Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

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Re: Travels of the Clans {Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby FurOfHawk » Tue Nov 18, 2014 7:59 pm

WilloweWolf wrote:Thanks! Anything I could do better?

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Re: Travels of the Clans {Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby WilloweWolf » Wed Dec 10, 2014 5:22 am

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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby WilloweWolf » Thu Mar 12, 2015 5:00 am

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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby C a s » Sat Mar 28, 2015 3:26 pm

Marking. ^-^
I've just started writing myself, and I'd like to see someone else's stories, so I can tell what I've messed up or should change.
Thank ye for writing,
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Mar 28, 2015 3:30 pm

Marking :)
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby WilloweWolf » Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:43 pm

Thanks, Cas!
'Ello, Spanner.
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:47 pm

Hey Willowe! I'm thinking of starting a warriors story soon, so I'll watch others to see what I like and don't like.
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby C a s » Sun Mar 29, 2015 1:49 am

Please link me when you've put it up, Spanner!
Also, I'm curious as to when the next chapter will be up. I'm so excited!
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior Cats story{Critique wanted

Postby C a s » Wed Apr 01, 2015 7:35 am

Can I put this story in my signature?
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Re: Healer's Tale{Warrior lamps story{Critique wanted

Postby WilloweWolf » Wed Apr 01, 2015 6:23 pm

Please do, s a C.
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