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A Tail of Darkness [Warrior Fanfic]{Posting Open}

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Nov 30, 2013 1:46 pm

The full moon glows above 3 clans. It is the Gathering. Your dark pelt bristles as you remember what BloodClan did to you.
These cats are just the same.
You think bitterly. Just as you are about to bound away, a small tortoiseshell apprentice sees you with their large yellow eyes.
"Hello! What clan are you in?" She squeaks happily.
"Uh, uh. FernClan!" You randomly blurt out the first thing you can see.
"Really?" She looks at you a little doubtfully, then shrugs. "I must not have met you yet. I'll ask my mentor. What's your name?" You overhear two cats growling 'Did you hear about that Lynxleap from FernClan?'
"Lynxleap!" You exclaim.
"Don't be silly! Lynxleap's a
she-cat! I can tell by your scent you're a tom." The apprentice laughs. You fake laugh with her. As she is distracted, you leap away. She spins around and bounds after you.
"Wait! WAIT!" she calls, despairing. Your heart thumps painfully in regret.

Stop it! I can't feel this way! She's like BloodClan! I can't love her.
But you love her, despite only just meeting the young she-cat. Will you ever see her again?
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FernClan

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:10 pm

FernClan
Name---Looks + Gender
Leader:
Featherstar---Light grey she-cat with amber eyes.
Deputy:
Whiskerpool---Black and dark grey tom with blue eyes.
Med Cat:
Greenbush---light brown tom with green eyes.
Med Cat apprentice:
Yewpaw [Yewstem]---white tabby she-cat with yellow eyes.
Warriors:
Lynxleap---Dark brown tabby she-cat with green-yellow eyes.
Mousebound---light brown tom with amber eyes.
Brackenstorm---golden-brown tabby tom with amber eyes.
Skymeow---Dark brown she-cat with blue eyes.
Moonshine---Blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Flamestorm---Ginger tom with green eyes.
Bushfire---Ginger tabby tom with amber eyes.
Stormblaze---Ginger tabby she-cat with yellow eyes.
Apprentices:
Tawnypaw [flash]---tortoiseshell she-cat with a few ginger flecks and large yellow eyes.
Darkpaw [fawn]---Black tabby she-cat with amber eyes.
Queens:
Puddlesplash---Silver tabby with blue eyes.
Kits:
Oakkit [tree]---brown tabby tom with blue eyes.
Deepkit [pool]---Silver tom with blue eyes.
Elders:
Thrushfeather---White tabby tom with amber eyes.

Kin, Love, Mentors
<> Siblings
>>> Parents
♥ Mates
x♥x Divorced mates
>> Adopted Parents
<<>> Adopted Siblings
--> crush
>< Crush on each other
--] Mentors

<> Stormblaze, Bushfire, Flamestorm
<> Mousebound, Brackenstorm, Greenbush
<> Skymeow, Lynxleap
<> Featherstar, Yewpaw, Thrushfeather [though only Featherstar and Yewpaw were born in the same litter.]
Puddlesplash♥Mousebound
Puddeplash, Mousebound >>> Oakkit, Deepkit
Brackenstorm --] Tawnypaw
Moonshine --] Darkpaw
Lynxleap >< Greenbush
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BreezeClan

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:11 pm

BreezeClan

Leader:
Snowstar---White tabby tom with pale blue eyes.
Deputy:
Redheart---Reddish-brown she-cat with amber eyes.
Med Cat:
Palebelly---Black tom with a white belly and yellow eyes.
Med Cat Apprentice:
N/A
Warriors:
Adderclaw---Vicious white tom with amber eyes.
Windclaw---Gentle light grey she-cat wishing to become med cat apprentice.
Blizzardfall---White tom with amber eyes.
Nighttiger---Black tabby she-cat with green eyes.
Badgerfang---Black and white patched tom.
Flowerfall---Pale ginger she-cat with green eyes.
Lilycloud---Dark grey she-cat with lighter grey flecks.
Greyfur---Grey she-cat with green eyes.
Apprentices:
Swiftpaw [leap]---Ginger tom with pale blue eyes.
Queens:
Blossomnose---Dark brown she-cat with a very pink nose.
Kits:
N/A
Elders:
Brownear---Ginger tom with brown ear and pale blue eyes.

