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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby hollowfall. » Mon Jul 11, 2016 12:54 am

After the welcoming, Tanner sprinted to the front of the line with knots in his stomach. He needed Tressie to navigate him around or he'd be a complete sheep in a zoo, sheep are supposed to be in farms. But if he was going to be a 'sheep', he'd be an adjusting sheep... And those were the words that grabbed uneasy stares to look at him when he shouted them out loud. Tressie was also nowhere to be found. "Nice..." He muttered lowly with sarcasm.


Opinions? It's just the first part of one of the chapters of this fanfiction kinda' story I'm writing except the characters are OCs.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby redhorizon » Mon Jul 11, 2016 1:15 am

NOM, YOU NEED TO WRITE, I'M DYING OVER HERE xD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:07 am

@Mori- That's really good! It was funny too ^^

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Silver, did you see this?

Ranger of the North wrote:
SilverCrescentMoon wrote:Lol Krenko, how did that even happen? XD

25, 000 words! Go Ranger go! Go Ranger go!

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OwO Congrats! So...many...words... 30,000! 30,000! 30,000!

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Nomonym » Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:39 am

*yawns* morning my lovelies.

I know I need to write. I am excited. I am just trying to decide of i should edit my first chapter's mistakes first. XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby redhorizon » Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:41 am

xD I usually just leave it until I'm done with the first few chapters.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby anxious ghost » Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:43 am

NomFlavoredPudding wrote:*yawns* morning my lovelies.

I know I need to write. I am excited. I am just trying to decide of i should edit my first chapter's mistakes first. XD


Morning!
Just leave it. There weren't that many mistakes anyway, and we're all dying from the wait XD


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:46 am

NomFlavoredPudding wrote:*yawns* morning my lovelies.

I know I need to write. I am excited. I am just trying to decide of i should edit my first chapter's mistakes first. XD

Leave it until later. I really want to see the next chapter!

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Nomonym » Mon Jul 11, 2016 3:59 am

Right. I will get a jump on Chapter 2 then ^-^

I am so glad you all are really into this story xDDD *pride swells*
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby redhorizon » Mon Jul 11, 2016 4:09 am

YASSSSSSSSSS *Starts refreshing constantly* I LOVE ITTTTTTT
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Mon Jul 11, 2016 4:19 am

Where can I see chapter one, if that has been posted yet...? Unless I already read it, but I forgot whom it was that wrote it XD
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