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Follow Archie and come back later to see who's crying
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Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:50 am

Hey there I'm TheSongOfTheStars, but you can call me Song. Most do ;)
Any way I want to tell you some of my adventures, my most recent one being in Egypt so that's where I'll start. Really Egypt started it all.
SO are you ready?! LETS GO!! Just a warning this is a bit like a journal.

Day 1
The air was hot and dusty when I walked out of the Egyptian airport with my small suitcase and my backpack. My fanny pack was strapped around my waste. It held my precious pet cards. You see for easy transportation the masterminds of Chicken smoothie figured out how to transfer pets onto cards. If you wanted your pet to come off the cards all you have to do is twist it and you pets comes to life. I have quite a few cards so the ones in my pack where my favorites. A three tailed puppy, Malk owl, and a big draft horse.
"Hello!" a voice cried in my ear.
I jumped back and looked at the person who had yelled at me. He was tall, dark-skinned, and looked to be in his mid twenty's.
"Hello," I replied cautiously.
"You are for chicken smoothie no?"
"Um yes I am, not that it's really any of YOUR business," I snapped.
He frowned "Really is my business, I drive tourists for airport to hotel, you do not want to walk in hot sun."
I sighed mentally but smiled outwardly " I'm sure I don't want to walk in the sun, I'm looking for the Thutmose Hotel, I believe Its on Third street."
He nodded "Yes, I will take you, my ox cart is this way.
"Did you just say OX cart?" I gulped.
It was a hot, stinky, SMELLY, ride to the hotel. But hey at least I got there. Which was much better then getting lost in bustling, crowded Egypt. Its dark now and I need to go take a shower. Tomorrow I'm going out to a real dig-site. Right by the pyramid that is claimed to be the famed Cleocatra's tomb. I write some more tomorrow
Day 2
Beep beep. I woke up and hit my alarm clock irritated. No sooner had i done that when someone knocked on the door.
"Coming!" I called. I didn't even bother to pull of my t-shirt and shorts.
"Yes?" i asked, pulling the door open.
A tall boy about eighteen smiled slightly down on me, his hair was blond and his eyes where brown "Hey, just wanted to make sure you'd gotten here yesterday, you didn't come with the other guys for CS did you?"
I shook my head "No my plane was way off schedule so I was late."
"Too bad, by the way my name is Time traveler but you can call me Tim. And you are?"
"TheSongOfTheStars but you may call me Song."
"Gotcha Song! Better get dressed we're leaving in two hours and I know how long it takes for girls to get dressed," He laughed and walked down the hall.
I rolled my eyes. Most girls may take a long time not me. Why? Because all my outfits are exactly the same. :mrgreen: I pull a pair of cargo pants, a long blue tunic-ish shirt and a light, long-sleeved over shirt with a bunch of pockets. It looked like it belonged to some bush whacker in Africa. I ran a comb through my super short, dirty blond hair and stuck my adventure hat on. It a light grey with a cinch to keep it on my head. Next i snapped my fanny pack around my waist with a water bottle attached. In the fanny pack is my collapsible shovel a camera and some rope. Oh i think Tim is knocking on my door. TIME for breakfast. I'll keep you posted!
Later on day 2
Breakfast was OK I was able to snag a one person table. I believe I ate eggs and bacon but I'm so exited that I didn't even noticed what I ate!
My Cs group is heading out side for the taxis now. By the way there are ten other Chicken smoothiens in my group including Tim.
Uh nine of them have just crushed their way into the first taxis. There is one other person who I'll have to ride with, alone, in the second taxis. I like to think I'm brave but....!
She walks over to me "HI! I'm Elephantie but you may call me Ellie! What's your name."
I told her my name. Oh man the sun just flashed off her shoulder- length hair. Its purple!
She just noticed me gaping at her hair. She begins to glare at me with her blue-green eyes.
"Something wrong with my hair?" she asks.
I gulped "Nope, it looks fine to me."
She grins "Exempt that its violaceous ?"
I blinked "Whats that?"
She smiled sweetly at me "Purple"
The second taxis drove up. Its going to be a long drive.
And it was. Ten hours long. And The whole time Ellie chattered on about this or that. I blocked her out by snapping pictures with my camera. I got some good ones. Now We're at the dig-site. This will be my new home for the next two weeks.
I hadn't known until we got to the small village that there where six tents for ten of us. One was half full of equipment and the other four had already been taken by the time i got there. Guess who I've ended up with?
Ellie. She is doing something with her hair right now. Her suit case was big enough to fit my entire wardrobe at home in. So obviously she has the large half of the tent. Which is fine; I like small spaces. Kinda
"What are you doing?" Ellie asks. she is leaning over my shoulder.
"Writing," I replied.
"Your writing what we're saying right now!" Ellie squawked
"Yup."
"Hey I don't squawk!"
"You just did."
She opened her mouth to replies then snapped it shut and stomped off.
Its too dark to write any more. Good night! Hope Ellie doesn't snore! :silent: that's what'll happen if she does!
Day Three
Ellie didn't snore thank heaven, but she seems to have brought an abundance of pet cards. Last night-and I have no idea how this happened but- A bunch of her rats got loose and literally swarmed the tent. Have you ever woken up to rats running over your face? :o not fun. Any way its morning now and the rest of the group is outside. I'm waiting for Ellie to Finish with her makeup. I don't think I've ever seen someone bring so much Stuff anywhere! Unless they where moving across country. Maybe Ellie is planning to live in Egypt. I can just imagine Miss Chicken Smoothie beauty living out here with the sand, scorpions and snakes! :twisted: Oh well she's finished any way. Better get out there for our daily instructions.
