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Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Fri Aug 21, 2015 3:22 pm

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters in this story! The characters belong to their rightful owners. Smash Bros. belongs to Nintendo. Characters like Pit, Dark Pit, Pikachu, etc. belong to Nintendo. Fire Emblem, Kid Icarus, Legend of Zelda, Punch Out!!, Kirby, Pokémon, etc. belong to Nintendo and PAC-MAN belongs to Namco.

~Chapter 1- Worries~

It was a normal, beautiful day at the Smash Mansion. Pit was excited but he wasn't so excited about one of the newcomers. The newcomer he wasn't so excited about came from his game, Kid Icarus, and he had written something to Pit that said:

Hey, Pit-Stain, I hope you're excited that I'm coming over to the Smash Mansion. It should be fun to be able to kick your butt and all, but I've been practicing for when we end up fighting together. So you'd better be ready! And I've gotten much stronger since our last fight in the Lunar Sanctum, too. Oh, and I know you're not supposed to know who the newcomer is, so you'd better not tell anyone! Not even that goddess Palutena since she somehow got there before me despite her being a newcomer as well.

Well, I'm looking forward to beating you u- I mean, battling you- when I get there! This should be fun...

-Sincerely, not Pittoo


Pit sighed as he thought about the letter. Great. He thought, My clone's coming... This will be the worst stay in the Smash Mansion I've ever had! I mean, Ptooey being much stronger than me?! When the heck!? He sighed. I can't wait till we can finally leave this place, but...I'll still be dealing with Pittoo anyway. He still lives up in Skyworld, and maybe I shouldn't have looked into that mirror... Now it's going to be miserable...

After thinking, he turned around and walked outside. Well this sucks... He continued thinking, But there's nothing I can do about it, so I guess I'll just hope for the best... Besides, Pittoo won't be as out to get me as he was in Uprising! Well, hopefully at least...

Pit walked towards some fountains and just stared at them, watching the water spout from them.

This is going to be a terrible day. Pit thought with a sigh, I just know it... He then sat on a bench as he watched the fountains.

Okay, so I went along and tried to go by the rules on this site. And in case you're wondering, I decided to use Dark Pit's nickname for Pit from Uprising. I guess they just give each other nicknames and Pit calls Dark Pit “Pittoo” or “Ptooey” and Dark Pit, well...he calls Pit “Pit-Stain.” But Palutena actually comes up with the name Pittoo and after she says that she came up with the nickname, Pit asks, “But not as good as Ptooey, right?” But hopefully I did go by CS rules and that there's nothing on here too...inappropriate for younger viewers. Plus it's my first fanfiction on this site. I've written fanfics before on the site that's on my signature, but...yeah, none of my Kid Icarus or Smash Bros. works are published yet.
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby ectophasm » Fri Aug 21, 2015 4:25 pm

FALCON PAWNCH!
(Totally random, if you want me to remove this I will)
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Fri Aug 21, 2015 4:39 pm

Funfun/SpecialKatana wrote:FALCON PAWNCH!
(Totally random, if you want me to remove this I will)


No, it's fine for now. XD I'm guessing you're a Smash Bros. fan as well? :D And I didn't know if it was okay to post comments on others' fanfiction, but it really is okay for now. :) I'm currently making the second chapter. :D
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Fri Aug 21, 2015 7:43 pm

~Chapter 2- Nervousness~

Later that night, Pit was sort of picking at his food during dinnertime.

“Pit, are you okay?” Asked a voice right next to him that sounded familiar, “You seem down or nervous or something.”

Pit sighed. “Yeah I'm fine, Lady Palutena.” He replied, “I-It's just that I'm nervous about, well... I'm kinda nervous about the newcomers...” Lady Palutena smiled as she scooted a bit closer to Pit.

“It's okay.” She comforted, lightly stroking Pit's hair, “Just because there's newcomers doesn't mean they won't like you.”

“Lady Palutena,” Pit said, “It's not just the newcomers, I'm fine with whoever's coming to the Smash Mansion because I know I'll be able to make new friends and meet new people. It's just...I'm really, really nervous about one of them, okay? I-I would tell you but...they told me not to tell you. And, well...you never know what a newcomer like that would do to me if I told, so please, please, please don't make me tell you. He or she or whatever would probably hate me if I told you!”

“But if you were told by that newcomer, wouldn't they be from our game series? You know, Kid Icarus?” Palutena asked him.

