Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby justice'n'joy » Mon Nov 07, 2016 5:48 pm

Chicken Smoothie

Children and adults, come! Cone share your
History
In this small world where adults can be
Children and
Kids can be mature.
Everything makes
No sense here...

Some people
Mistake this for a game.
Of course they are wrong! This is
Obviously an addiction!
This is life.
Here pets are unrealistic and
In the forums, people make friends 'til the
End of their time here. Here on CS...
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby DeMaizu » Tue Nov 08, 2016 2:54 pm

If I were to dance for the rest of my days, simply dancing my feelings away like the falling petals of a cherry tree, then surely you would come back. Because we promised - we promised, didn't we?
That in our lives no on else would matter quite as much. And yet, I am still dancing and you have still not shown up at my door, breathless from your gallavanting in the chill rain.
So I will not stray from this spot, beaten down with the pattern of my steps, not until you open my door grinning, in all your damp glory that is slowly fading away like the memory I know you to be.
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby dejun. » Tue Nov 08, 2016 2:59 pm

"Green grass breaks through snow.
Artemis pleads for my help.
I am so awesome."

( if you get my reference, i love you )
it was a great five years on this site. thank you to the community for being so welcoming and kind, it makes chickensmoothie what it is today. i hope everyone has an amazing time here as i did.
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby DeMaizu » Tue Nov 08, 2016 3:21 pm

(ARe you being Apollo? o.O That really feels like his style.)

Hello again! Summer has left for new lands, looking to scorch others with her blinding mid-July heat. Winter has not yet reached the end of her northern escapade, and Spring is walking in the warmth of May. So Fall, my companion, how are you? We are here again, where we met years uncounted before, with our grinning secrets still bewteen us; of our toes dipped in frosting brooks, yelping at the cold seeping into our skin. Of golden, flaming, blazing leaves falling into our hair while we laugh at each other's faces. Of glowing sunsets peeking over the edge of rustling woods.
You're leaving now? Wait, come again next year! We'll add on to the secrets grinning with mirth and hush-hushed love.
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby AriDeZu » Tue Nov 08, 2016 5:15 pm

Ooh! I know that! It's from Percy Jackson. The Titan's Curse right?

Come back to me! Come back and we'll have so much fun.
Rolling in the sand, sitting in trees.
Please come back. I need you so I can have fun again.

Oops. I totally changed the feel again.
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby IHaveNoFandoms » Thu Nov 17, 2016 9:48 am

(Mind if I post?)


Ten Steps Ahead

Don't tell me not to pick up on your trail
Don't tell me in your life, it'll fail
Never underestimate
How long you will have to wait
The world is made of marionettes,
I like to play them on my heartstrings
I get what I want,
I get it when I want it,
But are you sure that I want it?
And are you sure it's now that I want it?
I'm always 10 steps ahead
I think I've got it
Ten steps ahead
I think I know why you two are sad
I think I know why they seem
So, so, glad
I think I'll make it worse
Someday, but not today
I see you cry inside
You're silent and there's only none
That can open your mind






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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby AriDeZu » Fri Feb 03, 2017 3:38 pm

Check the door, no one there
Check the lights, no one there,
Check the camera, no one there,
Check the lights, Someone's there!
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby AriDeZu » Tue May 02, 2017 7:43 am

Help! I can't think of anything!
Writing words, deleting words.
What am I supposed to do?
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby IHaveNoFandoms » Wed May 17, 2017 12:08 pm

AriDeZu wrote:Help! I can't think of anything!
Writing words, deleting words.
What am I supposed to do?


Try to think of what you like and hate. Or what you hate about what you like. Or what you like about what you hate.
I like to compare stuff a lot in my poems. I use a lot of metaphors sometimes, especially discreetly, so when I recall an event, nobody understands it so you could try that. I even wrote a song about writer's block once...
Even make an outline.
Anything bugging you? Wasting your precious time? Write about that. Make your own method, even. In fact, it could be a song without a tune if it is easier to write like that.
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Re: Poems! everything from haiku to free-verse

Postby AriDeZu » Sun May 21, 2017 5:11 pm

Thanks, I'll try that.

Rousing, but calming, Loud and yet quiet.
Softly caressing my heart and putting me at ease,
Pounding in my ears, making me move.
Lifting me up and pushing me down,
What would this world be without magical music?
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