❛ the lazy writers ❜

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Tue Jun 28, 2016 3:14 pm

Krenko wrote:A writing thing or something, IDK not part of it.
Just to be sure, you did get my challenge entry, correct?


Yup, you just reminded me about it!! :)

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby imakilljoywannabe » Tue Jun 28, 2016 3:24 pm

MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Krenko wrote:A writing thing or something, IDK not part of it.
Just to be sure, you did get my challenge entry, correct?


Yup, you just reminded me about it!! :)

The Writing Contest Ends: July 1, 2016!!
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Ooh, are you still looking for a judge? :o ((I'm almost done reviewing the piece you sent me, Imve been getting settled into my routine for summer and now that I am I have lots of time!))

NopesaurusRexx wrote:Random question, just throwing it in here

Anyone doing Camp Nano? I wasn't going t because no time, but then I joined a group that's doing a challenge against each other called Cabin Wars and I got excited....so now I'm participating.:p

I did the full NanoWriMo in 2014 for my creative writing class XD I might join in again ((I know this is the camp version)), if it's sill open c;
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Tue Jun 28, 2016 3:34 pm

imakilljoywannabe wrote:
MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Krenko wrote:A writing thing or something, IDK not part of it.
Just to be sure, you did get my challenge entry, correct?


Yup, you just reminded me about it!! :)

The Writing Contest Ends: July 1, 2016!!
Bloop

Ooh, are you still looking for a judge? :o ((I'm almost done reviewing the piece you sent me, Imve been getting settled into my routine for summer and now that I am I have lots of time!))


Yup, I'm still looking for judges, I've only got one so far.
And take your time, I've written more to it… but I'm slowly abandoning it even though it's almost finished. :oops:

And other news, I've sighed up for the writing thing. Now just exploring everything. :lol:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue Jun 28, 2016 3:39 pm

MexicanGrizzlyBear wrote:
Yup, I'm still looking for judges, I've only got one so far.
And take your time, I've written more to it… but I'm slowly abandoning it even though it's almost finished. :oops:

And other news, I've sighed up for the writing thing. Now just exploring everything. :lol:

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby DeMaizu » Wed Jun 29, 2016 6:31 am

NopesaurusRexx wrote:Random question, just throwing it in here

Anyone doing Camp Nano? I wasn't going t because no time, but then I joined a group that's doing a challenge against each other called Cabin Wars and I got excited....so now I'm participating.:p

Prolly not. I mean, me an' my sister are in a summer writing class, but I don't know if we'll be in NaNoWriMo, the camp, or whatnot.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:25 am

Ok, guys, so this is what DeMaizu and I made

I need to break away -
Away from this shadow looming over me.
The fights every day
I'm leaving, but somehow back by your side.
You tell me everyday not to ruin your pride

But how can you expect me to help your ego?
I am human too, you know,
And you're expecting me to be your copy.
Same personality, same hobbies
As the perfect, untouchable you.

Why can't you see that I want to be me?
Or are you blind to this, seeing nothing but your legend?
Is wanting to be different something you can't comprehend?
And of course you turn me away in favor of your career.
When you talk to me it's only to instill fear.

So I'll be leaving, ducking out from under your shadow.
Into the light, the flower full meadow
And find my own way, not just your puppet.
I don't care if my funds plummet,
Because your soul already has.

I'm done with all these family traditions
So you can just deal with your sense of disappointment.
Now I'll follow my own ambitions
Without you hovering over my every move,
Worrying if you would or would not approve.

I've finally left your shadow -
See you later.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:28 am

\[0o0]/ OH MY FREAKING GEEZ \[0o0]/
*flips desk*
Why hasn't anyone reminded me about the dang Poem thing!!
My partner sent me theirs and I'm just sitting here.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Krenko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:39 am

of course!

ummmmmm, there's 2d left if that's any help, Grizzly. I've been asking on this thread XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Aliria » Wed Jun 29, 2016 8:50 am

feliks wrote:
feliks wrote:
    your blurred face, that's all i remember.
    staring down at me,
    why can't i see your face?
    my hand reaches out to touch you,
    but you're gone.



    "feliks."
    "feliks, wake up."

    that voice..
    i opened my eyes, the dim and pale light shining through the window beside my bed made me squint.
    it was morning. again. i didn't want to wake up, but i suppose i had to.

    my mother was standing in my doorway. "look, i know you've been going through a rough time, but you've got to get up."
    "you've missed two weeks of school already, and i don't feel like going to jail because you aren't getting an education. get up. now." she said harshly, closing my door and walking away. a lump formed in my throat and i felt as if i was about to cry, but i didn't. i told myself that i don't deserve to cry over something like this. i got up and sat on the side of my bed, my fingers running through my hair. i kept having that same recurring dream and i couldn't figure out what it meant. who was it? why couldn't i see their face? i got up and changed out of my pajamas. i pulled a green shirt over my head and threw on some pants.
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    i'll finish this later


    i don't know what to do with this, or if people are even interested
    let me know


This seems interesting to me! It seems like it could go in a lot of different directions from here, all of them interesting.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Wed Jun 29, 2016 9:31 am

Alright, honesty time guys.
Has anyone ever written something, and while your writing it, you start crying. And not like some single tear, like actually crying.
Cause bro, that just currently happened to me.
Why do they have to make you have the feels. :cry: :evil:


Krenko, thanks for that lovely comment.
So Much support. :lol:
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