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Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:52 pm

Dear D..Di..ary, you know I can't even stand to say this girly term, especially a boy writing a D...D... Ugh, I'm just gonna change it, Atom, nah. How about Flower? No way! Too girly. How about Neutron? Sounds much better :D . So anyways, I'm Riptide Cometpaw.
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I'm the only one weirdo who is noticed the most in Smoothie Ville and I'm going to this new school called Dragonford High. Oh yeah, Im supposed to introduce you to my family.
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This is Moon, Moon Starstrike, I pretty much the best mum in my concern! She always help alongside me and protects me from any danger.
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This is my dad, pretty mysterious and he works for this company called "Spy Co-operation" and he has all this cool gadgets. :D
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My brother also works for the "Spy Co-operation" yet he has went on a long mission and still hasn't came back I'm a bit worried.
Bye Neutron, Goodnight! I wonder what It'll be like!


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Thu Jun 04, 2015 2:10 am

Dear Neutron, I am now in the middle of this crowd, I see this popular showing off in front of a few jocks

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Popular: Hello there, I am Daisy and I am the Queen Bee. Yes, only me!
Me: :shock: ...Hi?
Daisy: ( Raises voice) Don't talk to me like that! I'm the Queen Bee here and there are some special rules
Rule 1: Don't question me
Rule 2: Blah, blubber, blah
Rule 3: ...
Rule 4...
Me: (Rolls eyes, really sleepy and annoyed face) Really? Who cares, anyway I'm Riptide, Riptide Cometpaw.
Daisy: Interests?
Me: Well, I love sports, video games... Sword fighting and SKYDIVING! SKYDIVING IS LIKE THE BEST EXPERIENCE EVER!
Daisy: Don't shout at me like that, remember rule 156? It says no shouting or screaming, yelling or talking back to the Queen Bee.
Me: Who cares about the rules anyway? Its useless.
Daisy: Such rude dog, Outcast, go away useless Outcast!
Me: Wow, amazing :clap:!
I headed to my dorm and guess who was hanging out there? Yep, it was Solar, he was poking around my bed mumbling something
Solar: Oh hi Riptide, I was just trying to memorizing all the rules. I just got to rule 1,000,000, I still have to memorize 9 tenths of the rule. Oh yeah, I forgot I am a Jock, Daisy thinks I am so cool!
Me:(Rolls eyes)Who cares, that Queen Bee is like, OMG so crazy!
Solar: I think she is so cool, anyway I'm joining her awesome club. It says only jock can join, if we can protect her and be her bodyguard we'll get a date with her. She is planning a party tonight and every popular and jock can come except outcasts.
Me: Really, you believe that Queen Bee, so strict, will you actually go with that girl on a date?
Solar: Of course she is the best popular ever.
Me: Who cares, I have got to go to my first class, bye!
I headed over to my first class, English. Most of the dogs were already there, I headed over to an empty seat and rested over there. After a while the teacher walked in.
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Teacher: Welcome, my name is Mrs. Sycamore. I will be teaching you more about vocabulary and poem writing today.
Me: Mrs. Sycamore? I just wanted to know what kind of poem will we be writing? A Haiku, Kenning or the Normal one?
Mrs. Sycamore: Actually, none of them, we will be learning about how to write a cinquain.
Whole class: :what:
Random jock: Really, we learnt that in like Year 4! We should be learning like a diamante. Its so hard to write! You have to find one adjective to describe one noun and it has to mean like one whole sentence!
(Murmurs of agreement)
Mrs. Sycamore: First we have to learn a bit of vocabulary and a bit of cinquain then we can do a diamante after!
Class: Yay! :D
After we pretty much learnt a lot of vocabulary and how to write a awesome diamante.
I returned to my dorm, Oh sorry Neutron, I hear footsteps, I better hide you, Bye Neutron, See you!
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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Fri Jun 05, 2015 1:50 am

