tejada

Their pet dog who is six months who is taken with Mia and Justin in their 'big fall', but they don't know Lucky is with them until they meet Flowey. Lucky is hyper, brave, and protects her owners, no matter what. She barks when trouble is near. She comes to play a lot at the end of the story.



Frisk is an adopted child in their family with their mom. Their dad left a few years earlier.

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Prolouge
Chapter 1 - I Offically Hate Flowers (And Chara)
Chapter 2 - Meeting Goat MOMster?

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Prolouge

Postby sunflowertrash » Sun May 15, 2016 9:26 pm

Third Person's P.O.V.

It was a beautiful Summer afternoon in the small town of Pondville, school was out and Summer Break was starting tomorrow.

"My children, I need to go to the nearby City of Loriet, be good, alright?"

Mia whined, "But Mom, I have practice tomorrow!"

"Hey don't be so down Mia, you have all the time in the world to practice this break!" said Frisk.

"Well, I have to be going now, bye my children."

"Bye Mom!" Everyone said together.

Lucky ran up to the Mom, whining, and whimpering. The dog jumped as if begging her to stay with them.

"Oh! Before I forget, here's some money to buy food."

*They acquired 50 dollars

"Be good."

She left the house, waving goodbye to them.

"Ugh, I hate this!" exclaimed Mia.

"Can't agree with you more," Justin said.

"Guys just calm down, she's coming back soon, it's just a business trip," Frisk replied.

"Well, you're just adopted, you didn't have a Mom to take care of you!" Mia and Justin in unison, angrily.

Tears welled up in Frisk's eyes as she looked away, "W-well... I.." She opened the door and ran away, crying between her breaths. Lucky barked, whimpering as she saw yet, another family member run away.

"Are you guys crazy? Frisk is part of our family!" Briana yelled, her voice rising louder and louder with each word. "What the hell is wrong with you? How about when you come to your senses, you apologize!" And with that she ran after Frisk, slamming the door behind her.

Briana followed the direction Frisk ran towards, after looking around, she saw that Frisk was running towards Mt. Ebott, knowing about the infamous story that whoever goes there disappeared forever, she was extremely worried for Frisk. She finally caught up with Frisk at the top, taking a big breath.

"Nobody loves me... D-do they..?" Frisk whispered, not noticing Briana.

"No! I do! I always have!" Briana yelled, taking a step forward.

"Hey don't surprise me like that!" Frisk said startled.

"Please don't do this, you know people who visit this mountain disappear forever!" Briana exclaimed.

"Well, I don't care anymore!" Frisk screamed while running towards the giant hole in the mountain. She tripped over a vine.

"NO!" Briana shouted while running with all her might. She grabbed Frisk's hand before she fell in, but they both fell into the hole, gravity pulling them in.

*Falling...

*Falling...

*Falling...

*Until...

*You hit your head...

*You fall unconscious...
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Chapter 1 - I Officially Hate Flowers (And Chara)

Postby sunflowertrash » Thu Jul 21, 2016 12:10 pm

Briana's P.O.V.

So.. What's the 'best' thing to do while your falling? If you answered, hit your head, then your correct! And.. That's exactly what I did, which caused me to get knocked out.

I looked around the darkness. It seemed that I was in a dream, (more like a nightmare if you ask me). I started walking, trying to find a start or end. It was all just darkness until I saw.. Well, her.

She didn't turn around at first and I stood there, frozen to the spot. She was wearing some brown shorts, a cream and lime green shirt and what looked like brown boots.

It was silent for a few minutes until she turned around with a wide, (also very creepy), smile.

"Greetings, I am Chara. You must be Briana."

"Ho-" I started but she cut me off.

"I see you've fallen down. It doesn't matter why but I can do something for you.."

"What is that, then?"

"I can offer you help." Was it even possible for Chara's smile to get even bigger at this point?

"What kind of help...?" I asked, looking towards her.

"Help to get you out of here. Though, I will need to 'borrow' your body and SOUL in order for that."

"My body, much less my soul? Yeah, right. Like I'm going to do that, pfft." I scoffed, turning my head to the side.

Chara looked down darkly, her bangs and hair covering her eyes. There was a frown on her face, which slowly turned into a small, creepy, smile. "No? Hm, you must not have heard me. SINCE WHEN WERE YOU THE ONE IN CONTROL." She walked over towards me, taking a knife out of their pocket.

