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(( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 10:18 am

    Hi. I'm Aonaira. The 'o' in my name is silent...
    So I'm being told to write this by my school guidance counselor, so I can "vent to paper" instead of whatever I was doing, because apparently, drawing in school is forbidden unless school's "out" (dorm schools suck), you're an art student, or you're in art class. Which is okay because I can't draw but really?

    I guess I should put write a little bit about me down...? Maybe.
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  1. My full name is Aonaira Diamond Featherwing.
  2. My best friend is called Skyler. He goes by Sky and he's pretty cool.
  3. I have an older sister and a little brother. It sucks being the middle child.
  4. Sky and I go to a boarding school. We've been going here for a few days, and I hate it. The boarding school is called "Lavender Hills Boarding" and it's a school for "special" dogs like Sky; those who can fly/are angels/have wings, those who only got in the school because they know royalty, those who can use magic, those who are half-breeds... A school for basically everyone but myself. I'm nothing special. Smarts don't count as talent anyway. Besides. My grammar can't always be that good great, simply because my native (is that it?) language isn't English, even though I've been living here for sixteen years (I grew up in a Japanese-Spanish speaking household). I'm seventeen, by the way.
  5. I already has have an enemy. Ugh. Great Good going me.
  6. I'm very shy. I'm basically a living description definition(?) of a wallflower. And it sucks.
    So yeah, that's a little small little bit about me. I'm currently sitting in the dorm room I share with three other girls, one girl called Aviator. She's... Kind of cool, I guess. She's the best writer I now know and helps me proof-read everything I have to turn in as an assigment assignment. She's also been giving me English lessons so my English can be good better. I'm not a very fast learner though... (although my English is better than my parent's parents' and little brother's. My sister's is pretty okay though. Better than mine.)
    Aviator goes by Avi or Ava and she can preform limited magic spells (one which backfired and gave her light brown ram horns). She also has purple and black butterfly wings.
    The two other girls I share it with are Ever (who is the weirdest dog half-breed I know) and someone called Amelia. Ever is a half-breed as I mentioned... And she's somehow related to the infamous Balstik Basilisk of whatever supposed mythology it crawled out of. Despite being the creepiest dog ever (kind of. Her tail has teeth and a mouth, her eyes are yellow with a snake-slit for a pupils, and she has white ram horns. No idea where the ram horns came from), she's actually pretty uh.... Nice?
    Amelia I haven't met yet. Ava just said that she'd be late for the school year because her father who lives out of the country had recently had surgery, so she had to make sure he was okay. She should be coming back to school soon, according to her at least. Amelia, according to Ava, can do healing spells, but can't cure some diseases; such as cancer, fixing something that needs surgery on, ect. She can only heal things like common sickness - colds, fevers, allergies, and the occasional flu if it's common enough. She really does sound interesting. She sounds pretty special...
    Then we come back to me. I'm not special. I have no idea why I'm even in this school. My mom thinks that by sending me here I'll discover what my special "power" is, since my sister can do magic (and fight. I forgot to mention that really, really, really good fighters can get into this school too. They just have to have traces of some sort of special ability in their blood somewhere) and my little brother can fly. My sister actually came here and graduated last year, so that's why Mom sent me here. I was honestly more happy going to a normal school.

    So anyway I uh.... Have to go. We're being called to the Meeting Room (that's what I call it anyway. I think it's the autitorim? I don't know how to spell it, sorry). I might just bring this journal thing along because the counselor said that if she caught me without it I'd be in trouble so.... Yeah...
    Uh... Sayōnara.
    Aonaira.

    hey guys.
    this is my attempt to write something that may actually become popular. hah.
    uh.... this story is based around a japanese-spanish girl (dog) called aonaira who believes she isn't special and has pretty much given up on finding what's special about her. she meets friends who try and pull her out of her shell and help her try and find what's special (potion making/magic/fighting/"super power"/you name it) about her, and she meets enemies who just say she's useless and was even lucky to get into this school.
    i plan on taking a few users' dogs into this story! uh... there will be a form and you can decide if you want to end up being friends with her or what. i'm gonna go on and open it (only accepting five at the time. sorry!) so if you'd like a pet and you like the idea of this story already, please fill out a form c: i will not reserve a spot for you. first come first serve. thanks!
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(( i gave up (pet diary) - form & user pets

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 10:18 am

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    paste this form into the comments and the first five i'll accept! (please only be dogs for the while. however your character MAY be a shapeshifter) if your character needs a last name in the future, i may just make one up unless you give me one you'd like me to use.
    you may currently only send in ONE FORM. so that means one pet per person!

