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U N B O U N D -- a novel

Postby darkinjinx » Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:44 am

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Summary:

Since she was four, Charissa Frost has been an
orphan. She has a decent life and the greatest friend
she could have imagined, Marilyn. One morning, all of
this changes when Marilyn is found, hanging dead in
a tree. Who would do such a thing and why? After all,
they are all only innocent children. Or is there someone
with a sinister past that none of them know?



Chapters:

Chapter 1 -- An Introduction to the Life of Charissa Frost

Chapter 2 -- Hanging in the Oak Tree

Chapter 3 -- Some Things Aren't Meant to Happen
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Chapter 1 -- An Introduction to the Life of Charissa Frost

Postby darkinjinx » Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:46 am

Chapter 1 -- An Introduction to the Life of Charissa Frost:

I never wanted to be a killer. It isn’t like I woke up one day and decided, being a mass murderer would be quite fun. For those school questionnaires that asked what you wanted to be when you grew up, I didn’t answer serial killer. In fact, I don’t think I even want to be a killer now. However, it is my career choice and I am determined to stick by it.

“This is boring, let’s go down to the lake,” Marilyn said. Charissa got up and smiled. Hide and go seek was getting a little tedious after being stuck inside due to days of heavy snow. She raced into the huge room shared by all the girl orphans, more commonly called the West. The boys room was the East. Closest to the door were the creaking cradles, each one with a small mewling baby, confused and dazed as it peered about for its mother. After that were the toddler’s trundle beds, sheets askew and the chests at the end of their beds open and worn. Farther back were the beds of the girls that were 5 through 10, which were metal and squeaked like a hoard of mice all through the night. It continued on like this, rows of beds in age ascending order until you came to the teenager’s beds, pushed up against the wall. They were newly painted white with built in drawers underneath and all equipped with non-squeaky wooden bed frames. Charissa’s bed was in the 11 through 13 section. The sheets were perfectly folded on the mattress and placed underneath was a scratched and dirty suitcase that held her clothes. A small lock box was tucked against the wall under the bed and contained some of her more precious items; a name tag that was pinned to her onesie when she was brought to the orphanage, a pouch containing $4.78, and a shiny porcelain horse on a music box, that, when someone turned the key, would spin the horse slowly while the music box forced out a messy version of Greensleeves. She leaned down and slid her suitcase out from underneath the bed and removed a tattered scarf and thick coat. Pushing it back under, she snatched her boots from the foot of her bed and looked up to see Marilyn grinning childishly at her. She remembered all the memories they shared. All the times they had fallen down from laughter. All the times they’d sat in the big oak tree outside this rotting building. All the times they had raced down the cobblestone street after Ren, teasing them as he peddled swiftly away on his bicycle to the sweets shop. Listening to the thud of their boots on the wooden floor, they emerged from the orphanage, their breath catching in their throats as the temperature plummeted. My breath came out like a puff of smoke and I smiled eagerly. I was sitting on the metal bench across the street, watching the girls with a keen eye. Marilyn held up her fingers and Charissa planted her feet, her gaze narrowing on the lake at the bottom of the hill. Marilyn’s mitten covered fingers counted down the seconds until they would begin their race. After what seemed like ages, she reached three and they flung themselves down the hill. Almost immediately, they fumbled in the deep snow and started tumbling down the steep, powdery hill and onto the even ground at the bottom. Marilyn sprung up and dusted the snow off her pants and coat, her eyes brighter and her smile wider. Her blond hair was filled with pockets of ice and her face was flushed from the cold. “Come on slow poke!” She called as she hurtled towards the frozen lake. I smiled and raised myself up from the bench, promising to return later.
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Chapter 2 -- Hanging in the Oak Tree

Postby darkinjinx » Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:52 am

Chapter 2 -- Hanging in the Oak Tree:

Charissa woke up the next morning and yawned. Rays of sunlight streamed in through the window over her bed and dust floated in the illuminated air. She flipped over on the mattress, gazing at Marilyn’s messy bed. Usually she slept late, but today her bed was cold and the only thing on it besides the sheets was a single knot of rope. Charissa peered confusedly at Marilyn’s bed. “Lyle, have you seen Marilyn?” She asked the boy who was talking to Ren out the West. “Check downstairs,” he called and resumed his conversation. Charissa shrugged and slipped her feet in her shoes, shivering in the cold morning air. She shuffled downstairs, hands tucked in her pockets and looked around the dining hall. No Marilyn there. She checked the kitchen. No Marilyn. It was the same with all the other downstairs rooms. Charissa frowned and returned upstairs, this time checking the common room, the bedrooms (again) and the orphanage masters room. No Marilyn. She sighed. “Marilyn?” She called halfheartedly. Upset, she returned to the West. Most of the girls were up and out of their beds. “Has anyone seen Marilyn?” She asked again. Janice looked at her sleepily, “Check downstairs,” she said and pulled her covers over her head. “I already did,” Charissa muttered and made her way across the second floor to the East. She peered inside cautiously. “Have any of you seen Marilyn?” She asked. A few boys shook their heads, but most ignored her. Sighing, she stomped downstairs and flung open the front door. She stumbled back with a gasp. Hanging from the oak three in front of the orphanage was Marilyn. She was dead.

I grinned at Charissa’s reaction to my delightful presentation and slipped down from an oak tree across the lawn, out of Charissa’s perspective. All of a sudden, she whipped around and ran into the orphanage, slamming the door behind her. I could glimpse the shimmer of tears before she disappeared into the house and I let go a sigh of relief. She did not see me, but she would soon. All in due time.
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Chapter 3 -- Some Things Aren't Meant to Happen

Postby darkinjinx » Sun Jun 22, 2014 5:10 am

Chapter 3 -- Some Things Aren't Meant to Happen:

Charissa fumbled up the stairs and barged into the West, out of breath and eyes peeled wide in horror. Many faces turned upwards to stare at her, confused at her hasty arrival. “Marilyn..” Carissa murmured in shock, “She’s… she’s dead” Charissa stumbled to her bed and flopped down onto the mattress, tears flowing like a river and sobs racking her body. Gasps and mutters circled around the room and a few girls ran across the hall to the East to spread the news. Janice rushed over to Charissa’s bedside, placing a trembling hand on her shoulder. “How—“ Her voice was cut off by a sob and it took a few steady breaths until she could resume speaking. “How’d it happen?” Charissa buried her face in her pillow, unable to stop crying, but she managed to get out the words, “Oak tree,” before collapsing in another fit of sobs.

News circled round the orphanage fast. After five minutes, everyone was informed and many had stumbled back inside after sighting Marilyn’s body suspended in the oak tree. A light snow was falling and Marilyn’s corpse had a faint layer of snow hanging on her cold body. Charissa hadn’t spoken after those two words to Janice and sat staring out the window at the frozen lake and the snow drifting by; the world silent besides the tap of footsteps on the wood floor and quiet exchanges of words throughout the day. She would not except food or water and only made eye contact once, with Mrs. Bell, the orphanage owner, when she came to see how Charissa was coping. Mrs. Bell had sat with Charissa, not speaking and grasping Charissa’s hand like it was the only thing tethering her to the earth. Eventually, she rose and left, looking quite upset, but that could only be expected. She sat there remembering all the memories and fun times Marilyn and her had shared and wiped tear after tear from her red, puffy eyes. Looking up at the grey sky, she swore that she would find Marilyn’s killer and make him pay for what he’d done to her friend.


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