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snapshots of our souls

Postby darkenedmammal » Sat Aug 15, 2015 10:35 am

    my thread for this 100 scenes challenge. this is my first time doing a challenge, as well as writing romance in this way. i appreciate critique, but ask that you pm me it and any other comments instead of posting here. these are in chronological order, unless otherwise stated. the main characters are peter and castiel, two of my simas. will probably feature appearances from my other characters!

    there once was a reaper and an angel.
    one had lived too much, and one had never lived at all.
    a relationship so improbable and the hushed hum of two hearts growing closer.
    a love that taught them both about one another, and themselves.
    picture perfect moments, captured in time.
    snapshots of their souls.


    the prompts.............................................
    “Little by little, day by day, okay?” // “Get. Off. Right now.” // “... That’s it.”
    // “So, uh, we should… probably run now.” // “You’re insane! I love it.”
    “Hey, I offered to help you.” // “Who’s laughing now?” // “Would you please just be quiet?”
    “Whoa, buttercup, whoa.” // "I can’t believe you talked me into this." // “Marry me?”
    “Hey! I was gonna drink that!” // “You did all of this for me?” // “This isn’t over.”
    “If you die, I’m gonna kill you.” // “Well, this is awkward.” // “It was you who was standing there.”
    “That is the stupidest idea you’ve ever had. Of course I’m in.”// “Hey, I’m with you, okay? Always.”
    “Uh, she’s gunna punch you, man.” // “BAHAHAHA- ahem.”// “I think I am concussed.”
    “You have got to be kidding me.” // “This ain’t that kind of movie.” // “Is it… dead?”
    “I’ll just sit here and wait for you to be finished.” // “You wound me.” // “Trust you? PAH.”
    “I don’t know who you are.” // “It’s okay. I promise. I’m here.” // “Oh, this is going to be good.”
    “Well, I finally got your attention.” // “Like a hole in the head.”// “I'm... okay.”
    “Well, are you coming?” // “Where are your pants!?” // “Help me push it.”
    “It’s almost midnight, no way!” // “Positively smashing.” // “Don’t let go, okay?”
    “You can’t leave me like this.” // “Say that to my mother.” // “Sing me a lullaby, please?”
    “This hurts worse than I thought it would.” // “Hah! - oh, wait, you’re serious?”
    “As much as I’d enjoy that…” // -gasp- “The plague!” “No!” “YES.” // “I won’t let you do this.”
    “I’ve still got it.” // “I can’t do it. I just can’t.” // "Don’t you ever do that again!"
    “I thought I lost you.” // "Teach me?" // "Don’t you dare throw that snowball-"
    "It could be worse." // "We’re in the middle of a thunderstorm and you wanna stop and feel the rain?"
    "I’ve seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice." // "What are you so afraid of?”
    “How did you get that scar?” // “You said WHAT?” // “Can you stop bringing that up?”
    “Wait for me!” // “We’ll be dead by morning.” // “STOP TALKING.” // “I do.”
    “I don’t want to.” // “What did I ever do to you?!” // “Follow me.”
    -SIGH- “I can’t reach it.” // “What are you waiting for?” // “WAIT NO THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT-”
    “I don’t need you.” // “You deserve better.” // “If you love something, let it go.”
    “Why do I have to wear this?” // “Here goes nothing.” // “Where the heck were you?!”
    “I don’t need help.” // “We’re gonna be parents…” // “I didn’t think you knew.”
    “I thought those were poisonous.” // “Don’t make me go alone.” // “I’m sorry… I didn’t know.”
    “I’d be lost without you.” // “Just leave me!” // “I dare you to…” // “Run!”
    “How did you manage that?” // “Liar!” // “I don’t even want to be here.”
    “Oh crap, we fell asleep!” // “Is this the life you wanted?” // “GIVE ME THAT.”
    “Get back here!” // “Let go of me!” // “I’ll just follow you.” // “YOU DON’T SAY.”
    “And yet, you love me anyway.” // “I just thought I’d have a swim.” // “Don’t cry.”
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“little by little, day by day, okay?”

Postby darkenedmammal » Mon Aug 31, 2015 6:47 am

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When walking one evening, the last thing you'd expect to be doing is taking a man to the hospital, right? that was, however, the exact opinion peter had on the situation he was in.
xxxxxhe had gone out that afternoon, to clear his mind and ease his body. it was on his way back, when the world had begun to darken, had he found him. the man had been leaning against a tree, partially hidden between branches. it was obvious he was in pain when peter saw him. not to ignore one in need, peter had immediately rushed to his side when the man had stumbled onto the road. his hand slipped around the injured man's waist as his eyes dashed around what he could see of the others body in the dim light. "are you alright?" he demanded, the man gave a wheezy no in reply. wetness covered his palm, and he peeled his hand off to see a dark scarlet coating his palm- blood. his eyes widened as he realized there were massive blotches of red on the back of the man's shirt. suddenly, the man's knees buckled, and peter fell with him at the sudden weight. "what's your name?" peter asked, observing and feeling for any other damage. glassy eyes met his own, as the man replied "my name is-" he paused to take a shallow breath, "castiel". his eyes blinked a few times before slipping shut, his body went limp barely a moment after.

xxxxxswearing loudly, peter pulled his phone out of his pocket, his other hand going to the man's (castiel's he corrected) neck to check for a pulse. deftly pressing the numbers 9-1-1, he could only chant 'come on' as the phone in his hand rang, when the operator finally answered with a calm tone, peter whispered a thankful phrase before stating the situation. once he had been assured an ambulance was on the way, he flipped castiel onto his back, who gave a pained groan. he tore at the shirt, cursing when the fabric didn't give way. putting more force into the action, he allowed himself a smile when a satisfying rip filled the air. he paused at the sight before him, his entire upper back was littered with a mix of burns and gashes. he set upon taking off his own shirt, applying pressure to as many wounds as he could at once. though his hands were steady, he hesitated when castiel gave a low whine. he did not know the man, but his strong features suggested a similar character, if his assumption was correct, the amount of pain the man was in... he could only hope that the ambulance would arrive soon.

xxxxxin a mess of flashing sirens and rushed actions to stop the bleeding, they began the ride to the hospital. after subjecting to what could only be called an interrogation, peter could only stay clear of the EMT's and wish for the best.

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