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What do you think of Ryan?

He's a jerk
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I HATE HIM! HE KIDNAPPED ARI!!
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He's cool... Ish..
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He rocks
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*sighs dreamily*
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He's hot... And awesome... And uh... My dream boyfriend?
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Fri Jul 17, 2015 6:45 am

Chapter 2
    Mandie picked up her pace as she neared another small settlement. Her eyes fell on a sloppy sign that had been staked into the ground. Welcome to Tokyo. Funny, funny, she thought. Signs like this had been pounded up in almost every village she'd gone too.

    Almost like everyone expects to be living here the rest of their lives, she thought. Well, she didn't. Maybe if Ryan was here, however, she could stand it.

    'Tokyo' was a bit of a work in progress. People were tearing apart elf-built houses and using the supplies to build their own.

    Don't blame them. I wouldn't want to live in anything an elf had built, thought Mandie, a familiar surge of hate washing over her. She dodged a man carrying a pile of boards and approached a group of teenagers.

    "Hey, I'm, have any of you seen my brother?" She asked, straightening her shirt as she held up her tablet. A girl who'd dyed her hair black and white shook her head and everyone else shrugged and resumed chatting. Sighing, Mandie started to slump out of the settlement. This was proving to be hard.

    8 billion people, she thought in dispair. Will I ever find him?
    ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
    "Is this really necessary?" Asked Ari as Ryan tied a blindfold around her head. After a spirited argument, he'd finally won.

    "Yes. If someone finds my place I'm dead."

    "You know, I could live with that actually."

    Ryan ignored her and finished knotting the back. He picked up the rope dangling from her cuffs. "Just follow me."

    "Yeah," said Ari. "I totally trust you not to make me trip over a rock or something."

    She took a step forward and stumbled. "Hold it," snapped Ryan, using an arm to steady her. "You're following me, remember?"

    Ari bit back a snappy retort and took cautious steps behind Ryan. She heard the clack of Bliss' hooves, meaning they were probably walking on rock. Add the echoes she'd heard, they were probably in a cave.

    Ari tried memorizing the turns Ryan was taking, but soon have up. Where are we going? She wondered to herself. The centre of the earth? Finally they came to a stop. Ari heard a loud grating noise and suddenly the blindfold was taken off.

    "Welcome to my lair," said Ryan, cutting through the cuffs with a knife. They were in a cave, the only light coming from the flames. In the corner sat a pillow and Bliss' bags. The ceiling was only a few inches above Bliss' head.

    "Where are we?" Asked Ari, looking up. She couldn't see an entrance, but then again, it was probably blocked by the large stone a few feet off. That had been the grating noise.

    "That's for me to know and you not to," replied Ryan, staring into the flames with mismatched eyes. Ari stepped over a chunk of rock and leaned against the wall furthest from him, sliding down until she was in a sitting position, knees bent.

    Ryan pulled up his pillow to reveal a larger canvas bag. He opened it and rummaged around for a few moments, his pale hand emerging with a water bottle. He tossed it to Ari in a chest pass and she expertly caught it.

    "I'm not drinking that!" She snapped. "You probably poisoned it!" Without glancing at her, Ryan took it away and gulped a few mouthfuls.

    "Satisfied?"

    Ari crossed her arms and refused to look at him, staring at her knees instead. Ryan ignored her and stretched out on the cold stone floor, head on the pillow.

    "Why didn't you steal a blanket as well?" Asked Ari, knowing he probably got all his supplies from abandoned stores.

    "If I need to escape, I can't do it if I'm curled up under blankets," he replied. Ari nodded and felt her eyelids droop. The events of the night had wasted her energy. Before she knew it, she was laying against the wall, sound asleep.
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Postby W.oH.oB.o » Fri Jul 17, 2015 10:21 am

When did he take off her cuffs?
Why did he take her anyway? I think it might've been mentioned earlier but I forgot and I'm too lazy to check.
^ It's because I asked before, oops
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Fri Jul 17, 2015 10:24 am

Whoops guess I forgot that :what: Im having a pretty derpy day :lol:
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Postby W.oH.oB.o » Thu Aug 06, 2015 6:03 am

Write mooore
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Tue Aug 11, 2015 4:41 am

