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Should there be a sequel? SEQUEL IS UP! :D

Yes!
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Tue Oct 14, 2014 4:02 pm

      amg thank you skamp! It really means a lot ;3
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby tricks » Wed Oct 15, 2014 3:10 am

about halfway through reading <3 <3 excellent job

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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Fri Oct 17, 2014 5:20 am

LuckySmarts wrote:
about halfway through reading <3 <3 excellent job


      thank youuuu, means a lot <333
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Sat Oct 18, 2014 5:01 pm

      Okay! I'm really happy to see all the support from you guys <3
      I'll be working on the sequel in the meantime, thanks ;3
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Postby Meweep » Mon Oct 27, 2014 6:49 am

I don't know how I just found this. ouo I love this so much, your a big inspiration to me. c:
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Mon Oct 27, 2014 10:59 am

      Ahhh thank you~
      give's me plenty of self-esteem and happiness that I might be helping others to write
      such a nice comment, thanks again ;3
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Fri Nov 07, 2014 7:51 pm

      Still trying to figure out a proper plot for the sequel
      mostly just making it up as I go along x3
      ALSO
      here's some amazingly adorable fanart of kree by Lady.Spoopy
      i luv it so much
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby the 'them' of evil » Sat Nov 08, 2014 5:18 am

i cant wait for moar
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❝❝i want to be someone like you
i want to be someone that feels very "me"
if i want to, i can just go and do it
but then...
would that really be me?


The way I am...
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oh hi c:
im sun, so call me that kthxbye
pronouns are she/her and i feel heartbroken
i have an obsession with hetalia too.
and many other shows.
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❝❝...someone
like me is better off dead
where someone like me being alive,
brings sadness to tens of thousands
of people!
and no one wants me:
i wish that's the kind of world it was!
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i love to chat
with people <3
i like;

hetalia, supernatural,
black butler,
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❝❝if by just wiping me away,
hundreds of millions of people
rejoiced!
and no one held hatred
for anything,

then I reject such a happy thing!
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OTPs;
gerita, ameripan,
reigisa, ermin


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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:14 pm

      Thank you so so much
      I'll definitely make improvements to the sequel
      I'll make sure it's not as hard to follow as this
      also slightly longer chapters :D
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Re: Kree. [ please comment/critique ] [ finished ]

Postby Asherwy » Sat Nov 08, 2014 11:49 pm

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