Critique please?

[antiquités]

So a friend and I were discussing plots a few weeks ago. We brought up a plot centering around Peter Pan and Tinkerbell getting stuck in the human world. We both wrote different endings of this plot. I like the idea, though I want to know what other people think, since I will probably publish this online someday.
Basically...
Captain Hook defeats Peter Pan and takes over Neverland; Peter and Tinkerbell are banished to the human world. They loose all their power, and have to blend in with the population until they figure out how to get their powers back. Peter slowly looses his memories of Neverland as a result of being an aging human, and even developed feelings for a girl. Tinkerbell has to figure out how to take back Neverland before it's too late.

[The Pirate Dragon]

That actually sounds kind of cool! It reminds me of Hook, have you seen that movie? But I'd like to see the bit of the story where Tink tries to save him on the human world. Maybe where she's also a human and has to distract him.

[antiquités]

Thank you ^^ and I know I've seen Hook, but it's been like a million years. But I'll post the story when it's finished; Tink does end up becoming human along with Peter when he's banished. I thought that would put a little challenge on writing the story.