After group meeting-
Oh Dear! The archaeologist that is running the place is nuts! His name is Archibald Woof. But everyone is suposed to call him Archie! Guess what he has me, Ellie, and a tall dark skinned girl name Megan {She wants everyone to call her Meggy} doing? Walking around the pyramid and digging around the small Arab tent village looking for ancient scraps for an ancient map for a hidden way into the pyramid. It's hot dusty work. Anyway the natives are very nice. I even helped the owner of a small shop sort out some cloths and he gave me a some beautiful pet cards they looked like this Image
Pet's name: Sandlad
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!Image
Pet's name: Dustwind
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!Image
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
Apparently they where done by a local artist, so they will be rarish when I get back Home to CS. They are pretty darn cute. Oh dear I have to go look for some more old pieces of paper :?
Day nine
Sorry about the long absence. Apparently I'm allergic to scorpion stings, very allergic. :evil: Its not fair that the region of chicken smoothie where I live is famed for having scorpion but I never ever had one sting me, I come all the way to Egypt, step on one, and I'm allergic.
I've been laying in the tent for the last few days. I would have written earlier but Ellie hide my communications device under a pile of pet cards. I didn't even try. She eventually forgot why she put them there and moved them [thank God!] Anyway Ellie and Megan, sorry, Meggy have completed the map. It appears to be a map of the pyramid. Guess who had the honors of going through thousands of website and web decoders for hours on end?
ME.
Any there is an entrance by the right hand side of the pyramid. Lol. Non of the girls told Archie yet.... And I am feeling much better.... Maybe I should? Oh no got to go the Elephant had returned.
Later that day.
The heat still rises off the sand. Its a much longer walk to the pyramid then I thought. Well there was a reason I brought my pet cards with me. I pulled my draft horse out of my pocket and gave it a quick twist. There was a whinny and my large beautiful horse, Fjord, appeared.
"Ready for a ride boy?"
we quietly trotted through the moonlight dunes. It was only a few minutes before we reached the pyramid. I dismounted and transferred Fjord back onto his card. It was a full moon but on the shadowy side of the pyramid it was dark as pitch. I pulled out my owl and he began leading my way. Suddenly I saw the entrance to the entrance. I and my owl slowly stepped in. Suddenly something whistled down on me and
CRACK! BZZZZZZZZZZZZ.
Day 18 I think...
You will not believe what's happened over the last days! When I walked into the pyramid someone through a spear at me! It hit my recording device and nearly obliterated it! After that a roman.... Yes a ROMAN! An ancient solider with a snarling dog pressed a spear against my chest!
I know your thinking :lol: :lol: :roll: :roll:
but I have the armor he gave me to prove it!
At first I thought he was going to kill me but all he said was "Oh you must b the new recruit, sorry about the spear I thought you where one of those cursed grave-robbers. Anyway here's your suit and here's a horse. Better get to work hauling bricks!"
and he handed me a pet card and a pile of folded clothes.
So that's what I've been doing for the last few days, hauling bricks back and forth across the desert to fix a wall in the pyramid.
Any way the card turned out to be a beautiful Arabian grey horse.
Oh look I'm back at the pyramid. Hopefully this will be the last load of bricks.
---
Yes that was the last load! The roman said it'd be fine for me to walk around the pyramid if I didn't go into the queen's chamber.
Well that was nice of him.... So the queen's chamber isn't just a myth! All the more reason to look for it!
I start by wandering around. Somehow I ended up at the very top. A few pet cards lay on the ground. I bent down and picked them up. They where very dirty. I'll clean them off later...
I walked back down the pyramid stairs and somehow end up taking a different route then the way up! I spotted something glinting between two bricks. It took me a while but I pried it out... Aww its a little kitten! I wonder what it will look like when it grows up! Better keep it to see what happens!
I kept on walking down the stairs. Suddenly I heard a loud screech, then someone laughing.
I began to run.
I stopped short as I heard approaching footsteps pounding up towards me. Suddenly Archie dashed past me holding a bundle in his arms. I turned to follow him but then heard someone crying.
What should I do?! Follow Archie or see who is crying? Tell me in the poll. But hurry! Archie's getting away!!!
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Re: Adventures of TheSongOfTheStars

Postby emiistar » Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:40 pm

I like it! Good ideas and the pet-card is super cool :D
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Re: Adventures of TheSongOfTheStars

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Tue Aug 12, 2014 1:19 am

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Postby emiistar » Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:33 am

Haha! I love this :D sounds exactly like me too! :lol:
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Re: Adventures of TheSongOfTheStars

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Sep 15, 2014 12:50 am

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