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My Song Writing Journal

Postby Demon God Caelan » Wed Nov 25, 2015 8:17 am

This journal is where I'm writing songs that I plan on recording in the future. If you have critique, let me know what you think.

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(With Guest Female)

Guest
Heartbreak, heartbreak, yeah that's all you do.

Me
Never been the kinda guy to get tied down.
Until one night met the new girl in town.
Long blonde hair.
Blue eyed stare.
Just my kind of girl.

Never thought she'd be the one that shot me down.
Didn't even think of going back to town.

Been one-nighting so long.
Never sang this song.
'Bout a heartbreaker's broken heart.

Guest
Always playing with a girl's heart.
How's it feel to be torn apart?

Damn boy, you know how to make a girl cry.
Now why don't you give it a try?

Me
Never thought a drink could be so bad.
Even think 'bout calling my dad.

Never had to go through heartache.
Can't even flirt as straight.

She was one of a kind.
Never gonna make such a find.

Maybe one day.
I'll fine a dame.
Who won't do me wrong.
And make me sing a song.
'Bout a heartbreaker's broken heart.
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Re: My Song Writing Journal

Postby Demon God Caelan » Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:28 pm

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Look over the sunset, can you see?
The ocean calls out, to you and me.

With waves, crashing down
Splashes and ripples resound
Oh what a soft, peaceful sound
With waves, crashing down.

The ocean, so deep and so blue
She calls out to me and to you.

With waves crashing down
Splashes and ripples resound
Oh what a soft, peaceful sound
With waves, crashing down.

With waves crashing down
Splashes and ripples resound
Oh what a soft, peaceful sound
With waves, crashing down.

When the ocean calls out, you can't deny.
The call of the sea, it's so divine

With waves crashing down
Splashes and ripples resound
Oh what a soft, peaceful sound
With waves, crashing down.

With waves crashing down
Splashes and ripples resound
Oh what a soft, peaceful sound
With waves, crashing down.

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Waves crashing down, splashes and ripples resound,
(Oh,oh oh,)
Where the flow ends, what shall there be?

A present is found down by the shore of the sea,
Unlock the door, you may have the key...

(Oh na mii oh, oh na mii oh, na mii oh
Quay Quay Quay
Oh na mii oh, Mii oh, Mii oh

oh na mii oh, oh na mii oh, Mii Quay Quay,
Na mii oh Na! Me Mii oh Quay Quay)

Out past the door's...opposite side,
Thrills are in store...Worthwhile and engaging,

In that same way...The happiness switch...
Just may be...Exactly...What you are creating,

Waves crashing down, splashes and ripples resound,
(Oh,oh oh,)
Where the flow ends, what shall there be?

A present is found down by the shore of the sea,
It's calling out, It's time to go see.
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Re: My Song Writing Journal

Postby Demon God Caelan » Mon Feb 01, 2016 2:54 am

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The bitterness of love's woe.
Has left me cold and all alone.

I never thought that it would end this way.
I'll never live down this day.

Got a feeling that someone wants to help.
But the softest touch just makes me yelp.

But soothing words.
Mend my broken heart.
And give me a chance to start a new life.
One without all the long forgotten strife.

The healing words have touched my heart.
Never thought I'd be able to get this far.

Even though the past's still there.
I really, really don't much care.

Cause soothing words.
Mend my broken heart.
And give me a chance to start a new life.
One without all the long forgotten strife.

And one day I hope I can mend.
Someone who's heart is lost in the wind.

Cause soothing words
Mend a broken heart.
And give you a chance to start a new life.
One without all the long forgotten strife.

And I'll never forget how I got a new start.
Because of soothing words that mend my broken heart.

Because of soothing words that mend my broken heart.
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