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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat May 09, 2015 1:48 pm

Ooooo. Shae's not gonna be happy...
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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby abxy » Sat May 09, 2015 1:48 pm

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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby WolvesOfFire » Sat May 09, 2015 1:58 pm

I know I ship them too lol:P
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Chapter 11

Postby WolvesOfFire » Sun May 10, 2015 10:28 am

Cole and Orion walked down the dirty, dimly lit roads, the few streetlights illuminating their features. The girl's fists were clenched and her eyes were determined, probably resisting the urge to go back and beg for forgiveness. A gebtle rain was falling, more of a drizzle, pooling beside the sidewalk where the drains couldn't reach. Miles away, the moon shone brightly, not having anything to worry about.

"Here." Orion's cold voice split the cold air. She was punting down a dark alley that reached into the night, ending in velvety darkness. Cole nodded and followed after her, switching on the beam on his wrist light. A scares cat hissed at them and dove into a trash can, and far away, the mournful howl of a dog pierced the atmosphere. Its like a horror movie, thought Cole, shivering as a raindrop penetrated his oversized jacket. The two had grabbed fallen coats from fleeing observers, using the dark material to slip silently through the night.

"Cold?" Asked Cole, watching Orion wrap her arms around herself.

"N-no," she said, the tremble in her voice giving her away. He pulled off his dark hoodie and wrapped it around her, feet splashing in puddles of muddy water. For once, she didn't resist, instead walked closer to the dark-haired boy. He held up one hand, transforming it into a small fire. They couldn't risk giving themselves away, but he could at least warm them.

"Turn it off," said Orion in barely a whisper. "You'll attract attention. You can have your jacket back if you're cold." Cole shook his head.

"I'm more concerned about you, you've been shivering for ages." The two neared the back of the alley, which led to a dead end. It didn't register that they could easily be trapped, instead Cole pulled over a cardboard box. He managed his trademark smile.

"Welcome to the five-star hotel," he said, opening the flap of the large cube. Orion smiled and curled up at the back of it. The rain drummed on the roof, a few drops leaking in from cracks. Cole crouched down in front of her.

"Orion, I'm going to go get some food. Stay here, and if anyone comes that we should be worried about, shoot me a signal. If I see it, I'll reply with my own. Ok?" Orion nodded, eyes closing, wet lashes brushing her cheeks. Bright blue eyes penetrated the darkness as Cole began walking out of the alley, shivering with cold. He walked in and out of the pools of light, appearing and disappearing like some sort of angel. Head down and feet shuffling, he made his way to a dimly lit shop, loud music leaking out the rustic door. It didn't exactly seem like a friendly place, but he was determined to bring back food and maybe warm up. The door closed behind him with a loud jangle as he slipped, unnoticed, to the counter.

"Excuse me." His soft yet menacing voice caused a hush to fall over the crowd, busy with their loud chatting littered with obscenities. A waitress approached him, fluttering her eyelashes, adorned with too much mascara.

"Hey, gorgeous," she crooned. "Can I help you?" He smiled, making the waitress edge back, a flicker of uncertainty in her green eyes.

"I'm not interested in a date with a girl who'll leave me for someone else," he said clearly. "But I'd like some warm food." The girl flicked her red tresses, flirty demeanor gone.

"Right away." She disappeared into a room at the back and returned, carrying a paper bag smelling faintly of hot dogs. Cole payed the little money he had and edged out the door, racing back the way he'd come.
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Re: Chap 12

Postby WolvesOfFire » Tue May 12, 2015 7:29 am

"Orion?" Orion blunked and opened her eyes. Cole was on his hands and knees, peering into her cardboard box where she'd spent the night.

"How'd you sleep?" He asked. She groaned and crawled out.

"Brilliant. The mattresses were so soft, I'll definitely recommend this place to other people." He grinned and reached out to help her up. She ignored his hand and pushed herself to her feet.

"What now?" She asked tentatively. Cole sighed, turning his brilliant blue eyes towards the sunrise.

"I don't know. Want to come with me to get breakfast?" Orion nodded.

"Sure, why not?" The two walked side-by-side until they neared the restaurant that Cole had gone to hours earlier, the large sign now visible.

"Aunt Stacey's Food Place," muttered Orion, gazing at the rusted sign. Cole pushed open the door to be greeted by the same red-haired girl from before. She seemed to have forgotten his disinterest, greeting him with a suggestive smile. He ignored her and shoved his hands into the pockets of the hoodie underneath his armour.

"Have you considered changing your mind?" She asked, wiggling her eyebrows in an obvious flirt. Orion appeared puzzled.

"Changed your mind about what?" She asked.

"Nothing." Cole turned hard blue eyes towards the waitress.

"Quit flirting and get us breakfast or I'll bust in and steal the chow myself." She rolled her green eyes, flicking back a strand of shiny red hair. She was pretty, but Cole wasn't interested, and her flirting just made him angrier. The waitress turned and left.

After having a satisfactory breakfast, Orion and Cole walked out of the shop, both much more cheerful with full bellies. Or, as happy as was possible for Orion to be. The question now remained where they would go.

"Maybe we could run away and join the circus," mused Orion jokingly.

"What have you been reading?" Asked Cole, rolling his eyes. He got serious.

"We'll have to earn money to rent an apartment. For now, let's brainstorm, and we'll get through this."
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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby W.oH.oB.o » Thu May 14, 2015 8:53 am

Sorry about how I'm only posting questions.
Since Orion killed the villain, is she not in Shea's group anymore? If yes, then since Cole followed her, is he not in the group anymore either?
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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby WolvesOfFire » Sat May 16, 2015 10:00 am

All shall be revealed....
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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby WolvesOfFire » Thu May 21, 2015 11:36 am

I'm thinking of doing a revamp, I reread this and I'm not entirely happy with it
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Re: Immortal | open for posting

Postby W.oH.oB.o » Sat May 23, 2015 12:38 pm

So, are you going to make a new thread?
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