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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby ᴛsᴜᴋᴜʏᴏᴍɪ » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:49 pm

Lillybear wrote:
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    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
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I just joined as well, hope we can all get along~
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby hellebore » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:51 pm

Aliria wrote:
Lillybear wrote:
    -waves-
    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
    <33


Welcome! Now that you're here, be sure to avoid carrots, they're very dangerous. Very.

Apparently this thread nearly got locked due to the carrot thing, so I don't think you guys should be bringing it up to every new person that comes along.

Also, Lillybear, even if you don't want to share any of your writing, we sometimes ask each other questions that you may enjoy answering. c:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby anxious ghost » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:55 pm

Lillybear wrote:
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    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
    <33


Welcome! Lazy writing is kinda what we do, so you'll fit right in!


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Aliria » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:55 pm

gunpowder. wrote:
Aliria wrote:
Lillybear wrote:
    -waves-
    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
    <33


Welcome! Now that you're here, be sure to avoid carrots, they're very dangerous. Very.

Apparently this thread nearly got locked due to the carrot thing, so I don't think you guys should be bringing it up to every new person that comes along.

Also, Lillybear, even if you don't want to share any of your writing, we sometimes ask each other questions that you may enjoy answering. c:


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Lillybear » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:55 pm

    Eyy Captain!
    I guess I should've said that in my introductory post huh -facepalms-
    I like romance, (though I'm bad at writing it) fantasy, and adventure!
    Oh yes poetry is nice too I love haiku
    Thanks for asking!
    Trapdragon,, thanks!! Yeah defiantly!
    Aliria what lol okay?? And thanks!
    You all are so nice <33
    gunpowder. sounds fun, I'll probably share some though I don't have a lot c:
    Moriarty thanks! yup yup yup
    whew this thread moves fast, had to keep adding new responses
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:57 pm

Severus Snape wrote:Which story/stories of yours do you most want people to read and give feedback on?
The Phantom and The Magician ---- same story on another site

Inkitt has contests periodically and I am considering entering the one listed above, it's a Harry Potter crossover.

*is v wowed*
I'm only up to chapter four, but it's really, really good!
I love your description, teach me your secrets!!
XD


SilverCrescentMoon wrote:
gunpowder. wrote:Ah, not right now, thanks. I just got here and I'm trying to interact with those that are posting, to get a feel for the thread.

Does anyone else find that the types of books they read, affects their writing style?


Definitely. In fact, it's really hard for me not to make my stories too similar to the ones I read. Percy Jackson series and the Maze Runner series have probably had the biggest effect on my writing, but so have Divergent and Harry Potter.

Which story/stories of yours do you most want people to read and give feedback on?
The Confound Nexus and Feral Heart.

Love 'em.
But then, you knew that, didn't you? XD


MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
@Ranger: Yup, time to go off and write about a MexicanGrizzlyBear or a Shakesbear. :lol: 8-)

Yay! :lol:


katomorakwarrior wrote:
Ranger of the North wrote:
katomorakwarrior wrote:My username came straight out of one of my stories...

*gasp*
I wanna see!!
Can we see it? Image
come on, you can't deny the big puppy eyes!??



Basically, like ten years ago my mother and I invented a vast alternate universe. There's about 11 planets and about 20-some different races, one of which are Katomoraks...
They're generally thought of as bad guys, but there are a few hero-heroines (Bleal, Sondar, Mafista, Nede, Melik, etc.)
But sending you this is generally easier.. (wrote it like four or five years ago... but yah.. Go ahead...Poor Jakitai.. He's a bad guy though... so whatever...)


A twig snapped and the pirate swung around, his fists clenched around the black hilt of his Katomorak sword.

A tall figure, garbed in the uniform of an Illian warrior, stood before him, leaning carelessly against a smooth-barked tree.

The pirate waited for the stranger to make the first move, his gaze unwavering. About them, the hoarse cries of Illian warriors and interplanetary pirates mingled in the night. The blast of Nordone weapons thundered in their ears. The pirate dove to the ground as a bomb smashed against the forest floor mere yards away with a deafening crash. As he staggered hurriedly to his feet, his head still ringing from the affects of the bomb, the pirate saw the stranger straighten and approach, one hand gripping the hilt of the Katomorak sword sheathed at his hip. The pirate’s dark eyes narrowed as he brought his sword up to protect his chest and neck.

The stranger stopped and looked the pirate square in the eye.

There was a flash of light as the blinding glow of Illiae’s three moons hit the blade of the dark figure’s sword and the pirate inhaled hastily, his free hand straying to his right arm. Shaking his head to clear his thoughts, the man pulled his hand away from the bloody wound and threw his blade against the stranger’s.

The stranger held his ground and pushed back against the pirate.

Gritting his teeth, the man spun to avoid being trapped between the stranger’s sword and an immense tree. He aimed a blow at his opponent’s back but his sword sliced through thin air as the Illian warrior skipped nimbly away. The pirate barely felt the deep wound in his arm as he blocked the other man’s attacks. The clash of swords echoed in his ears as his blade went up, almost mechanically, time and time again. Suddenly, he saw the blade of his opponent’s sword grow red and heard the hiss of flames as the Katomorak sword’s original purpose was put into use, a sword of fire. Sparks flew as the two swords smashed together once more.