"Ahh... Heh, heh... Well.. Gotta go, time is precious and places to go!" I said, nervously, backing up slowly which then turned into a quick sprint.

Out of nowhere a rock appeared and I tripped onto the floor, "Damn it, rock." I mumbled, rubbing my forehead. Suddenly, a pain ran up my thigh and back as Chara hit me with the knife.

"See you next time, anomaly," Chara said, hitting me in my neck, snapping me out of my dream. (Still more of a nightmare to me.)

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I woke up, sitting up instantly. I put my hands to my neck, arms and legs as if the cuts were still there. I sat up hesitantly to look at my surroundings, trying to remember what happened. A sharp pain throbbed in my forehead as I put my hand to it. I took my hand away to see blood. Oh, yeah, I hit my head.

I turned my attention to the person beside me who was stirring. What was her name..? Oh yeah, Frisk! She sat up, groggily and gave me a worried look, "What was that?"

"What was what?" I asked.

"That!" Frisk exclaimed.

"I don't know what you mean!" I yelled, looking away to not see her pleading eyes.

"I had a thought of you getting stabbed to death by a someone, I think they had a green shirt with one cream stripe, brown shorts, and brown boots?"

I sat up slowly and looked around. Their was an aching pain near my forehead and on my left arm. "That was nothing, you're just imagining it," I said, scoffing, hiding the tones of nervousness that crept into my voice away. She replied nothing. I stood up slowly and helped Frisk up with my uninjured hand. We both walked towards a path to the darkness, when we went through it, we saw something we never, ever expected to see.

It was a flower.

Oh, you think it was a normal one? Heh, no, I wish. It had a face and everything. It was a buttercup, to say the least. I walked over towards it and went down on my knees to observe it more closely.

"Hey, kid, you're getting a bit close!" Someone squeaked out.

I stumbled as I took a step back and fell as a reaction to the voice, turning my back towards the flower, "W-who just said that?" I asked, getting back up, looking at Frisk who was just as confused.

"Well, who else, you idiot." I heard the voice again.

I suddenly felt something pull on my hurt arm and I yelled out in pain. "Ow, ow, ow!" I was turned around and I fell back down, holding my left arm with my right. I looked at what seemed to be a green vine on my arm. Frisk, hesitantly, sat down next to me.

"Sorry." I heard the voice say. "I'm Flowey, Flowey the Flower." The vine let go slowly, as if not to hurt my arm anymore than it already was.

I looked at the flower. "H-how can you speak?" I mumbled, letting my hurt arm slide limply and slowly to my side. I knew that I shouldn't trust a monster, much less a FLOWER. Though, I did, if only a little.

"How about for another time..." Flowey mumbled. "You two are new to the underground, aren't you?"

Me and Frisk nodded in unison.

"Well, someone is ought to teach you how things work around. Though, I guess little 'ol me, will have to do." He said in a cheery voice, making me a bit creeped out.

Suddenly, an orange heart popped out infront of me, a red one in front of Frisk.

"You see that?" He asked.

We nodded again.

"That's your SOUL, the very culmulation of you being. It will pop out whenever you enter a battle." The flower added. "It starts off weak but can grow strong if you gain lots of LV!"

"What's that?" I asked before Frisk could.

"Why, LOVE, of course!"

"You want some LOVE, don't you? Well, I'll share some with you!"

Flowey threw 5 yellow pellets at our SOULS, I didn't trust this thing, but Frisk did so I just followed along. But when the pellets hit our SOULS, I felt my hope to live on reduce, my HP was at 1, and so was Frisk's... I collapsed onto the ground in pain, Frisk by my side. Both of heart's had many cracks all over them.

"You IDIOT, in this world it's kill or killed!" Flowey laughed, a creepy smile plastered onto his face.

I think I hate flowers now. Like, a lot. Especially Buttercups.

Pellets surrounded us and I looked around for an opening.. Nothing.. I tried to yell for help.

*You called out for help...

*but nobody came.


I looked up, my vision going a bit black at the edges. I was bleeding badly, as was Frisk. Though, I put my right arm around her, a slight smile on my face. The pellets come closer and closer as Frisk grips onto me, tightly.

Suddenly, a fireball appears out of nowhere, hitting Flowey, making him fly away. I see Frisk get up, with HOPE. I saw that her HP had risen.

Then, I hear a kind, caring and soft voice say,

"What a terrible creature, torturing such poor, innocent youths.."


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