Lunaclan, (warrior cat fanfic) comments welcome

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Plot:

The 4 clans have noticed another tree growing at four trees, it has been discussed for many moons since it was spotted. A few years later a young oak tree has grown and the area has been remained five trees. Then only five moons after the area was renamed five tree, a new clan has moved in between Thunder clan and wind clan. As you know all clans represent a season, and there are only four seasons, so what can this clan represent. Star clan spoke to this clan for the first time the leader, Lilystar and some members of her clan appeared at the gathering. They told the other four clans that they were luna clan, they didn't represent a season, they represented something that appears in all seasons, the moon. It has took the clans a while to adjust and there has been many arguments and many teachings but for now the clans have learnt to accept each other. But how long will it last?

Lunaclan:

Leader: Lilystar - A pure white she-cat with one green eye and one blue

Deputy: Stormdrop - A fully grey thick coated she-cat with blue eyes

Medicine cat:
Daisyleaf - A light brown she-cat with a darker brown mask and tail tip, green eyes
Medicine cat apprentice:
Berrypaw - A black tom with bright green eyes (RosePetal's son)

Warriors:
Scorchedtip - a tortoiseshell tom with blue eyes
Shadowtail - a brown she-cat with a white belly and blue eyes
Thornheart - a black tom with yellow eyes
Rosepetal - A calico she-cat with amber eyes (Darkclaws mate)
Foxfur - A red tom with a white tail, foot tips and mask, with yellow eyes (Blackpools mate)
Fireblaze - A fully red tom with green eyes (Speckledwings mate)
Darkclaw - A black tom with green eyes (Rosepetals mate)
Willowtail - A fawn she-cat with green eyes

Apprentices:
Crowpaw - A fully black tom with amber eyes (Rosepetals kit)
Blazepaw - A ginger tom with red streaks (Speckledwings kit)
Fernpaw - A brown she-cat with dark brown speckles and green eyes (Speckledwings kit)

Queens:
Speckledwing - A brown she-cat with dark brown speckles and a dark brown mask (Fireblazes mate)
Blackpool - A dark grey she-cat with black speckles (Foxfurs mate)

Kits:
Duckkit a light brown she-kit with brown speckles (Speckledwings kit)
Longkit a tall red tom-kit with a brown mask (Speckledwings kit)

Elders:
Reddust A red tom with dark red speckles
Threeclaws a black and white tom with three claws on one foot

Loners:
Amber - a brown striped she-cat with green eyes (Amelia's kin)
Amelia - a brown striped she-cat with Blue eyes (ambers kin)
Code - a black fluffy tom with green eyes
Burnt - a tortoise shell tom with Amber eyes

Kittypets:

Fluffy - a white fluffy she-cat with yellow eyes
Plum - a black stripy tom with Amber eyes
Minho - a abissian with pale green eyes

(The other cats are barley named, the leaders might be kits in the last warrior books)

Love:

Speckledwing X Fireblaze
Foxfur X Blackpool
Rosepetal X Darkclaw

Discussion thread

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Chapter 1

Willowtail walked along the borders of Luna clan, close to tall pines and the kitty pets. Stormdrop, a thick coated she-cat with icy blue eyes, the deputy of Lunaclan and Foxfur, a red tom with a white mask, socks and tail tip, unlike Stormdrop Foxfur had short hair and green eyes, were close by all patrolling different parts of the border. The clan had just grasped the warrior code and were all doing there best to follow it, Willow tail loved being a warrior cat and trusted her leader, Lilystar. Willowtail paced in circles as Borden slowly tuck over her body, but her boredom was quickly stopped by a rustling in the bushes close to her. She crouched down instinctively and stalked the bush, out of sight to whatever was inside of it, her green eyes flashed with thrill, excitement and a growing anger to protect her clan. The end of her tail flicked from side to side as she waited for the creature to run out of the bush, she waited impatiently as she readied her hackles to pounce on the creature inside.

