❛ the lazy writers ❜

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:34 am

MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Alright, honesty time guys.
Has anyone ever written something, and while your writing it, you start crying. And not like some single tear, like actually crying.
Cause bro, that just currently happened to me.
Why do they have to make you have the feels. :cry: :evil:


Krenko, thanks for that lovely comment.
So Much support. :lol:


Crying from laughter, yes. Crying from sadness, nope. Crying from happiness...ummmm, nope, probably not XD. However, I don't have many cry worthy since, unless you count the ones that your crying BECAUSE IT'S SO FUNNY. XD

You're welcome, I'm sooo helpful, aren't I? XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Aliria » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:39 am

MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Alright, honesty time guys.
Has anyone ever written something, and while your writing it, you start crying. And not like some single tear, like actually crying.
Cause bro, that just currently happened to me.
Why do they have to make you have the feels. :cry: :evil:


Krenko, thanks for that lovely comment.
So Much support. :lol:


Nope, because I'm an emotionless robot who is incapable of crying.

Okay not really. I've written plenty of sad stuff, but nothing quite to the point of actually crying.

In other news, yesterday I wrote one of my main characters murdering somebody in cold blood and not caring in the slightest. It was quite fun, maybe I'll do it again sometime.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:39 am

I've never cried from my own writing, unless crying because I suck counts XD I cry from other people's books though. The Death Cure seriously gave me the feels...and The Blood of Olympus...well I didn't cry for that one, but I was sad cause it was over. And it was amazing.

Wow Aliria. Sounds fun. XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:40 am

*inches away* oooooooooooooooooooooook then

I'm scared now
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❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby ArtsheepNZ » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:57 am

MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Alright, honesty time guys.
Has anyone ever written something, and while your writing it, you start crying. And not like some single tear, like actually crying.
Cause bro, that just currently happened to me.
Why do they have to make you have the feels. :cry: :evil:


Krenko, thanks for that lovely comment.
So Much support. :lol:

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Admit I have more than once
But it's mostly writing the /aftermath/ of someone's death that gets me
Prime plz don't cry this make me sad
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:02 am

Krenko wrote:Ok, guys, so this is what DeMaizu and I made

I need to break away -
Away from this shadow looming over me.
The fights every day
I'm leaving, but somehow back by your side.
You tell me everyday not to ruin your pride

But how can you expect me to help your ego?
I am human too, you know,
And you're expecting me to be your copy.
Same personality, same hobbies
As the perfect, untouchable you.

Why can't you see that I want to be me?
Or are you blind to this, seeing nothing but your legend?
Is wanting to be different something you can't comprehend?
And of course you turn me away in favor of your career.
When you talk to me it's only to instill fear.

So I'll be leaving, ducking out from under your shadow.
Into the light, the flower full meadow
And find my own way, not just your puppet.
I don't care if my funds plummet,
Because your soul already has.

I'm done with all these family traditions
So you can just deal with your sense of disappointment.
Now I'll follow my own ambitions
Without you hovering over my every move,
Worrying if you would or would not approve.

I've finally left your shadow -
See you later.

D'at's rlly cool! :clap: :thumbup: :D
Who's judging, then??


feliks wrote:
feliks wrote:
    your blurred face, that's all i remember.
    staring down at me,
    why can't i see your face?
    my hand reaches out to touch you,
    but you're gone.



    "feliks."
    "feliks, wake up."

    that voice..
    i opened my eyes, the dim and pale light shining through the window beside my bed made me squint.
    it was morning. again. i didn't want to wake up, but i suppose i had to.

    my mother was standing in my doorway. "look, i know you've been going through a rough time, but you've got to get up."
    "you've missed two weeks of school already, and i don't feel like going to jail because you aren't getting an education. get up. now." she said harshly, closing my door and walking away. a lump formed in my throat and i felt as if i was about to cry, but i didn't. i told myself that i don't deserve to cry over something like this. i got up and sat on the side of my bed, my fingers running through my hair. i kept having that same recurring dream and i couldn't figure out what it meant. who was it? why couldn't i see their face? i got up and changed out of my pajamas. i pulled a green shirt over my head and threw on some pants.
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    i'll finish this later


    i don't know what to do with this, or if people are even interested
    let me know

Oh, I'm interested!
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Aliria wrote:
MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Alright, honesty time guys.
Has anyone ever written something, and while your writing it, you start crying. And not like some single tear, like actually crying.
Cause bro, that just currently happened to me.
Why do they have to make you have the feels. :cry: :evil:


Krenko, thanks for that lovely comment.
So Much support. :lol:


Nope, because I'm an emotionless robot who is incapable of crying.

Okay not really. I've written plenty of sad stuff, but nothing quite to the point of actually crying.

In other news, yesterday I wrote one of my main characters murdering somebody in cold blood and not caring in the slightest. It was quite fun, maybe I'll do it again sometime.

:shock:
Remind me not to get on your bad side.
:shock:
*chuckles nervously*
:shock:
We are friends, right!...?
:?


MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
\[0o0]/ OH MY FREAKING GEEZ \[0o0]/
*flips desk*
Why hasn't anyone reminded me about the dang Poem thing!!
My partner sent me theirs and I'm just sitting here.

Wow, someone got a rude awakening :lol: :lol:

I don't think I've ever cried while writing?? :/
The world is quiet here.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:08 am

Aliria, are you part of the poem thing? If not, you wanna judge?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Aliria » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:19 am

Krenko wrote:Aliria, are you part of the poem thing? If not, you wanna judge?


I'm not part of it, but I'd prefer not to judge either. If you can't get any other judges, I'd be willing, but I'd prefer not to.

Also, if nobody has any complaints, I'm sending in a help ticket about taking over the thread.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:22 am

go ahead, I'm to lazy to run it XD

just...don't kill us, all right?

Anyone ELSE want to judge? XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Silver Pandorica » Wed Jun 29, 2016 10:23 am

Sounds good! It's about time someone else took charge here XD

And please don't murder me...
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