The Community Story~Discussion Thread

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What should our title be?

Poll ended at Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:24 am

Shadows of the Light
2
25%
Fighting the Shadows
3
38%
The Power Idol
1
13%
Something else!
2
25%
 
Total votes : 8

Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:10 pm

yeah most stories are about men
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:12 pm

I would like it if parts of the story was written from a male's point of view, but I agree with most being female.

I can suggest looks and names, it just depends if you want me to.
Personally, I love the name Elspeth and the name Patrina, but we can also settle on a more common name.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:14 pm

I think, if we go with the floating island rival thingy, those names will work well. We'll also need to figure out personality/physical traits
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:14 pm

Yes I agree with you Amazing we should.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:15 pm

Honestly, I like characters with little quirks, I think it just adds |---| <that much more to the story.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:16 pm

yeah
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby shade. » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:20 pm

I think, but you can modify this:
The girl should be pretty fit, but clueless since she comes from the angel parts. She should be smart, and clever, but very sheltered. She should be pretty good with weapons, but not amazing. We should add quirks as we go, and she should be only partially pretty.

Can someone else add more?
I could create a form, like you would use in a Rp, if anyone would like, too.
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby keyitt » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:22 pm

Hmmmmmm

Good idea Nuca !
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Crystal Gems » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:24 pm

I do, honestly like to write with kinda ignorant, and clueless people

For physical features, since she's an angel, her hair will be this perfect blonde, and a super frizzy curl. She's got really pale skin, kinda short, and that's all I got. She might not have the nicest facial features, though
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Re: The Community Story~Discussion Thread

Postby Iselka » Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:26 pm

Please your idea is great and all I just think it shouldn't be angel's and demons it should be some kind of winged race with two tribes.
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