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[*ajayred*]

fixed...thank you. ;D

re·al·i·ty
rēˈalədē/
noun
1.
the world or the state of things as they actually exist, as opposed to an idealistic or notional idea of them.

2.
the state or quality of having existence or substance.

[katomorakwarrior]

Oh good! You corrected the improper existence of 26!

[*ajayred*]

Oh good! You corrected the improper existence of 26!

It sounds as though 26 did not exists to begin with XD

Is it wrong of me to ask what you guys think of the last chap? i ask out of curiosity, not the want of praise.

[TheSongOfTheStars]

The chapter was a perfect example of the technical stuff that goes into a book, but wasn't my favorite, simply because I don't enjoy that kind of stuff. Not the way it was written!

[katomorakwarrior]

I was a tad confused at the last paragraphs. I'm not sure if it was how I was reading it, but whatever happened in the last part happened too quickly.

[TheSongOfTheStars]

Yeah I read it two or three times before I got it

[.:A r i c a R e e:.]

Hmmm.... I havent really gotten to read the whole thing through yet. -goes to check out the confusing part-

[*ajayred*]

I went over it, I think I fixed it. At least i hope so, I wasn't sure if you meant the last conversation, or literately the last paragraph blocks. sometimes, I don't know how i even made it this far with the way i write. @_@

[katomorakwarrior]

[TheSongOfTheStars]

sometimes, I don't know how i even made it this far with the way i write. @_@

Its because you have an epic story to write.
not to mention people nagging you to to write!!!! Write! Write! More! More!