A Tail of Darkness [Warrior Fanfic]{Posting Open}

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Should I continue? [I wanted to check if anyone was actually reading]

YES!- NEVER STOP IT!!!
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Re: Chapter 3-

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Dec 21, 2013 6:21 pm

Honey licked her golden tabby pelt. A purr of amusement was heard. Honey hissed.
"Ah, look. The pretty she-cat makes herself shine. Are you mooning over some cat?" Sneered a familiar voice.
"I hate you! Now leave this place, Scar!" Honey spat.
"No way, Honey!" jeered Scar. The light grey tom laughed at her.
"Get. Away." She growled slowly.
"No."
"You're not welcome!" Honey lunged at him, aiming at his belly.
"Neither are you!" Scar yowled, raking claws across her fur.
"Leave." snarled Honey through a mouthful of grey fur. Scar screeched in pain before pouncing at her neck. She twisted, scraping the ground. Scar missed her and tripped onto the dust.
"Ha!" Honey snapped. Scar roared, biting into her pelt. She screamed in pain. A white tom padded over with a blue collar around his neck.
"What's this for?" He gasped, looking around at the blood with his gentle yellow eyes. Scarlett trails trickled down the hill, sending ruby liquid splashing into the pond.
"None of your kittypet business!" Scar howled.
"Why, that's quite rude." The kittypet protested.
"What's your name, kittypet fool?" Scar asked.
"Jack. What's yours?"
"Scar!" Scar grinned cruelly. "Now Jack, this is going to hurt."
Honey gave a horrified cry as he pounced.

Darkness swarmed over Honey's vision. Then slowly, a dark grey blur swam dizzily around.
"Scar?" Her voice quavered.
"Who?" Came a confused mutter from the grey lump.
"Who are you?" Honey asked.
"My name is Shadow. What's yours?"
"Honey." Her voice muffled from a clump of white fur. "Jack?"
"Who?"
"The white tom over there!"
"You know him?"
"No, I just met him, but..."
"But what?"
"He's a kittypet, and Scar, he attacked both of us, but," Honey gazed around fo a second and something injected in her mind. "HOW'D WE GET HERE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"I...uh, brought you here. It's my den. Cozy, don't you think?"
"Hmmmm."
"Now, you need to rest." Shadow insisted before Honey blacked out again, not knowing that Scar was hiding, somewhere near, only feeling a strange familiarity with Shadow...
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Re: Chapter 4-

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Dec 21, 2013 9:29 pm

Blizzardfall wrote:"It's just a scratch." Blizzardfall ducked his head trying to get away from Windclaw.
"Blizzardfall!" She chided, persisting to scramble after him.
"Windclaw, please! You are not the medicine cat!"
"Blizzardfall-" Windclaw cried, then she caught herself and lowered her voice. "I need to talk to you. About something serious."
Blizzardfall wanted just to walk off, but curiousity held him tight in a grip so he whispered, "What?"
"Adderclaw."
"What's he doing now?" Blizzardfall asked, anger rising up. 12 moons ago, Adderclaw, a newly made warrior back then, had gotten their mother killed in a trap. It hadn't been his fault, but Adderclaw hadn't been sorry, and he had insisted that she should have been smarter.
"He's...he's, he's trying to kill Snowstar." Windclaw choked out.
"He wouldn't." Gasped Blizzardfall, even though he knew Adderclaw certainly would kill his brother for power.
"Well, he is." Windclaw snapped. "I heard him discussing it with a rogue called Scar."
A shiver ran down his spine as Blizzardfall saw Adderclaw sauntering up.

That night, when he couldn't sleep, Blizzardfall heard a rustle and a snap. Adderclaw was getting up, and not heading to the dirtplace. Remembering what Windclaw had said, he followed Adderclaw until he saw another cat, a light grey one.
"Scar. Have you got your band?"
"Yes Adderclaw. Do we attack?"
"No, wait until tomorrow night, it's the Gathering, there will be practically no one here."
No! I've got to tell Snowstar!

The morning startled Blizzardfall. He realised he had fallen asleep at the entrance of camp.
Adderclaw!
Blizzardfall dashed to his brother's den to warn him.

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