    Code: Select all
    [size=75][list][center]pet image here
    [b]name;[/b] answer (include any nicknames!)
    [b]gender;[/b] answer
    [b]talent;[/b] this could be any type of superpower you can think of, or even having ram horns/wings/those weird mouth tail things that came out on halloween. they can have magic, fly, or be one of the best fighters ever! just think of something so that the dogs aren't normal. they can even be a shapeshifter.
    [b]personality;[/b] answer
    [b]hobbies;[/b] one or two (limit) things that your character likes to do in their free time.
    [b]will they ever be a friend of aonaira?;[/b] if your answer is yes, just state when you want them to become friends. if no then just leave it at no.
    [b]group;[/b] popular/jock/emos/outcasts/nobodies
    [b]anything else?;[/b] if there's anything else you'd like to add, add it here![/center][/list][/size]

    example form;

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    name; skyler edwards. nicknames are sky, grey, and redfoot
    gender; male
    talent; flight. he's a semi-okay fighter.
    personality; skyler is a chill dude who enjoys hanging out with friends. he's friendly but can be cold and harsh, especially if someone's making fun of one of his friends. he looks out for everyone he cares about. he's not that big on sports or fighting with words or his weapon, but he takes the course because of his dad. he can be a joker or a pranker on occasion and he isn't the biggest fan on being serious.
    hobbies; flying, hanging out with friends, and cracking the occasional joke.
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; yes. they're already friends before the story even begins.
    group; outcast.
    anything else?; nope!

    other users' dogs wrote:the forms are currently open
    1. (Queen) Candy - Mylityro
    2. Luna Nightshade - 20lait1
    3. Dakoda - nerdlord
    4. Hollow - Unbroken.::. Souls
    5. open
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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby jouska. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 10:55 am

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    name; queen candy (candy)
    gender; female
    talent; candy is blessed with the gift of magics. she can create illusions and manipulate the mind. she can also use levitation to levitate things but she isn't very good at it.
    personality; sweet, hyper, intelligent, loyal, a little annoying at times
    hobbies; eating candy and practicing magic
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; yes, they can meet whenever, although I would prefer sooner rather than later.
    group; popular
    anything else?; she's only a popular because she's the queen (next in line for the throne) of candyland. other than that, she's pretty nice.
elena - she/her
"And did you get what you wanted from this life, even so?"
"I did."
"And what did you want?"
"To call myself beloved, to feel myself beloved on the earth.”
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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 10:58 am

Mylityro wrote:
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    name; queen candy (candy)
    gender; female
    talent; candy is blessed with the gift of magics. she can create illusions and manipulate the mind. she can also use levitation to levitate things but she isn't very good at it.
    personality; sweet, hyper, intelligent, loyal, a little annoying at times
    hobbies; eating candy and practicing magic
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; yes, they can meet whenever, although I would prefer sooner rather than later.
    group; popular
    anything else?; she's only a popular because she's the queen (next in line for the throne) of candyland. other than that, she's pretty nice.

    accepted! i really like your character, by the way c: i can have them meet in the next entry if you'd like.





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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby jouska. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 11:03 am

Sure, and thank you. <3 I really like this "diary".
elena - she/her
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"I did."
"And what did you want?"
"To call myself beloved, to feel myself beloved on the earth.”
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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 11:13 am

Mylityro wrote:
Sure, and thank you. <3 I really like this "diary".

    aw, thanks!
    working on the new entry now!





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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Aug 06, 2015 4:03 pm

Skyler. Hahaha. Yes, I've been told Skyler's a guy name, but I gave it to a girl. Great work! (I wish you'd continue your other diary though, but this one seems more interesting than the other one, I admit.) I shouldn't add Skyler because it'll be weird to have two of them running around the school, right? ;)
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    name; Luna Nightshade (Night, Nightshade, but prefers Luna though)
    gender; Female
    talent; Telekinesis (I think it's the thing where they can levitate things without their paws?), she's also quite good at navigating with echolocation through the dark, being half bat. She's also quite good at imitating voices (which she mainly uses to prank others with)
    personality; She likes to act creepy and freak others out with talking in strange voices. On the outside, she seems like a rebel who hates schoolwork and goes to murder a couple of plushies once in a while. It may take a while to get used to her, but once you talk to her, you may find out she's actually a fun loving kid who likes to prank, joke around and have fun. She'll speak the truth, no matter what - even if it hurts others feelings. She believes suffering a life with the honest truth is better than having fun in a life of lies, then finding out the truth - "It hurts them even more."
    hobbies; Hacking the heads of plushies (or pretty much anything - pillows, flowers, etc.), birdwatching (her favorite kinds are the nocturnal birds, and the birds with razor sharp claws and beak)
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; Yes, please.
    group; I'd say Emo. (I think there will be more Outcasts in the future.)
    anything else?; if there's anything else you'd like to add, add it here!
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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 4:31 pm

