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Eons. wrote:I live in the US *feels super alone*














The Ugly Duckling Swan
By me (Snowflakette
Mother Swan flew home, exhausted from the shopping in Book End Boutique. She glanced down at the nest that held the eggs and smiled. “Oh, my adorable babies! They will come out soon! I can’t wait!” she gushed, as she set the shopping bags down. Then she started decorating the nest, so the newborn swans will have a pleasant surprise.
She started muttering to herself as she customized the soft nest. If you put all the words together, it would sound like this: “Goes here! Move left! Move down! Whoa! Get this! Put it here! Make it tighter! Whoa there! This one! Over there! Good! Up a little! Move it left! Stick it! This one is good! There! Perfect!”
Suddenly, Mother Swan heard a pop, followed by a crack. “Oh my gosh! They’re coming out! Yippie!” she cried. The first baby swan walked over to her. Mother Swan hugged him tightly. Then another, and another.
Mother Swan stopped at the very last one. It was reddish-pink, a very unusual color for swans. “Oh no, we have a problem here,” she sighed.
The narrator’s sick, so I’m taking over. Let’s start with the basics. Hi there! I’m Chillie. I’m the reddish-pink swan the narrator mentioned. It’s not my fault that my color is different.
But it does make a big difference. Now my siblings hate me, thinking that I have some sort of very weird virus, that if I touch them, they will turn reddish-pink too. Well, that is so not true. They also call me ‘Redhead’, like how rude is that?!
Even my mother doesn’t like me. She bought delicious cupcakes from Three Bear’s Bakery for… my siblings, not me! I have to drink lake water and eat kind-of-bitter bread! Ugh!
I went to the Endless Stories Library to find about unusual creatures (like me). My eyes landed on a picture of a baby phoenix. It has reddish-pink feathers, like me. Oh wait, am I a phoenix?!
I need to sort things out. So I fly out of the window and into the cold, dark forest.
Big mistake. Now I’m freezing. “Ugh!” I complain, “I am such an egghead! Why did I come here?! I knew fair and square that it’s dangerous in here, especially at nighttime! I want my mother!”
Wait, the last sentence I said was that I want my mother, but I can’t find my real mother yet. Mother Swan is... well, too sensitive. And I don’t want to be treated like garbage. So I straighten my feathers and continue flying to the other side of the eerie forest.
Suddenly, red eyes stare at me. I turn around to check if they’re still here. It quickly disappear before my eyes. I shrug and keep flying. Maybe it’s just my imagination.
But no! It appear again. It walks toward me. I freeze at the spot.. What does it want?! I look carefully. It is a… rabbit?
“Oh, hi there, Mr. Rabbit! Nice to see ya! Do you want to play with me? Well, sorry, because I have to get moving. I need to---” I stop in mid sentence. It is scowling at me. It’s not a good rabbit!
“Hello there, Chillie.” it says smugly.
My heart skip a beat. “H-how d-did you know my n-name?” I stammer.
He laugh, all evil-like. “I’ve been spying on you, birdie. Do you know why?” he says.
“Um, as a matter of fact, no.” I reply, trying to be casual. He chuckles again. I hate it when he does that.
“Well, I think you know that you’re a phoenix already,” he explains, “and you know that phoenixes have magical feathers that can grant the owner any wish. So just give me a feather. Oh, and by the way, I’m Master Bunny.” he smiles all evil-like, and holds out a paw.
I back away. “Um, sir. Since I just realised you’re a bad guy, I should get going. Alone.” I learned that lesson from Little Red Riding Hood.
“Okay then, birdie. Here’s a deal. Either choose the easy way, which is handing over a magic feather of yours and I won’t bother you, or choose the hard way---” Master Bunny says. I fly up as quickly as I can.
“SHE CHOSE THE HARD WAY!” I hear him shout. Suddenly, all sorts of things fall down to me. Rocks, dust, water (DIRTY WATER) and garbage. Is this some sort of curse that Master Bunny magic up?
Before I know it, I fall to the ground, panting. “Now look what you’ve done, mister! I’m all wet, stinky and dirty! I really need to take a bath now!” I cry, and give him my most fierce glare.
That didn’t impress him. Suddenly, he shouts, “Master Bunny crew, get her!” Hundreds of weird creatures attack me. I see that there are spiders, scorpions, snakes and more!
“AAAAH!” I cry, “AAAAAH! I mean, la la la! LA LA LA LA!” I learned that from Snow White, that if you sing, birds will come and rescue you. No such luck for me, because the MB Crew are still attacking me.
Suddenly, out of the corner of my eye, I see a sparrow. He suddenly throw rocks at the MB Crew! Wow, those rocks must do a lot of damage, because soon, the creatures all run away. I look back at Master Bunny. He is shaking his fist and yelling at me.
The sparrow fly down to check on me. “Are you okay?” he ask.
“I guess I’m fine.” I say, panting.
“Good. I’m Dusty.” he says. “Nice to meet you. I’m Chillie.” I reply.
“You two are the worst! Here’s my revenge!” Master Bunny suddenly shriek, throwing a massive fire ball at us. We duck quickly.
My heart is beating like a drum. Sweat is dripping down my feathers. A sharp pang of pain stab my side. I look down. Dusty is plucking a feather from me!
“I wish Master Bunny would disappear and never, ever, return!” he shouts. Master Bunny starts to fade. Then he disappears in a cloud of glowing red dust.
“Whew. Thanks, Dusty. I owe you my life.” I say thankfully.
“No problem. Hey, where’s your family?” he asks.
I smack my forehead. I remember that I am in search of my long-lost family. “I can’t find my family.” I say.
“Ah, I know!” Dusty exclaims, “You are the lost phoenix princess! Yes, bright blue eyes, golden beak and magical shiny feathers!”
I blink, “Princess?”
“Yes, you, the princess of Firequill! Come!” Dusty says, pulling me up into the sky.
Moments later, I land in the kingdom of Firequill, a land with lots of phoenixes. Two phoenixes come flying towards me. One has a golden crown, and the other a silver tiara.
“My little princess! We missed you so much, dear!” the queen says. She is my mother!! “We thought you were gone forever!” a smaller one my size says. From my research with Firequill, she must be Princess Amber, which is, my sister!
“Mom! Sis!” I cry, hugging them. Then I hug Dusty. “Thanks, for everything.” I say. He smiles. “Anytime you want me, I’ll be in that cherry blossom tree with a large bush beneath.” he says. And then my mom, my sister and I fly to the huge, pink castle.
The EndA letter from Chillie wrote:Hello everyone! My name isn’t Chillie anymore. Mother Phoenix insists calling me Sophia, Princess Sophia. But I insist you guys call me Chillie.
So, my life is getting better and better lately. I visit Dusty twice a week. We would do flying races together and play with the cuddly little creatures in the bush below his tree. There is Snowflake the bunny (she’s like, a million times better than Big Boy Pants Master Bunny), Flurry the squirrel (his tail is super fluffy, so I often lay on it and relax) and Flames the dragon (well, he’s not cuddly, but I like playing Catch the Fire Ball with him). It’s always fun, fun, fun!
Back in the castle, it’s super awesome! I get to sleep in my own nest! It’s extremely soft, decorated with a pink cushion, pink lacy ribbons, pink blankets, pink feathers (those are not mine! I hope not!) and pink plush toys. You could say it’s pink everything for me, while Amber’s nest is yellow everything.
The food, it’s really delicious! Big fresh caterpillars and juicy beetles for me! I also crave these crisp sweet apples Mother buys from Snow’s No-Poison Apple Shop!
For the family gossip, Mother just laid a golden egg! I wonder if the phoenix baby is a boy or girl, but it’s not going to the swans, of course!
It’s feathers and apples for my life now! I’m having a fableous time!





