The Community Story~Discussion Thread

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What should our title be?

Poll ended at Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:24 am

Shadows of the Light
2
25%
Fighting the Shadows
3
38%
The Power Idol
1
13%
Something else!
2
25%
 
Total votes : 8

Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:03 pm

I think they should end up together in the end, I like dove, so we're all in a agreement here?

@Sirda Very good idea, my friend (evil hand rub)
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:04 pm

@C.T.-Yes I agree I live near the coast line in eastern U.S so I can write about beach or lake scenes

@Nuca-Maybe that should be her name give me a sec to get the Irish word for Dark

@Sidra-OMG YES I LOVE THAT IDEA :3
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:05 pm

And about them have being friends before, i think that would be a bad idea, personally. I think they should just be in a class together or something because she's pretending to be a demon....? And he's annoying and obnoxious on the outside, so she hates him, but they do some sort of project together and she realizes eh's nice when not around other groups, like of popular kids.
And the war/idol thing I think should have been going on for a long time, like decades before she was born.
That's just me, personally.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby C.T. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:10 pm

Nunca Ethereal wrote:And about them have being friends before, i think that would be a bad idea, personally. I think they should just be in a class together or something because she's pretending to be a demon....? And he's annoying and obnoxious on the outside, so she hates him, but they do some sort of project together and she realizes eh's nice when not around other groups, like of popular kids.
And the war/idol thing I think should have been going on for a long time, like decades before she was born.
That's just me, personally.


Sounds really good, it would give a bit of depth to both characters.
Dove sounds nice as well :)
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:12 pm

I think they should work to fend off the darkness together... bitterly.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:15 pm

Sidra- right they should

Nuca-I found the Irish word for dark Dorcha = Dark
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:18 pm

Dove and Dorcha? Everybody good with those?

And I'm good with everything we've said.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:19 pm

THIS BOOK IS GOING TO BE GREAT !!! I'm so happy we all get along so well c: !!
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:35 pm

LATIN

light= lucem
darkness= tenebrarum
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 2:28 pm

That's what you get on google translate. Darkness comes up as several things if you look at the lower menu too.
Same with dove.
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