Suddenly Willowtail raced forwards as a plump grey kittypet walked out of the bush, clearly not noticing that he had just entered the boarders of Luna clan. He scampered across the forest floor as Willowtail raced after him and as she got close to him, he circled his body back towards the bush and quickened his speed. Willowtail was almost twice his speed and as she caught up to him she pounced on his back and dug her claws into his side, giving him a warning attack,
"You have entered Luna clan territory for the last time Kitty pet, leave now and never come back!" She hissed and jumped off his back, landing on all fours, she bent her head and hissed at the intruder as she ran for his life towards the bush, twigs and leaves crackled under his paws while Willowtail was a lot quieter.

As the kittypet entered the bush he turned to face Willowtail and hissed at her, a lot quieter and a lot leases power in his tone then hers but never the less he hissed at her and angered her. Anger flashed in her eyes as she hissed back at the kittypet, "Leave!" She growled and her throat felt raw as she said this, not knowing her voice could sound that way, and with such power. Her voice clearly scared the kittypet to as he ran through the bushes back to his home. Willowtail slowly drained away her anger and the she cat slowly walked under an oak tree and panted in an attempt to catch her breath an regain her energy.

She looked down to her blood stained paws and new she would need to wash them off in the river, suddenly a dry feeling developed in her throat and she realised how much she needed a drink. She she cat walked elegantly back to lunaclan camp, her tail drooping all the way. She bounded back into the camps main area and raced to the river behind the medicine cats den. She stepped into the cool shallow river, gentle rapids washed over her paws and trickles of blood were washed down stream. She looked around and saw Stormdrop on the other side of the river, her apprentice, Crowpaw behind her. Willowtail dipped her head in respect and took a mouthful of refreshingly cold water which dampened the warriors throat,
"Stormdrop, could you patrol for me, I need to talk to Lilystar" Stormdrop nodded in understanding,
"Ofcourse, is it important, your message i mean." Stormdrop asked, slight concern in her voice,
"It's nothing major, but important never the less." She explained.

Willowtail nodded at Stormdrop then at Crowpaw before heaving her body out of the water and walking quickly towards the leaders den, she walked up the large rocks that lead up to the pine tree. She looked towards the hole between the two roots, "Lilystar, could I have a word?" She asked, knowing it would be rude to enter the leaders den without her permission or invitation.

Willowtail waited only for a few seconds before the snowy white head of her leader, Lilystar, popped out of the hole between the two pine roots,
"Come in Willowtail" mewed Lilystar, as the great leader turned and walked further down her den, Willowtail dipped her head in respect before following her leader into her den. Once they got further enough down the two both sat up, Willowtail quickly glanced up to the Pine tree bottom that covered lilystar's den,
"What was it you wanted yo tell me Willowtail?" Willowtail quickly snapped out of her daze and faced her leader properly,
"Oh, when I was patrolling today I spotted a kittypet, I pounced on him, and he ran away but turned back and hissed at me, I just wanted to warn you, he might try to come back, so we need to have some extra patrol in that area." Lilystar nodded as Willowtail spoke, clearly listening to each word she said,
"I will see what I can do." Mewed Lilystar, then paused for a moment,
"Who is patrolling the area now?" She asked as slight worry flushed through her voice,
"Oh I sent Stormdrop and Crowpaw while I told you." Explained Willowtail. Relief washed over Lilystar,
"Good, could you go find some fresh kill for the elders," Willowtail nodded, and turned to face the exit of the leaders den,
"Yes, thank you for your time Lilystar." She dipped her head in respect before leaving the leaders den.

