Budding story constructive critique please

[White Tigress]

Okay so I've started a story called "In the Stars" here it is, and please, give me critique on anything I love critique on any story I make.
In The Stars Part 1
The howl of a wolf echoes through the night, the sound bouncing off trees, grabbing whatever it could find with its hungry arms and ringing the noise into their ears. Campers peek out to see if it was nearby. They quickly jump back inside when a good twenty wolves come running by.
Jasmine feels someone prodding her side.
"Scout stop it!" She growls. When the poking does not stop, she flutters her eyes open, ready to make Scout think about what he did.
"Flatfaces!" She gasped when she saw two veterinarians peering over her.
"Good, they're all alive." One muttered. All alive? She wondered. Did something happen? Now she knew flatfaces could be unreasonable and over dramatic sometimes, but, right now she was very disoriented.
" Scout!? Mom!? Is anyone here?" She barked. She heard her friend, Scarlet.
"Everything's ok!" She replied. Phew, Jasmine thought.
"Is everyone there and ok!?" She asked.
"Yep!" She answered.
"Good!" Jasmine felt the twinge of fear and worry melt into relief. She growled as the flatfaces tried to pick her up, though. She threatened to bite when her brother chimed in.
"Don't! They're helping us!" Huh? Jasmine thought. Flatfaces were bad. They ruined her packs territory. He couldn't possibly like them...? She shook the thought out of her head. She had other things to worry about.


Thanks for reading

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