Kin, Love, Mentors
Snowstar,Flowerfall>>>Swiftpaw
Brownear>>>Flowerfall
<>Greyfur, Lilycloud
<>Snowstar, Windclaw, Adderclaw, Blizzardfall
<>Nighttiger, Palebelly
Badgerfang♥Blossomnose
Nighttiger --] Swiftpaw
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WashClan

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:12 pm

WashClan

Leader:
Reedstar---Dark brown she-cat with green eyes.
Deputy:
Icicleclaw---White tom with pale blue eyes.
Med Cat:
Tigerpelt---Very dark ginger tabby, elderly tom.
Med Cat Apprentice:
Burtail---Kind, light brown she-cat with a spiky tail.
Warriors:
Shelltail---Dark grey she-cat with a lighter tail and yellow eyes.
Lionmane---Pale ginger tom with a fluffy neck and yellow eyes.
Hawkpelt---Vicious dark brown tom with blue eyes.
Blackeye---A sweet black tom with one blind eye who wishes to become med cat.
Redfur---Reddish-brown tom with dark ginger patches.
Apprentices:
Riverpaw [song {Hehehehe. Hehehehe. HEHEHEHE.}]---Light + dark brown tabby she-cat with blue-green eyes.
Queens:
Streamrush---Blue-grey she-cat with silver around her muzzle and blue eyes.
Kits:
Petalkit [fall]---Black tabby she-cat with purpleish-grey stripes.
Berrykit [nose]---Looks exactly like her mother [Streamrush] except with an extremely pink nose.
Plumkit [pelt]---Looks exactly like her father [Redfur]
Pinekit [stripe]---Looks exactly like his father [Redfur]
Greykit [splash]---Grey she-cat with blue eyes.
Elders:
Boulderflight---Grey tom with blue eyes
Hollyspots---Very dark brown she-cat with black spots.

Kin, Love, Mentors
Streamrush♥Redfur
Lionmane --] Riverpaw
Boulderflight, Hollyspots >>>Streamrush
Boulderflight♥Hollyspots [but no more kits]
Streamrush, Redfur >>>Petalkit, Berrykit, Plumkit, Pinekit, Greykit
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Table Of Contents

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:12 pm

Table Of Contents...
1st Post- Prologue
2nd Post- FernClan
3rd Post- BreezeClan
4th Post- WashClan
5th Post- Table of Contents
6th Post- Loners, Rogues, Kittypets
7th post [Chapter 1]
8th post {not including bumps}[Chapter 2]
9th post [Chapter 3]


Now, I wanted to tell you, this is basically about a forest near the old forest in warriors that hadn't grown yet when the cats needed to go somewhere. Three clans eventually moved there, and yeah.


Art:
All Clans shall have art, the main featured characters and all non-clan cats.
FernClan [lineart by TheCalicoTabby]
WashClan [lineart by TheCalicoTabby]
BreezeClan [lineart by TheCalicoTabby]
Shadow [Lineart by Stephajo]
Honey [Lineart by Stephajo]
More art is coming soon!
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Loners, Rogues, Kittypets

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Sun Dec 01, 2013 8:14 pm

Loners-
Shadow---Dark grey tom with blue eyes and black tail.
Honey---Golden tabby she-cat with white tummy and face. Amber eyes with black marking around them.

Rogues-
Scar---Light grey tom who has one scar down one eye, a scar across his stomach and a long, new scar across his neck.

Kittypets-
Jack---A white tom with gentle yellow eyes.
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Re: Chapter 1-

