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[ Misu's Write ] WIP

Postby Misu » Sun Apr 17, 2016 2:22 am

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This is my corner for writing. I will post everything in writing here. I will be very grateful if you are not posting unless I told you to post. This also my personal creation, I did not accept critics in my thread, please PM me instead. My writing is not good and I'm not a professional and it's common to have misspell and bad grammars.

If you're still here, enjoy reading. Please don't get angry when you see a bad grammar and spelling.

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Blue Sky | Story

Postby Misu » Sun Apr 17, 2016 3:49 am

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Author Note wrote:When I wrote this, its supposed to be a sad story with a happy end/tragic end. And so, I divided the end by two. Man, it's like an interactive story.

Blue Sky.. The beautiful night sky.. It's always remembers me of the face of my Mother, 7 years ago when I was still a little. When I'm not left alone. The pretty blue moon shines with a twinkling stars, it makes me want to go there, and sleep there. In mother's lap, I'm not alone anymore.

My name is Mias, today is my fourteenth birthday. I'm all alone. I never expect this to happened. I'm not mostly alone, I have my aunt whose always give me money twice a month for my needs and pay the apartment. I never see her before, but I heard her voice in a phone. She said that I should be independent and do things all by myself. If you probably don't know, I'm eight grade. I don't have many friends, but I'm not bullied. Thinking about this making me want to watch a TV. So I close the balcony door and went to my room.

I also want to make a cup of milk before went to bed. I don't want to go to bed yet, my tv is in my bedroom. I turn on the TV, lock the key and watching it until midnight. When midnight comes, I become tired and went to the kitchen to making a milk. The kitchen was dark and it's a little creepy but I'm not scared, I life alone all by myself these three years and yet I'm scared by the apartment kitchen? I guess not. I open the shelf, taking the milk and the cup. I pour the milk to the cup feeling uneasy. I felt..

Something watching me

I gulped, it wasn't ghost right? Ghost is just an old tale to scare children. But, what if is true? I take a deep breath and looked behind. I surprised, behind me, It's a white ghost woman that looks like my Mother. She has the same eyes, the same face.. I braved myself to approach her and nervously said "E-excuse me, a-are you a g-g-g-ghost?" She nod her head, blankly. Even tough she's a ghost, she doesn't seems like one. She seems like a spirit, because ghosts has such terrible appearance and this spirit doesn't have bad appearance. I turn around and walks to my room.

"My child." She said, smiling blankly. The voice was so familiar, the voice is ... Mother's! I turn around again, and sobs softly "M-mother?" I cried, walking towards the spirit. "Hug me, Mias." she replied, opening her arms. But, there's something in my mind. Something that wont let me hug her, but why? I still walking towards her. I need to think fast. After thinking, I decide to..
ImageGoes to mother arms
ImageStopped, goes to the bedroom and locked it.
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Blue Sky | Choice 1

Postby Misu » Sun Apr 17, 2016 3:56 am

No, I wont listen to my thoughts. She's my mother, the spirit of my dead mother. And I should hug her, one last time! I ran to the spirit and hug it.

It was a bad idea..

I felt like I'm being sucked in to the spirit body. I looked in her face, it was terrifying. I cried, this was the end of my life. She was NOT my mother. She's merely just a ghost using Mother face and voice. Other than that, she is a ghost. It was real, the ghost was real. The TV were left turn on, there was a bloodstain beside the screen and suddenly everything went blacked out in Mias's apartment room.

The next morning, the police investigate Mias's room. They found a dead body, a broken TV and.. the picture of a woman who looked like Mias, Mias hugging the photo tightly. The bloodstain covered the woman face. With a text beneath the photo spelled "LIAR"
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