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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby Boxen. » Sat May 16, 2015 11:01 pm

Lions
Tall grass
Stalking
Yellow fur
Stalking
Big paws
Twitching
Charge at the helpless prey
The hunt adrenaline through your veins
Bit into the poor preys neck
End its life

Return home with blood stained muzzle
Letting the cubs lick it off
Lay down next to the dominant male
This is your life
The life of a lion

Yay another one done!!!
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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby topazstar » Sun May 17, 2015 8:19 pm

Thank you very much to tigeress3366 and everyone that has posted so far! :D
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And you ask,
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Oh, but my darling,
Ɯнαт ιғ ʏσʋ
Ғℓʏ?

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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby topazstar » Tue May 26, 2015 3:36 am

Brrr...
It's so... so cold and lonely on here at the moment...
Where you budding poets be at people?????????????
I mean.... *puts on proffesional face*
Let's make some really, good, high-quality poetry, guys. 3, 2, 1!!!!

PS. I am looking for someone to send me a poetry challenge, or just a new challenge in general. The next challenge someone does, I will take part in. Heck, I'll do one now! Come on and join in! I mean, you're already here. I know you are, 'cause you're reading THIS. RIGHT. NOW.
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There is freedom waiting for you,
On the breezes of the sky,
And you ask,
"Ɯнαт ιғ Ɩ ғαℓℓ?"
Oh, but my darling,
Ɯнαт ιғ ʏσʋ
Ғℓʏ?

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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby amithea » Wed May 27, 2015 8:57 pm

Poetry challenge:

write a poem about the anonymous conspiracy (yup, I really do think it's a conspiracy)
So basically, I think that poems written by anonymous are clearly done by ninja spies and written in code to one another but only three groups of them do it because all of the other ninja clans are totally oblivious to it all. And the conspiracy part is that only mega clever poets (so basically all of you guys on this thread that have posted a poem and also a few of the poets that have been published in a book) have the capability to notice inconsistencies in the poetry that give the ninjas away. Not all of the mega poets manage to decode the anonymous conspiracy poetry.

After reading that, you probably think I'm slightly crazy... I am perfectly sane, okay?
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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby topazstar » Fri May 29, 2015 1:33 am

Okay. I accept that challenge:
You may think poetry is a perfectly peaceful thing
Where poets let their minds be free and their hearts sing
But what if I told you something new
And this time, it is REALLY true

There are people that sneak through the night
Because they have secret poetry to write
Never seen, never even known
Their secrets seep through to their bone
They don’t want to make a fuss
So they write under the name anonymous
They compose their work in secret code
Only those who carry the dangerous load
Of a poet’s knowledge may expose
The real meaning of all of those
Poems that are now before our eyes
Once written by great ninja super-spies
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There is freedom waiting for you,
On the breezes of the sky,
And you ask,
"Ɯнαт ιғ Ɩ ғαℓℓ?"
Oh, but my darling,
Ɯнαт ιғ ʏσʋ
Ғℓʏ?

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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby topazstar » Fri May 29, 2015 1:36 am

NEW CHALLENGE!
Write a poem that rhymes something with the word 'orange'.
(and NO, it is NOT impossible, as amberwonder has proven that to me- I hope she will shortly show you too!)
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There is freedom waiting for you,
On the breezes of the sky,
And you ask,
"Ɯнαт ιғ Ɩ ғαℓℓ?"
Oh, but my darling,
Ɯнαт ιғ ʏσʋ
Ғℓʏ?

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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby topazstar » Fri May 29, 2015 1:38 am

Remember, all entries get a gift-bomb! Wait, I posted... Do I have to gift-bomb myself now??
(No, I'm not complaining- the only complaint I have is that I've tried it before and it doesn't work...)
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There is freedom waiting for you,
On the breezes of the sky,
And you ask,
"Ɯнαт ιғ Ɩ ғαℓℓ?"
Oh, but my darling,
Ɯнαт ιғ ʏσʋ
Ғℓʏ?

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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby Trash Lord Kai » Fri May 29, 2015 1:41 am

War is terrible
It is unbearable
Bombs blowing
Blood a flowing
Guns flashing
Skulls smashing
It is unbearable
War is terrible
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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby amithea » Fri May 29, 2015 1:46 am

Rant
So nothing rhymes with 'orange', eh?
Well I'm here to prove you wrong today,
How about 'lozenge',
'singe',
'binge',
'whinge',
Changed your mind? you'd better,
Because if not, you get a lemon bitter.


I don't know why I threw a lemon in there..... meh! and yes, 'rant' really IS the title. I know...
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Re: If you're a poet, come and show it!

Postby bibilee » Fri May 29, 2015 1:47 am

I have accepted the orange challenge. This might be ridiculous.

I Like the Colors of the Rainbow

I like the color red.
So red is my shed.
I like the color orange.
So orange is my door hinge.
I like the color yellow.
So yellow is my chello.
I like the color green.
So green is my TV screen.
I like the color blue.
So blue is my shoe.
I like the color purple.
So purple is my... TURTLE?


Dun nun da dun dun! Bum! Doooooor hiiiiinge!
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