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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby ωolfie » Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:23 am

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Name: Ali LilySwirl (Yes, bad last name.)
Gender: Female
Group: Popular
Personality: She doesn't really act like a popular. More like a perfect girl, which can get annoying. She likes to party, and get good grades. She's actually sometimes 80% nice, and 20% is mean behind the teacher's back.
Likes: Parties, Shopping, Clothes (I take that back. She does act like a popular.)
Dislikes: Getting Messy, People Ignoring Her, Annoying People
Crush:(Can add later on in the diary, optional) Riptide Cometpaw ;u;
Others: Keep up the good work! ^^
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Sat Jun 06, 2015 7:55 pm

Accepted!


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby 20lait1 » Sun Jun 07, 2015 2:38 am

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Name: Zavier Wildfire (Nickname(s): Wildfire)
Gender: Male
Group: Outcast? Emo? Your choice.
Personality: Calm and calculating, as soon as Zavier meets a new dog he doesn't say a word, just watching them, figuring out the way they think, the color of their fur - nearly everything. He has a sharp memory and is intelligent and independent, relying on nobody but himself. If someone insults him, he will simply give them a cool stare, which for some reason makes them feel uncomfortable. He is quiet, but is not afraid to stand up for others if they are insulted.
Likes: Heat, Skateboarding, Video Games
Dislikes: The cold, others trying to touch the 'fiery' fur on his spine (it does sting slightly, like a tingle of energy), loud dogs
Crush: (Can add later on in the diary, optional) Silver.
Others: Keep up the good work! Plus, communication is very easy for us. *winks*
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Sun Jun 07, 2015 5:11 pm

Accepted!


















































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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby Streak » Mon Jun 15, 2015 12:02 am

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Name: "Silver, Silver Stone."
Gender: ".....Female."
Group: "Outcast."
Personality: "I'm not the most popular dog on the block, I'm tough, I don't like when my friends, aka the other outcasts are bothered by a popular. I lost my best friend to a popular. No, she didn't die. She became one. I've hated populars ever since, well, I already hated them. Still, if a popular doesn't want a fight, with words, I'm not gonna punch anyone, they should stay away. I'm also smart, and quick-thinking in rough situations. I'll always be loyal to my friends."
Likes: "Anything to do with a farm, Soccer, Listening to Music, Singing, Dancing, Just Chilliin' With Her Best Friends."
Dislikes: "Populars, Prissy Stuff, Shopping, Makeup, Chores, Cheerleading, Volleyball, or any girly sport."
Crush: ".......Zavier is kinda cute."
Others: "I'm only doing that because Dark doesn't go to this school."
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby blackwolf22 » Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:40 pm

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Name: Eleanor oasis
Gender: female, Duh!
Group: outcasts
Personality: hyper, sporty, creative, brave and has a lovely sarcastic sense of humour
Likes: umm.... Swordfighting, archery, writing in her duct-tape, B.A.S.E jumping
Dislikes: tadpoles, her little sister, losing and people who try to flirt with her boyfriend
Crush: has a boyfriend (Can add later on in the diary, optional)
Others: she is ADHD


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Name: Flash Cloud
Gender: male
Group: jocks
Personality: shy, kind, sporty
Likes: likes to read
Dislikes: his dyslexia and people who try and flirt with Eleanor
Crush: has a girlfriend (Can add later on in the diary, optional)
Others: he is dyslexic
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Re: Dear Neutron

Postby laikn1 » Fri Jul 03, 2015 4:41 pm

All accepted but Streak please enter your photo! I can't enter you if I don't have your photo.
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Dear Neutron,

I'm Riptide Cometpaw. I live in Smoothie Ville
and I'm going to a new school - Dragonford
High. I've got to fight the Queen Bee, figure
out what is up with this 'Spy Co-operation' thing
and pass my Maths test. Dive into the neutron
to experience my crazy, wild life.
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