Pit sighed once more, having no idea what to say to the goddess who would care for him in his game series. He was out of words. “They just want it to be a surprise, alright?” He asked her, “And I don't want to spoil it for them, really.”

Palutena sighed. “Okay.” She said, “You don't have to tell me then if neither you or them want to tell me.”

Pit smiled at the goddess. “Thanks, Lady Palutena.” He said, “I'm glad you understand. Oh, and thanks for understanding, too.”

This was enough to make the goddess chuckle. “You're welcome Pit.” She said, “Anytime.”

~Time skip to after dinner brought to you by floor ice cream~

After dinner, Pit went back to his room. Oh boy... He thought with a stretch and a yawn, I sure am tired! Plus I need to get some sleep so I can greet the newcomers tomorrow... He then remembered Dark Pit's note to him. Hopefully this'll be as easy as our first battle. He thought, But too bad I didn't have time to get my skills up before learning that Pittoo was coming. Plus he's gonna call me a puppet like he did back then... I'm sure of it! But at least Lady Palutena's here to help me when I need it!

~Flashback to the boss battle with Dark Pit~

“Bring it, Puppet!” Dark Pit said, firing some arrows from his Silver Bow.

“Hey, who are you calling a puppet?!” Pit questioned, using whatever weapon he had equipped to try and hit Dark Pit.

“When Palutena says jump, you jump. When she says fight, you fight.” Dark explained, “Sounds like a very satisfying existence. For her, that is.”

“I have absolute faith in Lady Palutena!” Pit argued.

“The Mirror of Truth doesn't lie.” Dark Pit said, “I'm a reflection of your true self. So maybe your faith in her isn't so absolute after all.”

While they were carrying on the conversation, they continued to fight each other with the weapons they had equipped.

“What do you know about faith anyway!?” Pit spat, “And that Mirror of Truth you mentioned? It's nothing but a pane of lies! Pandora was just using it as bait!”

“Hm. Seems like I touched a nerve.” Dark Pit said.


~End of flashback~

Pit sighed as he lay down in bed. Maybe that won't happen again... He thought before closing his eyes, But you never know with Pittoo. He could strike at any minute...

Okay, I know that I cut out a piece of dialogue from this when Pit had the flashback of his first battle with Dark Pit/Pittoo. I was going to add it, but I thought, “Nah, maybe it wouldn't be appropriate for children to read.” So I decided to cut it out. Pit calls Dark Pit a name that's not...too bad, but it's pretty mean. At least Dark didn't care when Pit called him that... XD But the dialogue I cut out comes after the “What do you know about faith anyway?” part. He calls Dark Pit a “treacherous” something, but I'm not mentioning it here just in case (and just to be safe). Anyway, I hope you're enjoying the story so far! :D
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Sat Aug 22, 2015 11:24 am

~Chapter 3- The Newcomers Arrive~

The next morning, after breakfast, all the Smashers were excited to see who the newcomers were. But one Smasher, named Pit, was very nervous. Heck, he was even more nervous than he was yesterday!

Once the announcement was made that the newcomers could enter, Pit hid quickly behind Palutena.

Once the doors opened up, one of the newcomers seemed impatient and like they wanted to get in first.

“Come on, come on...” A low voice said, “Out of my way!” Of course, the voice's tone was lower than Pit's.

After everyone else moved aside, Dark Pit was able to be seen.

Pit gulped from fear. P-Ptooey? He thought nervously.

Dark Pit immediately looked at Pit, causing the angel to squeak from fear and quickly hide behind Palutena. Dark rolled his eyes. “Hiding behind your dumb goddess, huh Pit-Stain?” He asked, looking in the direction of the angel.

Pit didn't reply. Instead he just shook from fear.

Dark Pit sighed. “Well at least he's not being annoying like he always is...” He muttered, “And that's good. I'd rather have Pit just shut up for once instead of talking. That would be good.” He then smirked as he walked into the mansion, Duck Hunt Dog, Bowser Jr., and Wario following behind.

Pit gulped as Dark Pit passed him. I don't wanna die, I don't wanna die! He thought as he watched his clone, Please spare me...

After Dark Pit finally passed Pit, he stood in front of a hallway and crossed his arms. “Where's my room?” He asked, turning back around to look at the others.

Palutena smiled. “Down the hall and across Pit's room to the right.” She replied.

Dark Pit rolled his eyes and shook his head. “Wasn't asking you but thanks anyway.” He said as he turned back around to walk down the hallway, Pit suddenly rushed up to Dark Pit, almost knocking the other newcomers over.

