WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

[~*Amber*~]

Here's one from a bad on purpose roleplay (my post) :

«Dodopaw was nomming on pizza with her boyfriend Herbert. Herbert was a potato, so he didn't eat. "HERBERT! how DARE you!" screamed dodopaw. "I had to walk a whole ten FEET to get that pizza off the ground. So... Football!" She kicked Herbert into cookiecrmb's cookie.»

*facepalm*

But...But I love it.

So yeah, I went from those posts, to my posts now, all those examples are in the pokemon rp in my signature .3.

SharpStar laid down on her bedding, head hurting. "When will all this drama end. Loners? FlameClan? Then there the apprentices and deputy..."

sp00py
no
your better than this
Sharpstar?
Originally Sharpstare?
Plus how did this cat expect to be in a clan (Leader at that) without drama?
i just

*Applauds before committing senppuku *

[Comettail76]

Unfortunately, if I were to find my particularly bad role-playing, I'd have to dig through my old Warrior Cats RPG account. And I'm too lazy to do that [Well, also, I forget what my password was there. That may be a slight problem.].

[sweet tooth]

(Hey there! I'd like to join MapleClan.)


"Just the Basics..."
||Name|| Moongaze
||Age|| 36 moons
||Gender|| Tom
||Rank wanted|| Warrior
||Rank|| Probably Warrior
||Theme Song|| Chasing the Sun by The Wanted

"On the Outside..."
||Fur color|| White/Grey Tabby
||Eye color|| Mixture somewhat: Amber as basic, then green line inside, then blue surrounding the pupils. Usual eye color.
||Scars|| None, just minor invisible ones and the scars he used to have are all healed.
||Limps/Deformations|| His tail is half the normal size of a tom, because a tree fell onto it when he was a kit in the forest.

"It's what's on the inside that counts..."
||Personality|| Moongaze is a sweet, funny cat who always tries to cheer up some cat who is feeling down. Anytime someone needs help, he is right there to assist. Moongaze watches the stars at night, studying them to gather more information on StarPelt or just interest in general. He knows the star formations, but keeps them to himself since other cats (especially faes) don't want to hear about it. Overall, Moongaze is a caring cat that loves to have fun and help out anyone in need.
||History|| Not much was known about his history when he came into the clan at an apprentice age. Moongaze was born in the forest as a rouge, but didn't want that life like his parents. He decided to enter the closest Clan, which would be Mapleclan. Not alot other than that.
||Father|| Unknown (Dead)
||Mother|| Sunglare (Kittypet)
||Siblings|| Were killed by father, since he only wanted a tom, and Moongaze (Moonkit at the time) was the only one.

"Love Life..."
||Crush|| "None so far, but I'd like to know the she-cats a little more."
||Secret Crush|| * *
||Mate|| "Would I have a mate if I didn't have a crush?"
||Kits|| "I think you know the answer."

(If firstpicture too big: Tom

ok so first up
he looks like a 6 month old kitten and hes 6x that age
Moongaze???????????
THEME SONG?
I CAN BARELY SEE THAT TEXT
flawless personality~
typical history
siblings killed my father but haha he just wanted a tom child~~~~
also that second cat picture looks nothing like the first cat

[hqmary]

-clapping- good job. 10/10. Which reduces to 1.


And look what I found on page 90, from early 2014! The lack of quotes burns my eyes.


« IC: Otter woke up Tornado. What do you want? growled Tornado
Otter explained about Water. All right said Tornado just let me meet him. »


Of course, I could explain the whole laughably bad situation, but nope. You get this one quote.

[Arcaii]

lets not get on this topic of bashing other peoples grammar/posts, some people just don't exactly know/care how to do it correctly. It's rude actually. Imagine how the person would feel if they found out you were doing this

edit: Not only that but english could not have been their first language- please keep all this in mind

Ah, thankfully someone here handled that for me. I've never approved of reposting people's stuff and then laughing at them for it, especially youngsters. Now, if they should know better, that's something different, but 9/10 times they have no idea.

[agathokakologic]

Username: aquamarine38
Name: Starlight
Pokemon: Shiny Umbreon
Guild or town: None
Type: Dark
4 moves: Shadowball, dark pulse, iron tail, moonlight
Personality: Smart, fast, likes using smarts to defeat enemy, bookworm, etc
Looks: Dark gray with light blue rings and um whatever color eyes shiny umbreons have o-o
Gender: Female
Born or changed: Changed
Likes: Books, school( pokemon don't have school, don't they?)
Dislikes: Darkness( formerly since as an Umbreon she can light up her rings), spiders, liers, sports, eating and sleeping
Crush: None
Boyfriend/girlfriend: None
Anything else?: Nope

Oh my god

[Arcaii]

I swear, it seems like every single Umbreon OC has the exact same moveset...

I'm surprised at the fact that no one wanted to skip the history lesson. And delighted.

[Greenleaf]

So sorry for my prolonged absence! I'll do my best to be more active in the CYOA from now on.

[Arcaii]

It's totally cool, man. As long as you're back in action!

[Comettail76]

I'm not into much real-life history besides real ancient times, but in fictional words I almost always find the history fascinating for some reason.