- @ranger
thank you!! ^^ glad to be back!
wrt: logue's story - gahh you are like the bestest at writing nature?? like the way you describe everything is so vivid and poetic and you're so amazing! you're so so good at descriptions c: teach me your ways
wrt: war girl - why. why must you do this to me. as if i really really wanted to cry? rude! okay but for real it's so beautifully heart-breaking, and the protag is so real and the way you describe her emotions is so raw that it evokes such a strong imagey and response. also "The thing is, when you kill yourself to grief, you kill yourself to healing." is just so true and so wise and i love that you mentioned it and brought it to her loss because that makes it 100x more real and 100x more poignant. <3
@kira_nightblade
omggg the ending! that cliffhanger! i mean i get that it's meant to be a bit vague and that's what makes it to enjoyably frustrating! and in the short amount of time there's already such complexity to the characters, like Kaza's betrayal isn't black/white and as a reader i love that i can both criticise and empathise with her! great job!!
@songofthestars
i like it a lot!! got me cringing a bit at the horrific imagery and the torture part but that only means that it was well-written! Diocore is honestly not sympathetic even though he comes from a good place - making him understandable but not excusable. honestly poor Kwet!! i really really feel for him :c okay so are you going to continue this because i really want to know what happens next!
