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Through A Bad Guys Eyes.

Postby MimeQueen » Tue Feb 09, 2016 6:17 am

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Okay, let's make this nice and simple. Hi, my name is Zoe,and I have never ever ever been above ground before. I work for the FPV, an underground Facility Program Of Villains. Yep. I'm a "Bad guy".. So what? It's not really my fault anyway.. my parents worked here until they were killed in and underground explosion. The FPV hideout was found, and so the "Good Guys" exploded it, killing mostly everyone. I was only 7 years old, but the FPV survivors took me away with them, and relocated the facility. When it exploded, I was hurt badly and lost all memory of everything before that day, so now I'm 14, and I still can't remember anything from that day or before, so the FPV tells me the stories. I live down here with my best friend Liz and Duke, who was my dads best friend. He helps me with my training.. I'm not a full on super villain yet. Duke teaches me how to control and use my powers. I haven't totally unlocked them all yet, but just to shorten this up, I'm a werewolf- a full on real werewolf. Duke is a vampire, and Liz and her parents are all werewolves too. I'm just your normal 14 year old werewolf girl working for an undercover villain agency with no memory or family. So yeah, that's me.


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Postby MimeQueen » Tue Feb 09, 2016 7:16 am

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Thankfully, Duke let me have off the rest of the day, why? Because he had to go work on the "Project." The "Project" Is a top secret device being built here in the FPV, the "students in training" are not aloud to see, know or here about it. I think it has to do with the "new training program" their working on for the students, that I will find out about next week.

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"Hey Zoe!"
That's Max, he's cool I guess.. he's also a vampire so.
"Hey Max!"
Personally I don't know him well, but I walked right up to him anyways.
"What do you think were gonna do in that "New training program?"
"I don't know.. Stuff?"
"Guess what I learned how to do today?"
"Just tell me I'm a bad guesser."
"Watch this!"
Max disappeared. "Max?"
Sharp claws sinked into my shoulder. I whipped around to see huge red eyes in my face. Without thinking I grabbed my staff and beat the critter till it dropped to the ground. "Ah ha! Serves you right, you never ever sink your little claws into me again!" I yelled.Then something REALLY REALLY bad happened. I noticed that the critter was a bat. Then I thought how Max had disappeared- and how he was a vampire."I just killed Max!" I screamed

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Postby MimeQueen » Tue Feb 09, 2016 8:13 am

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Beep. Beep. Beep.
"Is he dead?" I gasped
We haven't lost him yet, but I can't promise anything. This may be his last few days alive.
That's the doctor I guess you can say, he happens to be Mrs. Frankenstein and Hulks son (Hulk is a "good guy" I know but whatever) and happens to be an exceptional doctor, considering the fact that Max is still alive. Max's parents came to visit before, all they did was swear at me, enjoyable right? No. I felt terrible- and I still do. I broke both his arms- I mean I broke both his wings, and legs.. and cracked his skull.. whoops? So I'm not only a terrible villain, I'm a terrible (what was supposed to be) friend.
"You should go for now.. I got him from here, thanks for taking him to me Zoe."
So I left. I walked down the glass hallway, looking down at my reflection. And then, I started to cry. A lot. Yep, villains cry- wait no they don't. I'm not a villain anyway, so I guess I'm aloud to cry now. I ran to my room, ignoring Liz as she stopped to talk to me. I slammed my door closed. I sobbed for a while, banging my head against the wall. "What have I done?"

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