[ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby type. » Fri Jun 17, 2016 12:33 pm

      oh my goodness cas
      your writing
      it's incredible
      the idea for "don't" is so interesting and unique
      i want more of it
      spectacular, my friend
      also is white winter hymnal inspired by fleet foxes?
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby Keeki » Fri Jun 17, 2016 9:43 pm

type. wrote:
      oh my goodness cas
      your writing
      it's incredible
      the idea for "don't" is so interesting and unique
      i want more of it
      spectacular, my friend
      also is white winter hymnal inspired by fleet foxes?


about the last part please say yes please say yes
                                                     
                                                     
                                                     
                                                     
                                                    
                                                               
                                                                 
                                                                
                                                                
                                                               
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby calliopë » Sat Jun 18, 2016 6:45 am

    awe type you're so sweet.
    thank you very much. that means a lot to me.
    also. yes. yes wwh is inspired by fleet foxes. whoops.
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby raey » Sun Jun 19, 2016 2:38 am

      I love your newest text c:
      even more as a writer
      it's amazing - both the message and your writing
      not sure if I will ever get it in my head how wonderful you, your ideas and your texts are <3333
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[ ❝ la devotee ❞ //]

Postby calliopë » Thu Jun 30, 2016 12:43 pm

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      Her smile infects my cheeks and it surfaces to my lips. The car rounds the bend and I can hear her hold her breath. Over the ledge of rock and sand we see it, the beginning of L.A. A spark from a firework - her eyes dance with midnight lights. Fluorescent lights cover her skin and her fingers can't get rid of the entrapping seatbelt fast enough. She shoots through the sunroof and leaves me beneath her. She is a wave and I the shore, L.A the magic that hides in the froth. She teeters and fumbles over my thighs, her sharp heels digging rivets into my jeans. I shut my eyes. I wrap my arms around those tan pillars. I have lost her to the city. Just as I feared. Just another L.A devotee.
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby raey » Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:00 pm

      omg omg omg I love, love, love that song

      I really like this one c:
      it's so light and you can really feel the excitement just from reading it
      My favourite sentences are definitely "her eyes dance with midnight lights." and "She is a wave and I the shore," this is just perfect <3333
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby calliopë » Fri Jul 01, 2016 8:42 am

      thank you, raey cx
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Re: [ ❝ you don't hear me say ❞ //]

Postby Asherwy » Mon Jul 25, 2016 3:48 pm

      ooohhhhh casssssiiiiiiii
      I'm waiting for another one >;( you'd better post right this instant or I'll...I'll......nevermind. Just post!
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