Jumbled Up Fictional Stories...

[gatorblu]

All stories are made by me, and not be be used by anybody else except me. PM me if you like my stories; I'll be more than willing to make you a story but you have to be patient: I only do fictional stories. You must tell me the summary of the story. I can cancel anything, since these stories I'll be making for you are free. They will also be short stories as well.

Here, I will be sharing you my stories. Any criticism or compliments are loved and considered. I only do fiction stories that are short; I don't want to bore you with my long stories. I'm trying to improve my writing as I go along, so it may not be advanced. I hope to be a children's author when I grow up, so I only right descriptive children's books.

[gatorblu]

Monster!
As I was trying to brush away the hair mopped to my forehead, I screamed a deafening scream. Thoughts swirled throughout my head, as I locked my door. It’s not real, calm down, it’s just your imagination, it’ll be okay I said to myself as I was trying to reassure myself that the monster wasn’t real. The monster was a sickening green, and it was covered with slime. I ran to my bed, and covered myself into my blanket. Pretty soon, I was soundly asleep. Until I heard the deadly voice throughout my head calling out my name. I shrieked, as I quickly jumped out of my bed. The luring monster sneered, and started trotting towards me. I sprinted throughout the entire house, until I frantically ran into my brother’s room and shut the door. I sighed with relief, as soon as I realized that the monster wasn't following me anymore: for now, at least. I smeared my brother’s cologne all over me, hoping that the monster goes by scent. I then realized I had to fix my disguise, too! I searched my brother’s bedroom, and found a comfy outfit. I then, rushed out of my room, and to the front door. And there it was... the monster, who was as happy to see me, than I was to see him.

[KhloBear]

Wow, that's actually great writing! I couldn't do better. I'll order a story from you, because I think your writing is great.. (I'll give you $8 CSD for it.) (PMing you right now. )

[Allyson1]

Beautiful writing! I couldn't have done better for sure!

[gatorblu]

KhloBear: Thanks! That means a lot. Nooo, I don't want payment; I don't need it, I'm still learning, and want to practice my writing.

Allyson1: Thaaanks! You're too sweet!