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Chapter 2

Willowtail headed out of the camp, she past the elders den and nodded at Reddust who was sun bathing outside of his den, the sun brightening his red coat. Willowtail went behind his den and she climbed a tree in search of some birds to catch for the two elders. She was certain that the old pair would appreciate a crow or a sparrow, they seemed to like to nest in there camp so made great fresh-kill for Luna clan. Needles and leaves brushed against her fawn fur as her nose twitched in search of a bird sent. As the trunk became thinner Willowtail finally caught the sent of a sparrow, so she followed it up the tree. it lead her to a hole in the trunk that looked like it had been there for many moons. She just managed to squeeze her body inside as she looked for the bird that she was tracing, and just as she was about to leave the hollow she heard a fluttering of feathers and a sweet melody chirp above her head as she looked up to see an even smaller whole with the tail feathers of a sparrow poking through it. Willowtail licked her pink lips and silently crept up the tiny hole. She waited patiently for the right moment as her own hunger formed inside of her but she knew she could not eat until the clan was fed.

Willowtail kept a stern watch on the small hole and waited, her hunger slowly becoming un-bearable, Willowtail tensed her hackles as she sensed movement from the bird above her slim body, as the chubby sparrow fluttered in the hole unknowingly that this would be the last time he would see day light. Willowtail lunged forward and rapped her fangs around the birds neck, pulling it the floor of the pine hole. The bird struggled in between the warriors sharp fangs until it's body eventually turned limp in her jaws and she relaxed her body. She headed out of the same hole that she had came from, satisfied that she had caught a good enough meal for the elders, she decided that she would try catch some mice or rabbits on the way back just in-case.

As the elegant she-cat landed back onto solid ground she heard talking in the nearby bushes, she knew it wasn't any of her business but she also knew she had to head that way if she was going to head back to the elders with extra fresh kill to satisfy them and give her or some other warrior a good meal. She padded quietly past the bush and as she did so she heard a few words, "Flood and fire" But she had no time to stop and listen as she had just caught the sent of a house mouse and she followed it through the thicket of the forest. As she followed the sent she was getting closer to wind clan borders and she knew to stay away from there. She followed the sent into a beach leaf bush but paused to bury her sparrow under a pile of leaves before she crouched on the poor creature.

She was just about to head back to camp when she caught the sent of to wind clan warriors, she quickly picked up her sparrow and two mice that she had caught and raced back to camp. but just as she was leaving towards Luna clan she heard an ear splitting shriek from towards the borders which only made her double her pace. Her kill bounced in her jaws as she headed towards lunaclan and her own hunger growled inside of her stomach. Her tail twitched in anxiety as she left the borders of lunaclan and wind clan and came closer to her own camp. She weaved her way through trees until she approached the elders den where Reddust was now up right and alert and Threeclaws was now poking his head out of the entrance, a look of confusion on the old tom's face.

"Did you hear that scream?" Asked Reddust, it hadn't seemed it at the time but the squeal must have been loud enough to reach her clan. Willowtail dropped her sparrow and nudged it over to Reddust and walked over to Threeclaws and gave him one of her mice, then turned to face Reddust,
"Yes I was rather close to the noise when it was sounded." Shock flooded over Reddust's face as he glared down at Willowtail, "You mean you were in Wind clan territory, or they were in our territory!" He screamed, pacing in anger,
"No, no I was in our territory, I was just close to Wind clan, hunting" She added trying to calm the elder, Reddust's ears flattened and his glare softened as she sat up, then slouched as it obviously was causing him pain. Reddust had been hit by a monster as a warrior and had had a curled and painful back ever since. Reddust smiled at Willowtail,
"Good" he said and dipped his head and started to tuck into his sparrow.

Willowtail picked up the other mouse that she had caught and decided to keep that one for herself as it seemed the rest of the clan were already tucking into the food they had either caught themselves or took from the kill pile. She nodded at the two elders before walking through the camp to find someone to eat her meal with. She eventually found Rosepetal who was sitting outside of the healers den, her son, Berrypaw, sharing a rabbit with her. Rosepatal was a close friend to Willowtail as they had been apprentices together although Rosepatal was 5 moons older than her, and turned into a warrior before her, they were still good friends. Willowtail approached the two pleasantly and dipped her head in respect before lying down to eat her mouse with the two.