The five children, now free souls, walked up to PG, who was staring at Springtrap.
“Oh, so we meet again,” PG smirked, gripping his axe, “This time, you’re gonna die a third time.”
The children gasped. PG slowly raised his axe and yelled, “Say goodbye to everything!”
“WAIT!” Louis, Golden Freddy’s soul, cried, jumping in front of the other dead children, “Before you kill us, tell me who’s knife are we going to die under.”
PG lowered his axe and cackled like a noob. “Of course you’re gonna die from me!”
Louis pretended to be confused, “Me? Who is ‘me’?” He asked innocently.
“I, Purple Guy!”
“Wrong.” said Louis, “The name ‘Purple Guy’ is just a placeholder. You can be Purple Guy, I can be Purple Guy, even Fazbear’s Fright can be named as Purple Guy. But who are you when you take the place holding name away?”
PG blinked in confusion. “What? I don’t know, and I don’t want to know.”
Louis nodded. “Okay, let me ask you another question. Who am I then?”
“You’re Louis, one of the children that I killed!”
“No. That’s me on the outside. I’m asking who am I on the inside.” Louis said.
PG was confused, “Eh? What’s the difference?”
“Well, for example, when I use the term ‘me’, you term is also ‘me’, what does this mean?”
PG simply made a small groan.
Louis ignored his groan and continued, “This means that you are the dead child, and I am the dead child too. You are me.”
“What are you talking about?”
“and I am you too!” Louis said.
“This- this is not interesting at all! It’s completely lame!” PG stammered.
“Okay, I’ll ask some interesting questions then.” said Louis, looking at the ceiling,
“Where, are we born from? Where, do we die to? Why did we appear on this world? What does our appearance mean to the world? Did the world choose us, or did we choose the world?”
“Enough!” PG shouted, clearly annoyed at the questions that he was unable to answer.
“Not enough.” Louis said, and continued.
“What is our connection to this universe? What does it do? Does the universe have an end? If it does, what is outside the universe? Does time have a length? How long or how short is it? Where does the past disappear to, and where does the future start off?”
“Is my question now, the same question you heard earlier?” Louis said, leaning close to PG.
“Ugh, I’m gonna kill you!” PG complained, holding his axe a little higher.
The child walked away from him, looking back and asking, “Who is ‘I’ and who is ‘you’? Is it me killing you or is it you killing me?”
PG was sick and tired of Louis while being extremely confused by his questions that were impossible to answer. “It’s… uh… it’s me killing me!” He said, and climbed into the suit, triggered it on purpose and his life ended right there.

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