I'm currently accepting someone to co-write with, as I don't know if I can write this story alone. Pm me or post here if you'd like to write this with me
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Postby W.oH.oB.o » Tue Aug 11, 2015 10:44 am

I could help you write if you want
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Tue Aug 11, 2015 10:46 am

Seriously? I would really love that. If you need any specific info about the plot, please pm me so we don't just spoil it all here :roll:
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Postby W.oH.oB.o » Tue Aug 11, 2015 10:49 am

MY QUESTIONS WILL BE ANSWERED.
But, yeah I'll pm you. I probably won't be able to do much at this exact moment since I'm on mobile, but I'll try
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Tue Aug 11, 2015 11:04 am

Sure! I do everything on mobile. Oops. No wonder my grammar sucks.
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Tue Aug 11, 2015 1:47 pm

    Ari woke up unsure of where she was. Her wrists were throbbing. She looked down at the cut-up mess and suddenly it all came flooding back, accompanied by a another burst of pain.

    Ryan wasn't anywhere in the cave. So Ari walked over to his sack and dig around until she found an old but clean sweater, ripping off the ends of the sleeves. With a bit off difficulty, she managed to tie them around her wrists. She'd have to clean them yet, but this would do until then, mainly so the qiunds couldn't open and start bleeding again.

    Ari slumped against the wall, sighing. It seemed like one of the main problems here would be boredom. She felt a surge of hate as she thought of the human's. It's their fault he's- no, don't think about it. Thinking about it only makes it worse.

    Lost in thought, she jumped, startled, as the rock began to move with a screeching noise. In stepped Ryan and Bliss, two cloth sack thrown over her withers. After he'd managed to shut the 'door' again, he took off the bags she was carrying and pyied them on the ground. He used his foot to shove another stick into the fire as he folded up the sack so it was a bit larger than his hand and started to run it over Bliss' sweat soaked body.

    "Tough run today," he muttered, more to himself and Bliss than Ari. "Every building the elves haven't wrecked is covered with posters of me." He stroked the black mare's neck. "They won't find us, will they girl?" Bliss snorted in agreement and bunked him affectionately in the chest with her nose.

    "None of that," he scolded. "I brought apples, but they're not for you."

    Ari rolled her eyes. She'd never heard anyone talk to animal that much in such a short time period.

    She ignored him as he continued to wipe the sweat off Bliss. Once he was done, he glanced at her and lead the horse to another part of the cave.

    When Ryan was out of sight, and presumably out of hearing, Ari moved towards the 'door'. She pulled on it with all her weight until something clicked and it opened.

    She peered through the doorway, surprised that it was so easy, and stepped through. She ventured through the hallway-like tunnels and stopped when the path split into two.

    Having been blindfolded on the way to what seemed like Ryan's camp, Ari didn't know which way to go. She cursed quietly under her breath and randomly chose the left tunnel.

    The elf hadn't made it very far before she heard footsteps behind her and turned around to see Ryan's calm face. It didn't look like he really cared, to be honest.

    "And just what do you think you're doing?" He asked quietly. It didn't sound like he didn't care, but his face said otherwise and Ari went with that.

    "I think you know," Ari replied, glaring at him.

    "Maybe so, but I'd like to hear it from you anyway." He raised an eyebrow.

    "I was running away from your insufferable face," she retorted.

    Ryan snorted. "It seems you'll have to suffer my face for a bit longer," he said grabbing one of her wrists.

    Ari cried out, pulling her wrist back and cradling it to her chest. His movement had more surprised her then hurt her, though it still did hurt. Maybe just not as much as she made it look.

    "What's wrong?" He asked, taking a step closer. He was gentle as he pried her wrist away and pulled off the sweater. He winced and looked at her, "You know, you really should let this heal before you run away again."

    "Whatever," Ari muttered as she snatched her hand away again. He grabbed a higher part of her arm and led her back to the camp.

    He instructed her to sit while he rummaged in one of his sacks and held a small tube of ointment that would help. He approached her and rubbed it onto her wrists.

    Ari let out a small sigh as he wrapped the sleeves around her wrists again. They felt slightly better, less raw, but they still hurt. She was grateful for his help, but she would never admit it.
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