❛ the lazy writers ❜

[anxious ghost]

Both! They're a traitor and then death!

[Woogwoo Wren]

That might work... XD

[offline.]

Does anyone here have a Wattpad account? Oh my lord, I just started a new story and I WANT EVERYONE TO READ IT RIGHT THIS INSTANT
GAH

[anxious ghost]

Nope, sorry :(

Will you guys read over this real quick for me and give thoughts?

It was quiet at first on the plane, but Spencer was restless.
"How long will we be in this thing?" He asked Toby for the tenth time.
"A few hours, Spencer. Calm down."
"But what if-"
"Spencer." Toby sounded like he scolding a child. Their conversation caught Desmond's attention, who was sitting next to them.
"Odds are we won't crash, if that's what you're worried about. There's roughly one crash per one point two million flights. It's much safer than a car." He said, though Spencer was still unconvinced. Desmond held his hand out to Spencer.
"Desmond Kingsley." Spencer nodded and shook his hand.
"Spencer Cassidy. This is Toby Forde." He nodded to Toby, who was writing in a journal. Spencer nudged him with his elbow.
"Oh - hi." Toby said, giving Desmond a small wave before writing once more.
Spencer and Desmond started making small talk, while in the next isle, Delta and Mack were sitting next to each other.
Delta spoke first:
"We're you in the Army, Miss?" She asked softly. Mack was, as always, wearing her Army fatigue jacket. Mack nodded.
"I was."
"Thank you for your service, Miss."
Mack gave her a small smile and shook her head.
"That's not necessary. Holly Mackenzie, but I prefer Mack. And you are?" She held out her hand as she asked.
"Delta Rose. Nice to meet you." She shook her hand, smiling softly.
"You too. And nice hair, by the way." Mack gestured to the younger girl's bright, teal-ish blue hair.
"Thanks."

And so it continued. Soon they were all sitting by each other talking. Unfortunately for Toby, Spencer made friends fast.
"You guys should've seen him! He's adorable when he wakes up, it reminds me of that American cat, the angry one. Toby?"
"Grumpy Cat." He grumbled, not even looking up from his writing. Spencer nodded enthusiastically.
"Yeah, that one! He looks like Grumpy Cat when he wakes up!"
Everyone was laughing at this, except Toby, who's face was bright red. He continued to try to ignore them all while they discussed his sleep/wake habits.
That proved to be harder than he thought, since Spencer did not know how to shut up. He eventually elbowed him in the ribs, saying,
"That's enough. Talk about something else."

[Woogwoo Wren]

I have a Wattpad account. I'm spanner339 on there (I think I have a link in my signature actually)

@Mori I really like it!!! You're good with the dialogue!

[offline.]

@BadWolf- THE LINK IS IN MY SIG CAN YOU PLEASE READ IT
sorry for yelling but I hold excitement in my heart.
*hand over heart, staring at sunset*

[Ranger of the North]

Kia ora, Hollow! You've been warned about carrots, so there's really nothing for me to say, except I look forward to seeing the little work your laziness will let you write!

Wow, that's great, Steve!

Juni, I've got an account, I'll see if I can check it out

[Ranger of the North]

Silver, did you see this?

Lol Krenko, how did that even happen? XD

25, 000 words! Go Ranger go! Go Ranger go!

Woo! 25, 007 words!!

[TheSongOfTheStars]

What do you feel like is your biggest strength and weakness when it comes to writing a story?
I feel like I'm pretty good at beginnings. Even though I usually end up revising, when I start, I'm just all pumped up for the story that it ends up sounding really nice. Everywhere else is a problem though...


What's the wisest/smartest thing a character you have created said?

"Blood before breath"

Townly, going all poetic on me. Basically he said that his promise to his father wasn't worth the relationship with his brother.


Wren: Write it out and if you decide to change it, change it. But y'know a shocker in a story is a great thing to have, along with emotions.

Kobe: Hello!
Z: Hi!

[hollowfall.]

Kia ora, Hollow! You've been warned about carrots, so there's really nothing for me to say, except I look forward to seeing the little work your laziness will let you write!

Thanks!