As Willowtail began to eat her mouse Berrypaw looked up to Roseptal and gave her a questioning look, Rosepatal often could talk to her kits without using words as they seemed to use looks instead and Rosepetal would know exactly what they were saying. Berrypaw did this more than Crowpaw because he was more shy and quiet where as Crowpaw had real enthusiasm to tell you something he had found or learnt. Rosepetal nodded at Berrypaw, but Willowtail had no idea what they were telling each other. Berry paw then swallowed a mouthful before facing Willowtail,
"Hi Willowtail, you never guess what Daisyleaf has just got told!" Willowtail was excited to learn any news from a medicine cat because they had a close bond with star clan just like the leader did but medicine cats get told a little bit more because they need this information to heal the clan or for other important reasons,
"What did she get told?" Asked Willowtail sharing Berrypaw's enthusiasm,
"Starclan has just told her a prophecy!" Berrypaw blurted out, being a medicine cat apprentice she would soon be able to share these dreams with star clan too, so needed to learn as much about star clan as an apprentice to help her if anything were to happen to Daisyleaf. Willowtail tail twitched in impatience to learn bout this new prophecy, which could both be good or bad, "Well spit out, what was it!" She asked more loudly than she had expected the words to come out. Berrypaw gave Willowtail a stern and almost scaring look for such a young apprentice,

" The new flood, will bring new hope,
rejection could end in tragedy so to accept is the only option,
or you may never survive the blaze!"

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Chapter 3

Willowtail stared at Berrypaw in shock, her memory shot back to the conversation she had heard on her way to catching the mice. The two words she had caught, flood and fire bounced around in her head. A sudden pang of fear and urgency hit her, the prophecy was clearly warning them about a flood, and then a fire, a major fire which apparently they couldn't survive without this new hope which they had yo accept. Lilystar had to know about this! She looked at Berrypaw in fear, "Does Lilystar know about this?" Berrypaw crawled under Rosepetals leg and nodded shyly, as if all of his excitement had drained out of his paws, "Daisyleaf has just gone to tell her. I'm in charge!" Announced Berrypaw as he slowly regained his confidence.

Willowtail finished of her mouse and smiled at Berrypaw, "Have you any jobs to do?" Asked Willowtail trying to encourage the young Apprentice to talk about and thrive his medicine cat, it would make him better at it when Daisyleaf retired or was took by starclan. Berrypaw shook his head, still quite shy, "Nope I had some herbs to mash but I've already done that, the only real job I have us to treat any warrior that walks through my den." Rosepetal looked down at her son, "Don't you mean Daisyleaf's den?" She reminded her kit, "Yes, but it will be mine one day, won't it mother?" Rosepetals softened her face and groomed the young apprentice, "If that is what starclan wants from you then yes." Berrypaw grinned brightly at his mother, before stopping and looking in the complete opposite direction, ears twitching. Then the two warriors also heard the noise, a distressed shout from the camp entrance.

"Berrypaw, Daisyleaf! Come quick Blazepaw has been attacked by a wind clan cat!" Berrypaw quickly jumped to his feet as the words became clear, Willowtail looked through the camp to see where the yell had come from, it was Fernpaw, standing at the clan entrance her chest heaving from having to run from Windclan borders to Lunaclan entrance. Berrypaw dashed inside the medicine cat den and raced out with a mouthful of cobwebs and horsetail, "Willowtail can you get Daisyleaf for me?" Willowtail nodded and raced to Lilystar's den.

Daisyleaf was just padding out of the leaders den the end of her tail was flicking slightly and Willowtail could only guess why, "Daisyleaf, you must come quick Blazepaw has been attacked by a Windclan cat." Daislyleafs pelt tensioned, "Where is he?" She asked tension clear to hear in her voice, "This way." Called Willowtail as she ran out of camp and began to follow the scents of Berrypaw and Fernpaw, Daisyleaf at her heals. The pair finally caught up with the two apprentices, as they approached Blazepaw, Thornheart and Shadowtail. They were all crowding over Blazepaw as Berrypaw administered the cobwebs to stop the deep scratch marks in his shoulders from bleeding.