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:36 pm

Shadow brushed away the red and orange leaves aside with a brisk swish of his black tail. His dark grey pelt ruffled as he stretched in his den. His rapid pace left claw marks in the soft soil as he made his way up the hill. Shadow's heart beat thundered as he spotted the small ginger and tortoiseshell she-cat in a clearing with an older golden-brown tabby tom.
"Now, pounce on the prey like this." He heard the tom tell her gently. "Good job, you really improved since last time!" The tom gave her a nuzzle in pride.
"Thanks, Brackenstorm." The she-cat smiled gratefully.
"Come on Tawnypaw, hurry over here." Brackenstorm padded up the hill to another, larger clearing, where the smell of lots of cats hung in the air. Shadow oversaw above the clearing with watchful blue eyes for a short time until a cat padded out of den made out of brambles. She was a silver tabby with blue eyes.
"No, stay there with Darkpaw." She was scolding a brown tabby tom who was curling around her leg. "Look, Deepkit's being a good kit and staying in the nursery, isn't he?" The kit looked up at her with big, sad blue eyes. A black tabby padded out of the brambles.
"Oakkit, stay here with me." The young she-cat nudged the kit off into the den. The silver queen sniffed and the scent of Shadow wafted in the air.
"Intruder!" She hissed. Shadow scrambled down the tree and sprinted. The queen took a shortcut and leapt in front of him.
"Where are the rest of you, filthy rogue?! What were you doing, hanging above the dens, where innocent kits and elders lived?!"
"There's just me! I didn't know I was in your territory! I'm sorry!"
"Foxhearted liar! STAY AWAY FROM MY CLAN!" She spat, then clawed Shadow's pelt and padded away. Shadow gasped, feeling the blood run down his pelt in streaks.
"I'm not lying." Shadow protested weakly and then he walked out of the territory. A mouse twitched in front of him. Shadow sighed. Mice were not his choice of prey, he liked to be speedy and grab them in a flash, though you couldn't with mice. He shook the feelings away and began to stalk it.
Successful catch!
Shadow smiled, crunching hungrily on the mouse's corpse.

Back in the camp, Featherstar and Darkpaw waited. Then Puddlesplash bounded over.
"Did you bite his neck?" Darkpaw asked excitedly.
"Did you chase him off?" Featherstar inquired.
"Darkpaw, true warriors do not kill without a good reason. Featherstar, yes I chased him off."
"But technically you're a queen not a warrior." Darkpaw pointed out.
"Darkpaw..." Puddlesplash rolled her blue eyes.

Shadow arched his back as he watched the many cats file into the area. His lake-blue eyes searched for the small she-cat. But she wasn't there. Sadness crept into his thoughts. It had been two moons since the first time he saw her, but she wasn't here. Shadow crept away into his den.
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Chapter 2-

Postby Revolutionary Fairy » Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:24 pm

Tawnypaw leapt down from the huge oak tree. Oakkit watched in awe.
"That's the kind of tree you were named after." Yewpaw told him.
"I'm gonna be even bigger than that." Oakkit puffed out his chest proudly. "Aren't I, Mumma?" Puddlesplash smiled at her older son. Yewpaw heard a tiny moan from the medicine cat den.
"Poor Deepkit. I'll see if he's accidentally eaten any poisons." Yewpaw sighed and dashed in, followed closely by Puddlesplash.
"Where's Puddlesplash going?" Oakkit asked.
"To...err...check on Deepkit, because he's not feeling well." Tawnypaw replied awkwardly.
"I was wondering why he wasn't playing properly." Oakkit commented. He looked up at the tree. Without saying another word, he leapt to the trunk.
"No!" exclaimed Tawnypaw. Oakkit squealed in fright as he hung from the bark with one claw. She bounded above him, bit into the fuzzy scruff of his neck and heaved him up onto the branch.
"That was a very dangerous thing to do." Tawnypaw scolded. She then jumped to a lower down branch. "Ok, Oakkit now you do it. It isn't far."
Oakkit jumped and landed next to her. Tawnypaw bit the scruff of his neck again and lowered him to the ground, then herself vaulted to the dust.
"Do you promise never to do it again when you're a kit?" Tawnypaw asked sternly. Oakkit squeaked, and then nodded. "Good, now hurry off to the nursery, Thrushfeather wants to tell you a story."
"What about?!" Oakkit squealed before she ushered him off to the den.
"About the naughty kit called Oakkit." Tawnypaw smiled to herself, then gave Thrushfeather a wink.

When sunrise finally came, eating away at the night, Tawnypaw was already awake.
"Yewpaw?" She called, scared.
"Noooooo! NO! It can't, it just can't!" Yewpaw's yowl echoed around the medicine cave.
"Yewpaw!" Tawnypaw cried, rushing over. But Yewpaw was still asleep, thrashing in her dreams -or nightmares.
"Please! Stonewood! It can't happen!" She wailed.
Suddenly a pair of annoyed green eyes zoomed in on Tawnypaw.
"What are you doing here?" Greenbush grumbled.
"I heard Yewpaw screeching her head off, so I came over. Is she OK?"
"I hope so..."
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