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one hundred scenes

Postby deer, » Sat Jun 27, 2015 2:48 pm

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100 SCENE

this is just some random little tidbits
of writing to get better at it c:
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100 SCENES!
short stories bout two friends named hunter and fletcher

“Little by little, day by day, okay?” // “Get. Off. Right now.” // “... That’s it.” // “So, uh, we should… probably run now.” // “You’re insane! I love it.” // “Hey, I offered to help you.” // “Who’s laughing now?” // “Would you please just be quiet?” // “Whoa, buttercup, whoa.” // "I can’t believe you talked me into this." // “Marry me?” // “Hey! I was gonna drink that!” // “You did all of this for me?” // “This isn’t over.” // “If you die, I’m gonna kill you.” // “Well, this is awkward.” // “It was you who was standing there.” // “That is the stupidest idea you’ve ever had. Of course I’m in.”// “Hey, I’m with you, okay? Always.” // “Uh, she’s gunna punch you, man.” // “BAHAHAHA- ahem.”// “I think I am concussed.” // “You have got to be kidding me.” // “This ain’t that kind of movie.” // “Is it… dead?” // “I’ll just sit here and wait for you to be finished.” // “You wound me.” // “Trust you? PAH.” // “I don’t know who you are.” // “It’s okay. I promise. I’m here.” // “Oh, this is going to be good.” // “Well, I finally got your attention.” // “Like a hole in the head.”// “I'm... okay.” // “Well, are you coming?” // “Where are your pants!?” // “Help me push it.” // “It’s almost midnight, no way!” // “Positively smashing.” // “Don’t let go, okay?” // “You can’t leave me like this.” // “Say that to my mother.” // “Sing me a lullaby, please?” // “This hurts worse than I thought it would.” // “Hah! - oh, wait, you’re serious?” // “As much as I’d enjoy that…” // -gasp- “The plague!” “No!” “YES.” // “I won’t let you do this.” // “I’ve still got it.” // “I can’t do it. I just can’t.” // "Don’t you ever do that again!" // “I thought I lost you.” // "Teach me?" // "Don’t you dare throw that snowball-" // "It could be worse." // "We’re in the middle of a thunderstorm and you wanna stop and feel the rain?" // "I’ve seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice." // "What are you so afraid of?” // “How did you get that scar?” // “You said WHAT?” // “Can you stop bringing that up?” // “Wait for me!” // “We’ll be dead by morning.” // “STOP TALKING.” // “I do.” // “I don’t want to.” // “What did I ever do to you?!” // “Follow me.” // -SIGH- “I can’t reach it.” // “What are you waiting for?” // “WAIT NO THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT-” // “I don’t need you.” // “You deserve better.” // “If you love something, let it go.” // “Why do I have to wear this?” // “Here goes nothing.” // “Where the heck were you?!” // “I don’t need help.” // “We’re gonna be parents…” // “I didn’t think you knew.” // “I thought those were poisonous.” // “Don’t make me go alone.” // “I’m sorry… I didn’t know.” // “I’d be lost without you.” // “Just leave me!” // “I dare you to…” // “Run!” // “How did you manage that?” // “Liar!” // “I don’t even want to be here.” // “Oh crap, we fell asleep!” // “Is this the life you wanted?” // “GIVE ME THAT.” // “Get back here!” // “Let go of me!” // “I’ll just follow you.” // “YOU DON’T SAY.” // “And yet, you love me anyway.” // “I just thought I’d have a swim.” // “Don’t cry.”

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if you die, i'm going to kill you

Postby deer, » Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:13 am

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    today was supposed to be a simple day, the two close friends fletcher and hunter were supposed to spend a day watching action movies and playing video games, the usual. but when hunter said fletcher was unable to get the frisbee out of hunter's pine tree fletcher wasn't gonna let it slide. they spent the next half an hour outside, fletcher climbing a tree and probably getting more splinters than in a person's average life time. hunter watching from below the tree direction fletcher in the right direction, but mostly laughing and calling his friend 'squirrel boy'.

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    xxxfletcher could see the anger in hunter's demeanor as he pulled out of the driveway, there was a loud crunch. when they pulled out fletcher saw neon green frisbee was smashed into pieces from the truck. hunter didn't even care as he sped down the road, dust and pebbles flew behind them as they drove. hunter was fumbling with the radio because the road wasn't an enough of a distraction of fletcher's condition, bleeding. the stupid boy thought he could climb a tree and it was fun and games until he thought the easiest way down was jumping. the tree almost as tall as hunter's house and of course fletcher the risk taker thought he could "land" the jump. now hunter was annoyed in the driver's seat worried about the condition of his friend while hunter was looking down at his bloody, and most likely broken arm.

    xxx"you're so stupid!" hunter said aggressively sneaking a look over at the boy in the passengers seat. "hey don't yell at me, i probably have a broken arm" fletcher said lamely, not even bothering to defend himself. he could see hunter tightening his grip abound the steering wheel as he hit 85 in a 30mph road.

    xxx"what if you landed on your head!" hunter yelled after a while thinking about his stupid best friend was. "i would have died, but i didn't" fletcher snapped back annoyed at hunter being so worried. he knew it was stupid, it was his fault and he knew that, and he would learn from his mistake. what they needed to do was get fletcher at a hospital and not argue.

    xxx"if you had died, fletcher" hunter muttered not finishing his sentence as they pulled into the hospital's parking lot. fletcher didn't reply hearing hunter slam the door beside him. hunter walked around the car and opened the passenger side for his injured friend.

    xxxonce walking into the hospital a nurse rushed the both of them in, checking fletcher into a room. when the doctor arrived he took one look at fletcher and started bombarding the boy with question. touching the arm in certain places asking if it hurt or not. hunter didn't really pay attention to anything happening besides fletcher. his facial expression, from embarrassment when he explained to the doctor about how he broke his arm to the look of pain when the doctor started cleaning the blood. hunter wasn't going to admit to just how worried he was about fletcher. they had been friends since seventh grade when hunter moved to minnesota. they were close, there was no denying that, so seeing your friend in a doctors room injured hunter was a little freaked out to say the least.

    xxxafter an hour and a half at the doctors where fletcher had gotten a x-ray, checked for a concussion, and wounds cleaned both of them were able to leave the hospital. both of them walked out of the sliding doors side by side, fletcher's left arm now wearing a navy blue cast.

    xxxat some point during the mess hunter had called fletcher's mom and she was walking in front of them scolding both boys for getting in such a dumb situation. after telling them she had important business downtown and that she trusted hunter enough that he could drive fletcher home safely she climbed into her own car and drove off.

    xxxwhen both of them were in back in the car hunter looked over at fletcher's light blue eyes. "sorry about yelling at you and everything i was just really worried" hunter muttered looking away from fletcher eyes before he continued, "it's just, if you died, i swear fletcher, if you died i would have killed you."

    xxx"if i had actually died you wouldn't be able to kill me hunter" fletcher said looking over at hunter as his a smile crept onto his face.

    xxx"i would have reincarnated you and made you climb the tree just so i could push you off of it again" hunter laughed looking over at his friend as they pulled out of the parking lot.

    xxx"hunter, if anything you would have reincarnated me just so you can see my beautiful face once again" fletcher said jokingly smiling as hunter shook his head, his dirty blond hair moving side to side.

    xxxthat was them, hunter and fletcher friend's since they were thirteen, both of them able to make the other smile even in worst case scenario.
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