{ INKLINGS } LOCK! NEW THREAD

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby ryan! » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:14 pm

keyitt. wrote:Please can someone check out my Wattpad and tell me how my Raven Killer story is going . ^^ thanks !

@ Raining Rose

It's going good I like it ^^ . Your personality is kinda like mine ^^


Er mer gersh! (Oh why gosh) Ty. :) I will check out your Wattpad! :D
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby ryan! » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:15 pm

Raining☁Rose wrote:Username: Raining.Rose
What we will call you: Rose
Will you critique other's work?: Possibly
Links to your story if you have any: I have no stories, yet.
Anything you want us to know?: I love writing, and I can help you get muse. :)


Repost because... reasons.
No. My name is not on the list. Duh.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Mercury.Muses » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:17 pm

I have another writing idea! And I've read a lot, but when I go to write a prologue and tell myself to write at least 2 pages, I get a 4 sentenced paragraph. Maybe I can make my stories around one or two chapters?
The idea is - An orphan boy has been taken/adopted by a fancy lady. Her children have moved away and she has began to grow a tad old, she decides to adopt an orphan and takes home *boy's name* from there, starts a story of hatred for her from the boy, to a love of the life she granted him.

I was thinking about having it towards those old europe times and the boy be around 7-8 and at the end he's almost an adult and she dies from old age and he realises how much he cared for her because he'll try to get away all the time first.

Sound like a good one? It just popped into my head xD

I might make this one a long one like a short book story but I'll practice short stories first.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby ryan! » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:19 pm

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby tuesdaysart » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:20 pm

iceshimmer [origin] wrote:
rothbart. wrote:Okay guys, question time.

How many important characters do you think an author can kill in one book/series without it being ridiculous? Some authors never let a single character die, despite all odds, and others... Well, others wrote Game of Thrones.


O.O if it's a novel about a girl going to Paris to study fashion and not going to the Captiol and fighting for her life, deaths aren't exactly necessary.
Sure, I loved "The Outsiders" and "The Fault in Our Stars", but they made me sad and I need happy stories or I get depressed.
I found errors in my fan fic, but I'm in too much pain and I'm too tired to correct them.
The story was supposed to be in Cali's POV, but I can't write first person and I love the feeling of being a god who can read all of the characters thoughts and secrets.
When "Auntie Flow" decides to leave me be again, I'll try to not be lazy due to school and utter pain (though I'm proud of Chapter 8).
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby watermelon. » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:21 pm

RunningRace wrote:I have another writing idea! And I've read a lot, but when I go to write a prologue and tell myself to write at least 2 pages, I get a 4 sentenced paragraph. Maybe I can make my stories around one or two chapters?
The idea is - An orphan boy has been taken/adopted by a fancy lady. Her children have moved away and she has began to grow a tad old, she decides to adopt an orphan and takes home *boy's name* from there, starts a story of hatred for her from the boy, to a love of the life she granted him.

I was thinking about having it towards those old europe times and the boy be around 7-8 and at the end he's almost an adult and she dies from old age and he realises how much he cared for her because he'll try to get away all the time first.

Sound like a good one? It just popped into my head xD

I might make this one a long one like a short book story but I'll practice short stories first.


It sounds like a good story line you have, but it sounds kind of typical, you know what I mean. Maybe some sort of plot twist? Maybe the lady's kid could come back for some reason- like they had a divorce so they didn't have a house or something, and then the lady's child takes in the kid?

I don't know. :lol:
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby avaria » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:24 pm

Raining☁Rose wrote:i'm a new member!
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welcome!

blarghh, i want to start reading but i have to force myself to do so, i'm watching this horror show and it's just so captivating, haha. ;w;
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Mercury.Muses » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:24 pm

Yea it does sound classic xD or maybe it could be a child comes home with kids and the kids go out to play and drag an orphan back that they take in? xDDD "MOMMY, LOOK WHAT WE FOUND!"
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Mercury.Muses » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:24 pm

Yea it does sound classic xD or maybe it could be a child comes home with kids and the kids go out to play and drag an orphan back that they take in? xDDD "MOMMY, LOOK WHAT WE FOUND!"
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby watermelon. » Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:29 pm

Haha that would be funny! "Can we keep it??"
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@RunningRace, I noticed that was double posted- no I'm not mad, but I was wondering if you had any thunderstorms around you? My internet is all being dumb so I have double posted a lot lately XD
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