The stranger forced the interplanetary pirate to his knees, the sword in his hands growing hotter by the second. The pirate attempted to roll away but, instantly grabbing the abandoned sword, the Illian warrior thrust it into its owner’s cloak. In one swift movement, the pirate, the blazing sword embedded in his heart, lay dead at the stranger’s feet.

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Dove. wrote:I don't think i'll be able to do the username challenge.
Because I started writing about it then, I turned it into a story.
IT"S SO FABULOUS.
So I must ty for creating this challenge Ranger.

Lol np XD
Can we see?! :D


Krenko wrote:ummm ok XD

That isn't the story of HOW I got my username, more a story about what my username is named after...yeah

:shock:
No way.
I totally thought you were a snot-smearing troll!!
That's amazing!
But
how dare you lie to us!!??
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Lillybear wrote:
    -waves-
    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
    <33

Kia ora!
Welcome!
Don't eat carrots!
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we so need to stop that


gunpowder. wrote:
Aliria wrote:
Lillybear wrote:
    -waves-
    Hello! I'm Lillybear, a v lazy writer.
    And uhh,, yeah p much got accepted and wanted to introduce myself
    My stuff is soo lazy don't ask to see it pls
    I hope I'll come to know some of ya! I'm sure I can relate w stuff haha
    <33


Welcome! Now that you're here, be sure to avoid carrots, they're very dangerous. Very.

Apparently this thread nearly got locked due to the carrot thing, so I don't think you guys should be bringing it up to every new person that comes along.

Also, Lillybear, even if you don't want to share any of your writing, we sometimes ask each other questions that you may enjoy answering. c:

Not quite, I think :D
We nearly got it locked because of narwhales (don't ask :lol: )
carrots were because someone had an undefeatable villian, so Afflated suggested they bad-guy choked to death on a carrot :lol:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby hellebore » Tue Jul 05, 2016 1:01 pm

@ Lillybear
I was also surprised by how fast this thread moves.

I have a question that I probably should have asked earlier... Cx
How do you guys define a lazy writer?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby anxious ghost » Tue Jul 05, 2016 1:02 pm

katomorakwarrior wrote:
Ranger of the North wrote:
katomorakwarrior wrote:My username came straight out of one of my stories...

*gasp*
I wanna see!!
Can we see it? Image
come on, you can't deny the big puppy eyes!??



Basically, like ten years ago my mother and I invented a vast alternate universe. There's about 11 planets and about 20-some different races, one of which are Katomoraks...
They're generally thought of as bad guys, but there are a few hero-heroines (Bleal, Sondar, Mafista, Nede, Melik, etc.)
But sending you this is generally easier.. (wrote it like four or five years ago... but yah.. Go ahead...Poor Jakitai.. He's a bad guy though... so whatever...)


A twig snapped and the pirate swung around, his fists clenched around the black hilt of his Katomorak sword.

A tall figure, garbed in the uniform of an Illian warrior, stood before him, leaning carelessly against a smooth-barked tree.

The pirate waited for the stranger to make the first move, his gaze unwavering. About them, the hoarse cries of Illian warriors and interplanetary pirates mingled in the night. The blast of Nordone weapons thundered in their ears. The pirate dove to the ground as a bomb smashed against the forest floor mere yards away with a deafening crash. As he staggered hurriedly to his feet, his head still ringing from the affects of the bomb, the pirate saw the stranger straighten and approach, one hand gripping the hilt of the Katomorak sword sheathed at his hip. The pirate’s dark eyes narrowed as he brought his sword up to protect his chest and neck.

The stranger stopped and looked the pirate square in the eye.

There was a flash of light as the blinding glow of Illiae’s three moons hit the blade of the dark figure’s sword and the pirate inhaled hastily, his free hand straying to his right arm. Shaking his head to clear his thoughts, the man pulled his hand away from the bloody wound and threw his blade against the stranger’s.

The stranger held his ground and pushed back against the pirate.

Gritting his teeth, the man spun to avoid being trapped between the stranger’s sword and an immense tree. He aimed a blow at his opponent’s back but his sword sliced through thin air as the Illian warrior skipped nimbly away. The pirate barely felt the deep wound in his arm as he blocked the other man’s attacks. The clash of swords echoed in his ears as his blade went up, almost mechanically, time and time again. Suddenly, he saw the blade of his opponent’s sword grow red and heard the hiss of flames as the Katomorak sword’s original purpose was put into use, a sword of fire. Sparks flew as the two swords smashed together once more.

The stranger forced the interplanetary pirate to his knees, the sword in his hands growing hotter by the second. The pirate attempted to roll away but, instantly grabbing the abandoned sword, the Illian warrior thrust it into its owner’s cloak. In one swift movement, the pirate, the blazing sword embedded in his heart, lay dead at the stranger’s feet.


That's so good! Love it <3


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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Tue Jul 05, 2016 1:03 pm

NOT A TROLL, A GOBLIN
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Aliria » Tue Jul 05, 2016 1:03 pm

gunpowder. wrote:@ Lillybear
I was also surprised by how fast this thread moves.

I have a question that I probably should have asked earlier... Cx
How do you guys define a lazy writer?


If you are a writer, and consider yourself lazy, you are a lazy writer. There's no specific definition.
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