Personal Peoms

[Blob.fish]

Feel free to comment your poems and suggestions/inspiration
for me or others..
Here's a poem I made recently..

I drew in class,
such harmless things,
but at night,
those things change.

I drew a necklace,
nice and loose,
but when alone,
turned to a noose.

I sketched two wolves,
playful and mild,
later that night,
they turned wild.

They rip and bite
each other's snout.
They hurt the ones
they care about.

People don't think
the way I do.
Yet again,
I don't want them to.

My mind is dangerous.
My mind is weak.
I lay my head down,
and try to sleep.

But I can't.
They won't leave.
I closed the door,
but they cry and weep.

They broke down,
what little shelter is here.
and take over my happiness,
that I hold so dear.

My mind's unstable.
My mind is gone.
They say I have to fight.
But the demons already won.

[sid12]

you are an isporashonal poet

im not as good as you but if you wont mind can you have a look at mine you dont have to if you dont want to