20lait1 wrote:Skyler. Hahaha. Yes, I've been told Skyler's a guy name, but I gave it to a girl. Great work! (I wish you'd continue your other diary though, but this one seems more interesting than the other one, I admit.) I shouldn't add Skyler because it'll be weird to have two of them running around the school, right? ;)
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    name; Luna Nightshade (Night, Nightshade, but prefers Luna though)
    gender; Female
    talent; Telekinesis (I think it's the thing where they can levitate things without their paws?), she's also quite good at navigating with echolocation through the dark, being half bat. She's also quite good at imitating voices (which she mainly uses to prank others with)
    personality; She likes to act creepy and freak others out with talking in strange voices. On the outside, she seems like a rebel who hates schoolwork and goes to murder a couple of plushies once in a while. It may take a while to get used to her, but once you talk to her, you may find out she's actually a fun loving kid who likes to prank, joke around and have fun. She'll speak the truth, no matter what - even if it hurts others feelings. She believes suffering a life with the honest truth is better than having fun in a life of lies, then finding out the truth - "It hurts them even more."
    hobbies; Hacking the heads of plushies (or pretty much anything - pillows, flowers, etc.), birdwatching (her favorite kinds are the nocturnal birds, and the birds with razor sharp claws and beak)
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; Yes, please.
    group; I'd say Emo. (I think there will be more Outcasts in the future.)
    anything else?; if there's anything else you'd like to add, add it here!

    accepted! geesh luna's a character. how would you like her and aonaira to meet?
    i really do plan on continuing the other journal. once i finish the draft that's been in my draft box since july twelveth. it hasn't been touched since i saved the draft and i feel super guilty about that. and thanks c: this story may be a little easier for me to write anyway





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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Aug 06, 2015 4:37 pm

shooting star. wrote:
20lait1 wrote:Skyler. Hahaha. Yes, I've been told Skyler's a guy name, but I gave it to a girl. Great work! (I wish you'd continue your other diary though, but this one seems more interesting than the other one, I admit.) I shouldn't add Skyler because it'll be weird to have two of them running around the school, right? ;)
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    name; Luna Nightshade (Night, Nightshade, but prefers Luna though)
    gender; Female
    talent; Telekinesis (I think it's the thing where they can levitate things without their paws?), she's also quite good at navigating with echolocation through the dark, being half bat. She's also quite good at imitating voices (which she mainly uses to prank others with)
    personality; She likes to act creepy and freak others out with talking in strange voices. On the outside, she seems like a rebel who hates schoolwork and goes to murder a couple of plushies once in a while. It may take a while to get used to her, but once you talk to her, you may find out she's actually a fun loving kid who likes to prank, joke around and have fun. She'll speak the truth, no matter what - even if it hurts others feelings. She believes suffering a life with the honest truth is better than having fun in a life of lies, then finding out the truth - "It hurts them even more."
    hobbies; Hacking the heads of plushies (or pretty much anything - pillows, flowers, etc.), birdwatching (her favorite kinds are the nocturnal birds, and the birds with razor sharp claws and beak)
    will they ever be a friend of aonaira?; Yes, please.
    group; I'd say Emo. (I think there will be more Outcasts in the future.)
    anything else?; if there's anything else you'd like to add, add it here!

    accepted! geesh luna's a character. how would you like her and aonaira to meet?
    i really do plan on continuing the other journal. once i finish the draft that's been in my draft box since july twelveth. it hasn't been touched since i saved the draft and i feel super guilty about that. and thanks c: this story may be a little easier for me to write anyway


Eh, I don't really mind. Hmm... Maybe she finds Luna pranking someone with her creepy pranks! I forgot to add, but she's kinda sarcastic as well. ("I didn't buy this entire bucket of slime for no reason! :twisted: ")
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Re: (( i gave up (pet diary) - posting welcome

Postby star star. » Thu Aug 06, 2015 4:43 pm

    that could work! so luna's basically a creepier version of me (i'm sarcastic and seem to hate schoolwork but i actually need to do it because marching band and where am i going).
    i'm working on the next post. it may not be uploaded until tomorrow, but i'm just throwing that out there c:





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