Pia's Little Corner [Comments/Critique Welcome]

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Pia's Little Corner
WELCOME
Here is where I, PersephoneSlaine - Pia, makes my little writing home. It is a comfy cozy corner, where you can read my writings, poems, and such, and get to know my way of thinking and a little of my heart.

RULES
You MAY comment/critique, I do not mind, actually I would encourage it! Please, negative and positive. Just please respect me and do not just shame the writing. Follow all the rules of this board, and the site.
You may NOT ask to be critiqued on here, or disobey any rules of this board nor the site.
No spam please!
This is NOT a rule, just a suggestion. Add something to your reply, it helps me know what you got from it. Just a 'good' or 'bad' does not really help. Again, just a suggestion.

Otherwise, enjoy a little piece of my soul!

DIRECTORY
1. Welcome and Rules
2. Shoot for the Stars - Poems with an upbeat message.
3. Shards of Glass - Poems with a sad turn, or angry turn, read this at your own discretion, understand they are not meant to leave a happy feeling. (Do not worry, none of them are against the rules, they just will not be 'smiling happy' like.
4. Pieces of Me - Poems that share more things about me.
5. All About the Animals - Poems about animals, lol.
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Shoot for the Stars
Poems with an upbeat message.

Endless Dream
Take my hand and let us dance with the stars up in the sky
Let us spread out our wings and let us soar on high
Breath in the air sprinkled with the wishes of all the young kids
And their hope as big as the sea filled with fishes
Let us ring around the rosy around the beautiful rainbows
And bring a pot of joy as we live in this limbo
Let’s sing with our voices and waltz upon the moon
Do the dance of lovers that makes all young girls swoon
So raise your voice and sing off key
And live in this endless dream with me.

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Shards of Glass
Poems with a sad turn, or angry turn, read this at your own discretion, understand they are not meant to leave a happy feeling. (Do not worry, none of them are against the rules, they just will not be 'smiling happy' like.

Never Made for Here
I have made my choice
I will sing out loud
And the words I voice they will sway the crowd
For you said you are done
You are leaving this world
You were never meant to be here
Which I never understood
But now I can see the wings at your back
The shining pretty halo above your head
You were always there for support never for attack
Which I never saw until you were lying in this bed
But now you shine with grace of all angels
And now I cry as I light all the candles
But I get what you were trying to say all this time
You yourself were always meant, meant to die
For your home is not on earth nor this plane
You were meant for something far more grand
And in the scheme of things I was lost in your light
Which shadowed my eyes from the whole big plan
But now you are on your way home
And I am here to say goodbye
I hope you are proud of me
For I shall smile and not cry
So good bye my friend
Godbye my love
Goodbyy
May you soar like the dove.

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Pieces of Me
Poems that share more things about me.

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All About the Animals
Poems about animals, lol.

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