The Community Story~Discussion Thread

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What should our title be?

Poll ended at Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:24 am

Shadows of the Light
2
25%
Fighting the Shadows
3
38%
The Power Idol
1
13%
Something else!
2
25%
 
Total votes : 8

Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:52 pm

What about Greek ? But Latin is fine @Amazing

@Nuca ~ I like where you are going , um should they become bf+gf or not ?
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:54 pm

I like Greek to.
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Are we going to have a relationship between the tribes? Or just a friendship, since there needs to be a connection.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:55 pm

'Light' in Italian is 'Luce'....
And 'Darkness' is 'oscurita' in Italian, if those work.

She could be Lucy or Luce, and he could be some nickname out of oscurita.....

The tribes are going to be enemies, or she wouldn't be stealing from them in the first place....

I would like them to be bf/gf after the whole thing resolves, and maybe at the end that's okay or they go away together....?
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:56 pm

Well I like the relationship it kind of gives it a Romeo and Juliet switch to it.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:59 pm

σκοτάδι is Darkness in Greek
φως is Light in Greek
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:59 pm

@Amazing - yes they are enemies just like Nuca said

@Nuca-Um "Dove"is Irish for white so maybe that too

Sidra- yeah that's cool I like that
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:00 pm

I think we'll have a relationship with the two :) But they should know each other before, like they were friends when they were little, when the tribes may have been peaceful
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby C.T. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:00 pm

Relationship or friendship, I know this sounds weird, but I suggest writing about the one you are the most familiar with. Unless you read lots of romance books or have been in a relationship yourself, don't venture out farther than a friendship. If you do, (oh I forget the technical word) but a writer who doesn't really know what is going on. Like if you have never lived by the ocean or been there, don't write about someone who who visits a beach. Because you are inexperienced in the subject, your characters will be as well. Yet on the other hand, if you have been in a relationship/read lots of romance, then go for it! :)
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:01 pm

I would like them to be bf/gf after the whole thing resolves, and maybe at the end that's okay or they go away together....?
And I like dove, if everybody else likes that.

And I read a lot of romance, so I would be good with it.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:03 pm

thats great but what about they hate each other when they first meet.
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