Daisyleaf bounded up to help Berrypaw, and they nothing pressed on cobwebs and added herbs to help him, Willowtail didn't quite know the names of all the herbs neither what they were used for but what she did know was the scent of Windclan and blood lingered in the air around them, "What happened?" She asked to try and figure out how Blazepaw had been injured. Shadowtail spoke, "We were just patrolling our border and a small patrol of Windclan cats decided to try and take our territory. They pounced on Blazepaw before we even knew they were there. We could smell them but we couldn't find the exact position, they were closer than we had expected. We managed to chase them off but Blazepaw got injured pretty badly." Explained the brown she-cat.

Berrypaw turned and gave a sigh of relief at the patrol, "Blazepaw should be fine now, did anyone else get injured?" He asked, his eyes darting from cat to cat. They all shook there heads, "No just minor scratches and bruises." Answered Shadowtail. Willowtail had noticed that Thornheart hadn't spoken much but decided not to mention it, the old warrior could get annoyed with the most simplest of things and with the recent Windclan attack the warriors might be already quite angry. The warrior nodded at the patrol and stood up to reveal his tail flicking with anger, "Let's head back to camp, if we're all able to walk" The warrior stared down at Blazepaw and the apprentice quickly struggled to his feet and nodded at Thornheart to confirm that he was able to walk back to camp.

The patrol walked back to camp slowly, pausing whenever Blazepaw asked them to although it seemed to bug Thornheart whenever they did so, the warrior seemed to be in an awful hurry for some reason. As they padded through the camp entrance the patrol was greeted by Rosepetal, who bounded up to Berrypaw and smiled brightly, "You did good, Blazepaw will heal quickly now, right Daisyleaf?" She asked as she looked up to the apprentices mentor, and the medicine cage nodded warmly, "you did very good Berrypaw, Blazepaw should be fine by morning as long as he gets some rest." She said and flicked her rail towards the apprentice den, to indicate to Blazepaw to rest for a while, "Come to my den in the morning then you can get back to training." Blazepaw nodded and dropped his head and walked towards the apprentice den.

Willowtail padded towards the warrior den, followed by Rosepetal, a clump of bracken in her friends mouth, she dropped the bedding next to her nest and moulded it in to her nest. Willowtail had noticed her nest was rotting but hadn't had time to get any new bedding yet, she decided to fetch some more later on, "Your son is a talented apprentice, both your sons are, I saw Crowpaw at noon today, I think he's on night patrol with Stormdrop, Foxfur and Fireblaze," Rosepetal nodded and grinned at Willowtail, "Yes I am proud of both of my sons, me and Darkclaw, actually I haven't seen him since this morning, have you?" Willowtail shook her head, slightly worried but guessed he must just be hunting, "No i haven't seen him all day." Rosepetal nodded she didn't seemed to be worried, if anything she seemed to be drifting of into a day dream, "maybe" she said simply. Willowtail stood up un comfortably, "I'm going to go fetch some more bedding"

She padded out of the warriors den and bounded through some trees, and looked for some ferns, moss or bracken, any would do. She found a few moss scraps at a fallen tree trunk. She pulled them off and headed back to camp, moss dang eking from her jaws. As she did so she met up with Darkclaw a rabbit and a pigeon hung from his jaws, her spirits rushed, "Darkclaw Rosepetal has been looking for you, she's in the warriors den." She said her voice slightly muffled through the moss that she was carrying. Darkclaw nodded and Willowtail knew if he tried to speak he would drop all the fresh kill in his mouth. Darkclaw ran to the fresh kill pile and Willowtail padded into the warriors den. Rosepetal was sleeping when she walked in so she silently pressed the moss into her nest and curled up inside of it and she could feel Rosepetals thick brown fur against hers as she drifted off into a light sleep.

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