How to be a Prince

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

How to be a Prince

Postby Smol Birb » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:06 pm

Image

So I accidentally lost all my inspiration for another story of mine. But I still wanted to write, and after I posted an idea for a story an amazing person *cough* AngryLittleGoat *cough* inspired me to actually write it
So here we are
I'm not going to get right into the plot line I know I often like to read/watch stories without knowing too much about them because spoilers
so here is the short version for you guys who love to be surprised:
Read this story because it is set in the medieval times, has a tramp, prince(s), crossdressing, confused butlers, comedy and all that epic stuff you guys love.

And the long version with the kind of spoilers:
Olive has spent her whole life as a peasant, when her mother died, she was forced to live on the streets and take the identity of a boy to keep herself safe. After mugging an aristocrat, she ends up in a tough situation and accidentally ends up killing the boy. Only seconds later she learns he was the prince. Once again she takes on different identity, that of the first born son of the king. She is forced to keep her identity and situation secret, or be executed for murder. But there is one problem, being a prince might be little too much for her to handle.
Last edited by Smol Birb on Thu Oct 29, 2015 3:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
ImageImageImageImage

Image


my stories and comics wrote: Again

Hiding Superstitions

How to be a Prince


Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote:"outside, among your fellows,
among strangers, you must
preserve appearances, a
hundred things you cannot
do; but inside, the terrible freedom!"


ImageImage
I believe in science, and that is why I'm a Christian. If you would like to maturely discuss religions with me then send me a PM. I would love to hear your opinion and share mine
.............
I used to be Master of Nightmares
.............
My art shop
User avatar
Smol Birb
 
Posts: 13006
Joined: Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:20 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby AnneBoleyn » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:07 pm

That is AWESOME!!!!
i cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt! if you can raed tihs forwrad it.

Image

http://huggle.jdf2.org/sig/Victoria1234.png
User avatar
AnneBoleyn
 
Posts: 949
Joined: Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:27 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby katomorakwarrior » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:21 pm

Agreed.
I haven't even read it, and I'm already waiting for more.
Image
Image
User avatar
katomorakwarrior
 
Posts: 908
Joined: Sat Aug 27, 2011 5:33 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby Smol Birb » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:24 pm

ha ha thank you so much you guys for being interested. I'll try to work on a chapter tonight but I might not finish it
ImageImageImageImage

Image


my stories and comics wrote: Again

Hiding Superstitions

How to be a Prince


Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote:"outside, among your fellows,
among strangers, you must
preserve appearances, a
hundred things you cannot
do; but inside, the terrible freedom!"


ImageImage
I believe in science, and that is why I'm a Christian. If you would like to maturely discuss religions with me then send me a PM. I would love to hear your opinion and share mine
.............
I used to be Master of Nightmares
.............
My art shop
User avatar
Smol Birb
 
Posts: 13006
Joined: Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:20 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby clip ♡ » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:34 pm

omg I want more and I haven't even read this yet ouo

why are you so good at summaries
away at the cottage for two weeks -- see you when I get back!!

Image
she/her adult neutral good infp taurus canada toyhouse
never doubt that you are valuable and powerful and deserving of every chance in the world.
my name is maddy; I'm an anxious girl from canada who likes marvel and
who cries over cartoons and musicals like a disaster.

my pm is always open ♡
Image
User avatar
clip ♡
 
Posts: 10293
Joined: Tue Aug 16, 2011 12:44 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby Graceymc96 » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:44 pm

Okay, this seems great! Marking!
User avatar
Graceymc96
 
Posts: 1143
Joined: Sun Aug 30, 2015 11:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby Smol Birb » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:51 pm

;U;
You guys are too great
I've never gotten this much interest.
ImageImageImageImage

Image


my stories and comics wrote: Again

Hiding Superstitions

How to be a Prince


Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote:"outside, among your fellows,
among strangers, you must
preserve appearances, a
hundred things you cannot
do; but inside, the terrible freedom!"


ImageImage
I believe in science, and that is why I'm a Christian. If you would like to maturely discuss religions with me then send me a PM. I would love to hear your opinion and share mine
.............
I used to be Master of Nightmares
.............
My art shop
User avatar
Smol Birb
 
Posts: 13006
Joined: Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:20 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby AnneBoleyn » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:52 pm

Well your really good!
i cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt! if you can raed tihs forwrad it.

Image

http://huggle.jdf2.org/sig/Victoria1234.png
User avatar
AnneBoleyn
 
Posts: 949
Joined: Wed Sep 16, 2015 3:27 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby Smol Birb » Thu Oct 29, 2015 2:05 pm

*sobs with happiness*
I love you all
ImageImageImageImage

Image


my stories and comics wrote: Again

Hiding Superstitions

How to be a Prince


Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote:"outside, among your fellows,
among strangers, you must
preserve appearances, a
hundred things you cannot
do; but inside, the terrible freedom!"


ImageImage
I believe in science, and that is why I'm a Christian. If you would like to maturely discuss religions with me then send me a PM. I would love to hear your opinion and share mine
.............
I used to be Master of Nightmares
.............
My art shop
User avatar
Smol Birb
 
Posts: 13006
Joined: Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:20 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: How to be a Prince

Postby Graceymc96 » Thu Oct 29, 2015 2:06 pm

No prob, I love your art style!
User avatar
Graceymc96
 
Posts: 1143
Joined: Sun Aug 30, 2015 11:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: WolfstormSC and 1 guest