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Do you like this draft better than the first one so far?

I didn't think it could get better but then it DID
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hmm... dunno yet
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why. why did you change it. WHY -sobs-
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... I... didn't... there's another one...?
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Postby WolvesOfFire » Sun May 10, 2015 10:29 am

Yeah go ahead!
laughs hysterically at joke yeah, no.
But a fan list would be a great way to keep track, maybe I should put one in my story
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sun May 10, 2015 3:16 pm

    I literally speak bad jokes and puns

    and yeah I probably... Will... maybe... eventually xD

    also I've been thinking about streaming some art
    it's not writing, but most of what I draw is Swindle related soo I'm just gonna post the idea here
    maybe I should just make an art thread and post when Im streaming
    or put the link in my siggy
    idk
    thinking out loud
    would anyone even watch is the question
    hmm

    ALSO working on chapter two now yaaaaay :DD
    idk if Ill finish it today but I will certainly try
    -off I go-
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Postby raey » Sun May 10, 2015 6:43 pm

      Fanlist! Fanlist! Fanlist!
      (maybe you could add how often the specific person wanted to punch you because of...you know...feelings)

      and yes please, stream art - that would be really cool, maybe I can catch up a few things....

      Chapter Two - yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaay
      *dancing around*


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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sun May 10, 2015 6:46 pm

    lol I'm actually drawing a picture now xD
    In the middle of writing I was like HEY I WANNA DRAW doink
    drawing
    Idk if I'll finish it tonight but if people really want me too I could stream it xD
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Postby raey » Sun May 10, 2015 6:52 pm

      yeeeeeees
      let me watch you being perfect
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Sun May 10, 2015 7:03 pm

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Postby katomorakwarrior » Mon May 11, 2015 1:13 pm

I never thought I'd have so much fun reading the same story, but re-edited.
Carry on; I'm sure the others are waiting just as anxiously.
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Postby Asherwy » Mon May 11, 2015 1:25 pm

      omg okay i'm switching over to this one i'll re-read it i don't care captain this is amazing i love this and your writing and omygosh -flails-
      PUBLISH IT
      NOWNWONOWOWNOWNWONWONNOWONWOWNOWNOW
      I can't wait to see this story become like, huge
      i can definitely see it happening
      and we'll all be here boasting that we saw it being made
      yes
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Postby Silverhart » Mon May 11, 2015 3:14 pm

I don't have time to read all the awesome things. Why must you make all the awesome things? DX

I guess I have to though. I'm too invested now. It'll be interesting to see how this compares to the original, and how the story itself has evolved! ^^ Happy to see it continuing and not being abandoned.

"Permission to come aboard new thread, Cap'n?" (I had to say it - can't resist the cant. And I am not sorry. XP)
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Mon May 11, 2015 5:36 pm

    Ok so
    I hot distracted drawing a thing
    ... cough
    ... I'll write now

    @katomorakwarrior Eee I'm glad to hear that! Yes, I think this draft will be much better, now that I actually have a plan and solid characters -cough-

    @Ash hehehe oh my lawd, we'll just have to see about that.
    just wait until the movie comes out ;D jkjk

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