~The Puppet Masters~
Well, I had this idea about these puppet master things and decided to make a comic of it. However, I want the plot to be good and not fall apart at the first page. So I decided to post here and ask people on what they think, before I spend my time and energy to draw it out. So please feel free to comment on what you think, when I have my ideas down and posted.
the.characters
~Shilling Menso
rank.puppet master
gender.male
description.~wip
~Haana Gloum
rank.human
gender.female
description.~wip
~Enther Sciap
rank.puppet trainee
gender.female
description.~wip
~Lucifer Adimn
rank.demon
gender.male
description.~wip
~Seeth Maknider
rank.puppet master
gender.female
description.~wip
~Hack
rank.antagonist
gender.unkown
description.unknown
the.plot
The world's crime rate is at an all time high and it's just getting worse, a small group of teens, that aren't taken over by the hand of time formed a small group called the Puppet Masters thinking it would be fun to fight crime together. However, the hand of time isn't kind when corruption infiltrates their little group and it just isn't human anymore. And the puppets aren't just inadiment objects anymore. Will you come up to the task.
~Prologue
Snow was falling in the city of New Linn, Two police officers were on patrol, with a fully equipped belt and a strap of ammo around their chest and large AR-15 guns. "The city never sleeps... Does it?" a police officer said. The second police officer nodded and said,"But, have you herd the rumors?" the first police officer shook his head and said =,"About what?" The second police officer leaned up against the cold brick wall and said,"Well, there have been reports that a colt of some sort has been about the area, doing the job of the law enforcement," the first police officer widened his eyes and said,"No kidding," the second police officer responded,"Yeah. But, there has been reports that this colt is a tag team of not just humans. But, inanimate objects and demons. I don't know if the rumors are true, but I've noticed that it's been a lot quieter around here. The first Police officer said jokingly,"Well, don't jinx it. I like it quieter. Less work for me." Just as he said that a large missile attacked the building behind them causing a large explosion and blowing the building to bits and rubble the boom created was so loud it caused the all the windows on that street to shatter and car alarms to engage, even cause the windows on the cars to shatter. Both the police officers got into ready stance when they saw a shadow appear from the flames. It was a tall man that had a scar across his face, he looked like an average attacker that they normally saw around there, the first police man fired at the man and the man waved his hand and a person out of site shot the bullet mid air, missing the man. The man laughed and said,"It's useless. I'm taking this city and there is nothing you can do." The second police officer laughed and said,"Why do you want this city. It's not worth your time." The man raised his finger about to answer until he was stopped by a puppet thrown in front of him by a mysterious person walking down the street. The man laughed,"What is this? An ugly puppet?" He laughed and finished,"Kill him." The puppet moved as the mysterious person in the street moved his hand. A string was connected to the puppets hand blocking the bullets that were fired at the person the man soon stopped smiling and said,"What kind of person hides behind the cloth of a puppet? The mysterious person lifted up his head and all the people could see from his eyes was one glowing red eye and the puppet stood up and hissed at the man and it said in what seemed like a recorded message,"The kind that will put out the flames of your soul." The man felt angry at the puppet and its master and said,"Try to stop a missile." And a missile fired from what seemed like no where and was headed strait at them. The mysterious person lifted his hand and came out from the shadows his red eye was no longer glowing and the puppet smiled when the boy smiled and the puppet swallowed the missile. Then the boy snapped his fingers causing the puppet to snap it's fingers making the puppet breath fire scorching the man. The man was astonished and then doubled over in pain and said,"W-who are you?" The boy smiled and said,"A Puppet Master." Then disappeared.
~chapter.1
~wip
Well, I had this idea about these puppet master things and decided to make a comic of it. However, I want the plot to be good and not fall apart at the first page. So I decided to post here and ask people on what they think, before I spend my time and energy to draw it out. So please feel free to comment on what you think, when I have my ideas down and posted.
the.characters
~Shilling Menso
rank.puppet master
gender.male
description.~wip
~Haana Gloum
rank.human
gender.female
description.~wip
~Enther Sciap
rank.puppet trainee
gender.female
description.~wip
~Lucifer Adimn
rank.demon
gender.male
description.~wip
~Seeth Maknider
rank.puppet master
gender.female
description.~wip
~Hack
rank.antagonist
gender.unkown
description.unknown
the.plot
The world's crime rate is at an all time high and it's just getting worse, a small group of teens, that aren't taken over by the hand of time formed a small group called the Puppet Masters thinking it would be fun to fight crime together. However, the hand of time isn't kind when corruption infiltrates their little group and it just isn't human anymore. And the puppets aren't just inadiment objects anymore. Will you come up to the task.
~Prologue
Snow was falling in the city of New Linn, Two police officers were on patrol, with a fully equipped belt and a strap of ammo around their chest and large AR-15 guns. "The city never sleeps... Does it?" a police officer said. The second police officer nodded and said,"But, have you herd the rumors?" the first police officer shook his head and said =,"About what?" The second police officer leaned up against the cold brick wall and said,"Well, there have been reports that a colt of some sort has been about the area, doing the job of the law enforcement," the first police officer widened his eyes and said,"No kidding," the second police officer responded,"Yeah. But, there has been reports that this colt is a tag team of not just humans. But, inanimate objects and demons. I don't know if the rumors are true, but I've noticed that it's been a lot quieter around here. The first Police officer said jokingly,"Well, don't jinx it. I like it quieter. Less work for me." Just as he said that a large missile attacked the building behind them causing a large explosion and blowing the building to bits and rubble the boom created was so loud it caused the all the windows on that street to shatter and car alarms to engage, even cause the windows on the cars to shatter. Both the police officers got into ready stance when they saw a shadow appear from the flames. It was a tall man that had a scar across his face, he looked like an average attacker that they normally saw around there, the first police man fired at the man and the man waved his hand and a person out of site shot the bullet mid air, missing the man. The man laughed and said,"It's useless. I'm taking this city and there is nothing you can do." The second police officer laughed and said,"Why do you want this city. It's not worth your time." The man raised his finger about to answer until he was stopped by a puppet thrown in front of him by a mysterious person walking down the street. The man laughed,"What is this? An ugly puppet?" He laughed and finished,"Kill him." The puppet moved as the mysterious person in the street moved his hand. A string was connected to the puppets hand blocking the bullets that were fired at the person the man soon stopped smiling and said,"What kind of person hides behind the cloth of a puppet? The mysterious person lifted up his head and all the people could see from his eyes was one glowing red eye and the puppet stood up and hissed at the man and it said in what seemed like a recorded message,"The kind that will put out the flames of your soul." The man felt angry at the puppet and its master and said,"Try to stop a missile." And a missile fired from what seemed like no where and was headed strait at them. The mysterious person lifted his hand and came out from the shadows his red eye was no longer glowing and the puppet smiled when the boy smiled and the puppet swallowed the missile. Then the boy snapped his fingers causing the puppet to snap it's fingers making the puppet breath fire scorching the man. The man was astonished and then doubled over in pain and said,"W-who are you?" The boy smiled and said,"A Puppet Master." Then disappeared.
~chapter.1
~wip