“Hey, watch it!” Wario shouted to him as Pit looked back at him.

“O-Oh, sorry W-Wario!” He apologized. Wario just rolled his eyes and turned around to head for the kitchen.
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Sat Aug 22, 2015 12:41 pm

~Chapter 4- Pittoo's Room~

After Pit had led Dark Pit to his room, Pit opened the door.

“Ta-daaaaaa!!” Pit said, holding his hand out towards the inside of Pittoo's room.

Dark Pit walked inside. Well I somehow feel like I'm at home already! He thought, trying not to smile, I mean, it's perfect... Just to my tastes.

Pit smiled. “Well?” He asked, “How do you like it?”

Dark Pit's moment was interrupted by Pit's talking as he looked back at Pit. “Oh, you're still here...” He scoffed, “Hey, Pit-Stain, would you do me a favor and GET THE HECK OUT OF MY ROOM?!”

“Okay, okay!” Pit said, putting his hands up in defense as he slowly backed away, “I was just...wondering if you l-liked it.”

Dark Pit put his hand on the door. “Yes, I do, Pit-Stain.” He replied, “But I would enjoy it more if you weren't in it bugging me...”

“But-” Pit started, trying to say something before the door got shut- more like slammed- in his face. He then sighed. Well, I try to show Pittoo his bedroom but he won't let me... He thought, slowly beginning to walk away from Dark's bedroom door, But...I'm okay with that...I guess... But at least I'll be able to make new friends besides him! ...And Lady Palutena, of course. I mean, how bad could things be?
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Sun Aug 23, 2015 3:24 pm

~Chapter 5- Pit's Thoughts on Dark Pit~

A little later that day, Pit decided he'd go and take a walk to view the outside beauty of the Smash Mansion. I guess Pittoo just doesn't like me as I thought he did... He thought, I mean, Dark Pit's still cold towards me even after Uprising and, well...I just don't get it... What did I ever do to him that made him not like me?! I mean, seriously! Ptooey just acts like he started to like me and stuff possibly due to our...connection and now he's just...being mean again! What next? He's going to side-kick me in the stomach again? And speaking of that, it really felt uncomfortable... Well, it most likely hurt is what I mean... And luckily I didn't eat anything before then or it would have ended up all over him! He slightly chuckled at the thought. Maybe for Pittoo it wouldn't be so funny but to me it is! Well, until he gets me back for it...

He walked back up to the fountains again. They're pretty... He thought, smiling at them, Well, at least I still have the beauty of the fountains to look at! Well it's better than looking at Ptooey's face, though... He again chuckled at his own thought.

Dark Pit walked outside as he saw Pit by the fountains. He then sighed. Looks like Pit-Stain's here... He thought as he slightly glared at the angel, Wonder why... Not that I care about him, anyway. I'm just curious.

His glare then faded into a smirk. Must be sulking after I kicked him out of my room earlier. He then thought, And besides, why would he care whether I like my room or not? I mean, does it really matter if I like my room or not? Or is he just that nosy that he has to ask and know everything about everyone? Because he sure won't make any friends that way! And I know that. All he would have is himself and that dumb goddess Palutena. Everyone here would just make fun of him and if he wants it that way, I can change that... Really quick. I can make it to where no one but Palutena would want to be his friend. His smirk grew as he thought.

Yeah. I like that. Maybe I can go and plan that now... He then snickered to himself before turning around and walking back inside the mansion. But first I gotta eat something. He thought as he started looking for the kitchen, I can't plan anything with an empty stomach.

I know, this story has many spoilers of Uprising, and I'm sorry about that. When I first started the story, I didn't think I'd have any spoilers, but as I went on and thought of things for the story while writing it here, I started adding stuff from Kid Icarus: Uprising and I'm really sorry for the inconvenience. I'll edit the first chapter and put that this story may contain spoilers from Uprising. But I'm really, truly sorry if I spoiled some of the scenes from the game for you. :oops: I also think that where I add the scenes somehow fits with the story, like when Pit had a flashback to when he had his first (boss) battle with Dark Pit. But anyway, I hope you're still enjoying the story so far and have a nice day/evening/night! :D And thank you for reading!
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby Spiritstar3 » Sun Aug 23, 2015 4:06 pm

Falcon punch!
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby April1996 » Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:18 pm

Spiritstar3 wrote:Falcon punch!
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Everyone seems to be Falcon Punching this. :lol: But it's okay. I don't mind. :D
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Fanfiction

Postby Spiritstar3 » Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:22 pm

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